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Shotput the Cat

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I drew it in pencil, then colored it in using Photoshop. Not my best work, though.


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time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
 
JJRAMONE2 said:
time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
Dude. I drew this last year, when I sucked! That's why it's so bad. And as I said, it's not my best work.
 
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
Dude. I drew this last year, when I sucked! That's why it's so bad. And as I said, it's not my best work.
just trying to help you for your next drawings.
 
JJRAMONE2 said:
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
Dude. I drew this last year, when I sucked! That's why it's so bad. And as I said, it's not my best work.
just trying to help you for your next drawings.
Well, okay. I don't draw him anymore... I draw Takeo and Jackson...
 
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
Dude. I drew this last year, when I sucked! That's why it's so bad. And as I said, it's not my best work.
just trying to help you for your next drawings.
Well, okay. I don't draw him anymore... I draw Takeo and Jackson...
kool, you sould post them soon. (not sprites)
 
JJRAMONE2 said:
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
Dude. I drew this last year, when I sucked! That's why it's so bad. And as I said, it's not my best work.
just trying to help you for your next drawings.
Well, okay. I don't draw him anymore... I draw Takeo and Jackson...
kool, you sould post them soon. (not sprites)
Okay. I'll draw one tonight if I can. Of course, I have to color it in with Photoshop... So it'll take some time.
 
JJRamone... I really doubt that you could draw something very well yourself, so don't be so quick to criticize.
 
PIKMIN042 said:
JJRamone... I really doubt that you could draw something very well yourself, so don't be so quick to criticize.
there is a fine line between critisising and critiquing, I was trying to help. But you are right, I shouldn't insult other's drawings.
 
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
UltraByte said:
JJRAMONE2 said:
time for critiquing(sp)!!!

First of all, the top of his head is WAY bigger that the rest of his head and body make it smaller along with the ears.

2- where do the chains go? They just go into a portal of blackness is seems

3-mouths a little to trianguar try doing it like this:
smiley2.bmp


4-the fur on his belly is lopsided you should change that

5-One foot is bigger than the other and the shoe on it is deformed.

6- the arms get really thin around where they go into the gloves

7- His legs are REALLY short I mean REALLY short you should make them longer

8- His shorts are way to high up.
Dude. I drew this last year, when I sucked! That's why it's so bad. And as I said, it's not my best work.
just trying to help you for your next drawings.
Well, okay. I don't draw him anymore... I draw Takeo and Jackson...
kool, you sould post them soon. (not sprites)
Okay. I'll draw one tonight if I can. Of course, I have to color it in with Photoshop... So it'll take some time.
kool, cant wait to see them!
 
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