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My town is getting more and more designed, so I'd like some more suggestions on design! I'm currently looking for a snooty villager to give me more PWP suggestions, but in the meanwhile, I'd love to hear feedback!

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camp sign at this link
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I'm working on flowers in my town so please don't mind the absolute mess of flowers in my town... ;A;

MY DA: 5600-3599-4924


I will 100% visit your dream if you visit mine~ I'll give as extensive of a review as I possibly can!
 
As a thanks for the many drawings you've done for me, have a review!
My dream code is in my signature under the Extra spoiler if you'd like to stop by. It's a huge work in progress though as I've only recently started setting it up. Feel free to suggest some PWPs for empty spots in my town c: as I haven't really sorted out anything like that yet. (And ignore my lack of flowers as I don't want them to be ruined when a villager moves in but they're coming)
Just going to toss it into a spoiler...

First off I love your choice of paths. They don't stand out like some paths and look exceptionally nice beside bushes. I envy the placement of your lighthouse, as it's exactly where I would've placed one in mine but then Kid Cat went ahead and moved in right there.
Your cafe placement is also lovely. I made a mistake with mine and wished I had chosen a spot overlooking the ocean.
I love your idea for the 'woods' and that sign is absolutely lovely. I love how how you have the police station right beside the train station, I don't think I've ever seen that done before and it really compliments your town as it matches the actually train station building (similar wood).
The bamboo surrounding the zen area, campsite and Kyle's home really looks nice. There's plenty of times where people have bamboo just randomly in areas for the purpose of harvesting it but you've made yours look quite nice and really a part of your town.
I wonder whether the diagonal bridge is there for pure convenience or if you're planning on getting rid of it/adding to that area. I didn't realise there was a third bridge until I looked down at the map for your houses location.
This is to do with my own personal opinion but I would suggest aligning your fountain with the PWP below it (not sure what it's called) so when you walk under it you end up in the middle of the front of the fountain, I think it would look nicer but it still looks lovely as it is.
Are the shells going down to the beach meant to be there?
Noh's house:
Before I even entered the house I was looking forward to it. I love the flowers around it (huge love for purple) and the exterior of the house is absolutely beautiful! Great combination there.
I'm going to go ahead and assume you are cleaning up the perfect fruit and what not on the ground and are using it as storage space.
I love what you did with the minimalist series! The items you have set out on the tables etc really give it a nice 'homey' feel.
I'm not really sure about the sleek room. It feels like it's missing something...
Lovely collections of balloons you've got in the basement haha. Wish I could run through them all and they weren't actually attached to the ground though that's impossible.
Felix's house:
In my opinion the roof looks out of place. Maybe try a darker brown to match the door or a pink?
Oh wow. Already amazed by the first room. I love how you utilise the middle of the room and use it to your advantage.
Campus room looks a but lonely. Hopefully you're working on decorating it with items like your other rooms.
The rooms look like they're off to a good start, keep up the good work!
Overall I really like your town. Sure, your flowers are quite random but you're working on it. There's a few parts I'd probably adjust but that's due to my own personal tastes. The only major thing that bothered me was that diagonal bridge apart from that it's a lovely little town you've got there.
 
so sorry this took such a long time! I haven't been able to play very often...

Wow!! that's a wonderful path choice! I think it really works well with what you have right now . I think you stopped path-ing at Kid Cat's house... maybe that was intentional but it does seem like there wasn't enough space to put the edge pieces.

I love the sleek room in the house by the cliff! It really matches the wallpaper you chose for it, and the dino models look really nice on all the furniture! I think it's a chic/modern/slightly steampunk? (idkkk sorry) look and I definitely think that harmony comes from using the non-sleek series wallpaper.

Mhm... that area of zig-zag cherry trees... I love how it looks! Also, the batches of fruit trees look great too! Can't wait to see exactly what you end up doing with the area~ They look like a great transition piece into the camp-area. Each fruit cluster is spread across your town and really help add color to the places you put them.

The Pave room looks nice! Your character was inside the house when I visited~ Love her outfit! I'm not sure if you'll keep it this way or change it, but I think whatever you do with the space will be cool.

I see hybrids on the beach! Can't wait to see what you end up doing with them!

I love how you distributed the trees around the gingerbread house! The bushes and clusters look simultaneously spontaneous and organized... if that makes any sense? And the gingerbread house is so cute! Exactly what I expected to see in that first room. Blown away by the cool combination of blue astro+ aquarium. I never even imagined that combination, and wow, it looks perfect! I might even suggest you move that into the sleek house, just for thematic consistency. Very cute what you did with the egg set! It's so bright and cute here! You did a fantastic job utilizing the rainbow screen and the yoshi eggs~ I think the princess set is a great choice for the left room. It'll definitely turn out fantastic, so fairy tale! pinkified rococo set looks great! love how the roses fit with the series~ Perhaps you might want to do something with the center of the room, create some closed off spaces or sections. Cool theme in the basement! Is that the alpine series remade with different cloth? It looks intriguing! The new pattern works well with the lace wallpaper~

All your bridges were on point! Maybe you'd like to use topiaries too, but I think once you get your dreamies and set down some more flowers, it will become easier to make stylistic choices. I think a windmill will look great when paired with the path you chose.


Hope this review was helpful!
 
Thank you so much for this! I'll take your advice into consideration and I actually love your idea of swapping the astro room out into the other house. Will just have to catch a shark on my other character and expand the house a bit more first <:
Kid Cats house is in a tight spot I originally had a path just leading up to his house without it being circled around but it felt a bit isolated there so I'm waiting to decorate that space up before changing it back to the small path (he just had to build his house right where barely anything is)
The Pave room is temporary that's why it's a bit bare at the moment. I'm planning on doing something with the rococo room and am considering swapping it to another house and then making that room a small cafe or library. I'm leaning towards setting up more say theme based rooms with those basic sets in mind. Yes that is the alpine set in the basement I didn't like the flooring for the set so ended up switching the entire thing up.
Thanks again! I love your idea for the windmill and topiaries, I just unlocked them (not sure if I have the option for a windmill yet) but I'll definitely start thinking about the plans for it c:
 
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