The True DS Player

[UltraByte]

I will post chapters from now and then... I have just recently started typing this again.

CH. 1

 

[UltraByte]

CH. 2

Inside my room, I sat on my computer chair and turned on the DS. The dinging noise sounded like a bell for the gods. I sighed and smiled. I wanted to change the stuff first, so I clicked on the options button with the stylus I just pulled out. I clicked on the green button and onto the name button. The name in was

 

[JJRamone2]

NICE! I cant wait 'till chapter 3. I bet your gonna be in, like, a DS world. Oh, I could write these. JK.

 

[UltraByte]

I'll post it now.

CH. 3
I fell through a white tunnel. I looked around me and saw a lot of zeros and ones. A little bit more down, the white turned into grey. I fell more, and it turned black. I couldn

 

[JJRamone2]

I knew it!!! BTW, these are really good, I cant wait till 4.

 

[Mino]

I knew it!!! BTW, these are really good, I cant wait till 4.

I agree. Nice job on this.

 

[UltraByte]

CH. 4

The first thing I noticed in the town was that everyone looked like regular people. They all seemed normal. I looked around and saw one of my friends. I was shocked and walked up to him. His name was Nick, but luckily I knew his DS name.

 

[UltraByte]

I'm still working on CH 6, so I'll post CH 5 sometime after that.

 

[UltraByte]

CH. 5

I woke up.

 

[Mino]

Oh noes... He's going to get beat up.

 

[UltraByte]

CH. 6

I appeared at Assault Cradle, the largest of the three arenas. I looked down to see myself in no armor and weaponless. I looked around to find myself near the health spots. I ran over to the health to pick it up, but didn

 

[UltraByte]

CH 7

I suddenly woke up. I looked around and saw Ness looking at me.

 

[Mino]

Nice job with Chapters 7 and 6, too! :eh:

 

[UltraByte]

I'll post 8 after I make CH 9.

 

[Mino]

I'll post 8 after I make CH 9.

OK, cool. *waits*

 

[UltraByte]

The much waited Chapter 8!!!!! *screams from audience*



CH. 8

I appeared at a watery place, with islands all over. I looked around, and then looked at my scanner noticing a time meter on it. I sighed and heard a loud voice say

 

[Mino]

Oh noes! Poor Hobo shouldn't have taken the DS in the first place.

 

[Propaganda Man]

A great fan fic! I have only read the first 3 chaptrs so far, I will read the rest later!

 

[UltraByte]

Thanks. I will post 9 when I finish 10.

Is this the longest Fan-Fic posted on here so far? Just wondering.

 

[Furry Sparks]

i need to read chapter 9!