School help pls

[JellyLu]

Hello~

If this isn't allowed, I'm sorry ;; I was searching for the HW help thread but it seems to be dead and I don't want to get in trouble for "reviving a dead thread"... plus I've seen other help posts so I'm gonna go ahead and post this ;;

Can some people read an essay for me and give me their opinions on how to improve? It's worth soooo very much of my grade and I don't want to suck. The in class peer review was bogus (the girl didn't say much)... so I'm hoping to get more input here since forum peeps have been helpful to me in the past~

A brief summary of what had to be done is that this is a critique of a research paper. I had to explain the experiment about frogs, find a component to critique using a second paper, and give my own ideas to improve the research ALL in a 3 page limit ;;

If anyone is willing to read and give their input, I can PM the link. Any help is appreciated ;;

If you can read the paper and understand what each experiment did without being confused by my wording, great ;u; That's what I'm aiming for


Again, please let me know if this isn't allowed. I don't want to break rules
Ty ;;

 

[Fleshy]

I'd be more than willing to read it and offer my input.


As a side-note, I think it'd be more than okay to bump a thread such as the homework thread since it's not outdated or anything.

 

[JellyLu]

I'd be more than willing to read it and offer my input.


As a side-note, I think it'd be more than okay to bump a thread such as the homework thread since it's not outdated or anything.

Ah ok ty ^^ I'll PM you

and yeah you're probably right, I just wasn't sure orz

 

[SilkSpectre]

A hw thread? How awesome. I'd make one. I'm a teacher and editor so I'd be happy to help anyone.