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Hello! I have been feeling bored with my game recently, so it's time I collected more badges and inspirations for my town! Criticism on people's towns will depend on my mood and how busy I am, so.. if I give you a bad review, come back again in a week (and make sure you updated your dream town!) and I'll hopefully give you a longer and better review! Sorry if it takes a while to get back to you! :3

So.. post your dream addresses below!
 
I'll let you take a look at my town. :3

4900-2179-2720

But let it be known:
-Iggly ruined a path, so that's why the area around his house seems ... unused. Waiting for him to move.
-Goldie kinda ruined an area too. Both of these people need to leave my town. :(
-I have put 0 effort into my house. Literally none. Its just a mess of crap that I just needed to drop somewhere.
-Bank's house is a nice little bank, though, so feel free to check that house out. :3
-There are a few gaps here and there I'll need to fill with more flowers, but I'm too lazy to get those done now.
-The beach is where I store my spare flowers... nothing special there, either.

Other than that, I would love any ideas or criticism.
 
dream of my town!!

5800-2701-1467

still under construction around the campsite and to the right of my house.
 
I'll let you take a look at my town. :3

4900-2179-2720

But let it be known:
-Iggly ruined a path, so that's why the area around his house seems ... unused. Waiting for him to move.
-Goldie kinda ruined an area too. Both of these people need to leave my town. :(
-I have put 0 effort into my house. Literally none. Its just a mess of crap that I just needed to drop somewhere.
-Bank's house is a nice little bank, though, so feel free to check that house out. :3
-There are a few gaps here and there I'll need to fill with more flowers, but I'm too lazy to get those done now.
-The beach is where I store my spare flowers... nothing special there, either.

Other than that, I would love any ideas or criticism.

Alright, so the first thing I noticed was that your town is really crowded. There's a lot of flowers everywhere, but they seem to be bunched up everywhere around the Town Hall area. Yes, it looks good to surround a building with flowers, but not too much, at least not the same color in my opinion. I never really liked the fence - I'm referring to the one behind the Town Hall - because it clashes with whatever theme someone is trying to go for. You should try chopping down some trees and arranging them around the paths and chop down the ones that are.. well, out of place. I saw around Bank's house that there are a lot of trees. It looks crowded. I suggest, well.. whatever you're doing there, I think you should try making a mini forest there. Maybe put in a log bench, put mushrooms everywhere, cedar saplings and regular saplings?

I'm still wondering about your placement of flowers around your town. Is there a pattern? I understand what you're trying at - red, yellow, red, yellow with different flowers. But it still looks off. I suggest this: maybe, this is just an example - maybe red rose, yellow cosmo, red lily, yellow rose, red cosmo, yellow lily and so on? Something like that? I never said it would look good, but it sounds like a nifty experiment to be trying out.

What you said about your villagers being annoying and taking up your path space? I completely understand. Fang did the same to my perfect path and moved in front of Kitt's house. But I made it work out and made the path around the house and it actually looks better than it was before.

I see that you haven't added much bamboo in your town. It really is annoying to tend to, but it's worth it, definitely. May I ask what theme you're trying at? Maybe put in public works projects that apply to that theme?

And.. that's about it! Feel free to come back for another review. :3 In a week. ^^

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dream of my town!!

5800-2701-1467

still under construction around the campsite and to the right of my house.

4 words. More bushes, more trees. One thing I noticed in your town was the fact that a lot of public works projects are in the middle of the path. Some public works projects I could understand, like the TV screen, the yellow bench, and the Reset Center, but the fire hydrant and the do not enter sign aren't necessary.

Also, in the place of the flower field of golden roses, maybe you could include a topiary garden with more of those fountains. I think that would suit your town with all the flowers everywhere.

Anywayyy, bushes and trees could benefit you a lot. I see that trees are clustered around a few areas, but everywhere else could use some, too.

The empty spots of your town could use more modern-looking public works projects. Just a heads up. ^^

Sorry it's so short, you could ask for another review tomorrow.
 
Come to mine (: I have a lot of flowers that I don't know what to do with,Sylvia is in the middle of the way and the left room of my Mayor's house is kind of a mess ' v ';; Oh! And the second character is my brother's, but he could actually care less about ac kkkk

DC: 4900-3447-3604
 
Hi, Please come to mine,It is still a massive WIP but I would love some feedback on it!:)
Dream code: 6300-2839-5269 :)
 
Mines in my signature, I was missing pwps in the most recent version but I'll update a completely finished version soon, hope you enjoy my fairytale themed town c:
 
i'd love some feedback on my town! i'm thinking of resetting. DA is 4100-4166-4561!

please note that Rhonda and Aurora moved into the middle of my paths and i tried my best to fix it. Also, the grass around Rhonda's house is bad because muffy lived there and then moved, only to have Rhonda move into virtually the same spot. Gaston and Spork are two villagers i'm currently trying to get rid of and that's why there are no paths leading to their houses. Chadder is moving away in a few days and-again- moved into the middle of a path.
 
I'll update mine again tomorrow for you to come visit so wait till then. It's just today there are festivities going on, so I don't want to update it and leave path holes.
 
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