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jessicat_197
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Took apush last year but my teacher was a joke and I don't ever remember reading about those two. Hope you find help soon! Or if no one helps what are you struggling in? Does your teacher et you write a concluding sentence instead of a paragraph. My ap English teacher said it sounds better that way.
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Is this supposed to be a comparison essay? I haven't written one of these in a while, but you might better show the differences by using an alternating method instead of the block method, which seems to be what you're doing so far. Also what's the essay question...? Just compare the opinions of these two? If you're having a hard time thinking of what to write, I'd suggest you write up a list of differences and similarities before writing the actual essay.
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Eldin
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You seem like you're doing fine so far, what problem are you having with the contrast? I don't even know the topic but based off of what you've written so far, the glaring difference is that one's idea of God is vengeful and uses fear to motivate his followers, whereas the others sees God as more of a guiding force, and compassionate towards humans. As for the similarities, they both dedicate their lives to god (although in different ways) and both believe that He lifts us up and makes us better (either because we're useless without Him via Edwards, or because he is compassionate via Bradstreet).
As for the conclusion, I would probably make a statement about how two people who are so devoted to the same God do not see Him the same way at all. And maybe question whose devotion is more sound - the one who practices due to fear of damnation, or the one who believes because they truly believe God is good, etc. And that throughout, both of them seem to sacrifice their own self in God's presence - Edwards saying that humans are basically nothing without Him, and Bradstreet saying that her worldly possessions mean nothing and that nothing really matters in comparison to someday ascending to heaven.
Anyways, these are all just ideas, but I wish you luck! c:
But yes, as for the actual essay, you should do it yourself. It's okay to get help but I wouldn't get somebody to actually write the thing for you. It defeats the purpose, and like others have said, they might find out you plagiarized it.
As for the conclusion, I would probably make a statement about how two people who are so devoted to the same God do not see Him the same way at all. And maybe question whose devotion is more sound - the one who practices due to fear of damnation, or the one who believes because they truly believe God is good, etc. And that throughout, both of them seem to sacrifice their own self in God's presence - Edwards saying that humans are basically nothing without Him, and Bradstreet saying that her worldly possessions mean nothing and that nothing really matters in comparison to someday ascending to heaven.
Anyways, these are all just ideas, but I wish you luck! c:
But yes, as for the actual essay, you should do it yourself. It's okay to get help but I wouldn't get somebody to actually write the thing for you. It defeats the purpose, and like others have said, they might find out you plagiarized it.
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