That's pretty cool! It's always good to try some different things sometimes ^ _ ^
Judging by the pic, I believe it's an observation/natural drawing? If positive i'd suggest you to try making the lineart less solid, mainly where there's more light, it helps building a more natural volume. Just suggesting cuz you said "critique" on the title haha, it's cool tho!
Good luck;
That's pretty cool! It's always good to try some different things sometimes ^ _ ^
Judging by the pic, I believe it's an observation/natural drawing? If positive i'd suggest you to try making the lineart less solid, mainly where there's more light, it helps building a more natural volume. Just suggesting cuz you said "critique" on the title haha, it's cool tho!
Good luck;
I love traditional art, its always nice to see an observational drawing.
Something to note about this drawing would be the shadows on the leaves and vase (?) on the right.
The light seems to be coming from the right side to the left, so the left sides should be darker, and the left side should be lighter.
You should also try blending the strokes! Just rub your finger pretty hard on the pencil and it will have a more natural look for drawings like this
keep it up