Reviewing towns!

[Akina]

Hello, I'd adore some feedback for my town, and would be more than happy to provide the same for any who visit my town. I've been working really hard on it lately, it was in a lot of disarray before, and I've just laid a new path I've made. Please let me know what you think, thank you! <3 4400-3491-6751

Hi! I've visited your town now!

Paths - Your paths are a bit confusing. I didn't really get which one to follow and which one to not follow. I didn't really get why there was some houses connected to the paths, but some wasn't? The pattern on the paths are cute, but it was just difficult to find a way around your town without using the map But it did seem to work better on the big island with the town hall.
Trees - The trees are placed really great! They all seem to be in some kind of system, and I really like that!
Flowers - Your flowers are amazing! You have a lot of hybrids and you have used them well! I could spend so much time just walking around and watching all your flowers!
PWP's - I really like your fairytale streetlights near one of the bridges! And the picnic blanket. It's so cute! And the illuminated clock at the townhall. It's really awesome and fits in soooo well! And I really liked the bamboo area near the fountain! It's cute

In general - Your town seemed a bit confusing in the beginning. The many different paths and the fact that they were all over, was really hard to figure out. But with a little help from the map I got around I really like your town, it has a nice touch! Especially all the work with the trees, bushes and flowers! It's so amazing! And the PWP's are nicely placed There was a bridge near the river, only one space from the edge, but it works
Are you going for a fairytale-themed town? Or what are your ideas behind your town?

- - - Post Merge - - -

I'm not a good reviewster, but the first thing I noticed is how silly Deirdre looks in that fishing vest! I miss that silly girl.

I was worried about the big blank space in the middle, but it looks like a nice park. Following around to the illuminated arch, I was a little confused as to how to get to Merry's house. I really wanted to see the path above the arch connect to the path to her house. Walking across grass just seems wrong to me.

I like all of the greenery on the eastern half of the map, but the western half seems to be a little bare of trees. I feel like it's getting down to nitpicking, but I would like to see the path between Ankha's house and the cafe connect, just so I can get to it from either side. I'm not sure about the plot next to Beau's, but I think illuminated heart does sound good. Since he's the laziest creature on earth, maybe a hammock would be good there for him.

The main thing I absolutely need is a bridge to the western neighborhood from the park area. Maybe you're leaving a bridge off to get PWP requests, but I'd need a more direct way to get to my buddy Skye's house. It looks like you're planning something along those lines with the path that goes off to the river from the 7x10 space. I don't know what to do with it, but I see you had a secondary character's house there. If you want a secondary character, that seems like a good space.

If you want to review mine, I would like it to be Mirage. 5700-3256-1328

Hi! Thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot to me! And I have now connected the path from Anhka to the caf? And yeah, I am hoping for some suggestions on a fairytale bridge, before I build the 3rd bridge. I'd really like to thank you for the idea with the hammock! Of course! Now he just has to suggest it haha!
And Deirdre really does look silly I have to do something.

Now to your town!
First of all - FAUNA! You are so lucky to have her *_*
Paths - I like your paths! They are really cool and fits in great with the rest of the town.
Trees - Your trees around the resetting center and the fountain are great. It's really nice that you got a pattern or a system to follow It makes it look more connected with the rest of the town.
Flowers - I love the area with pink and white roses. It's a great combination and it looks especially great with the illuminated heart! The flowers, trees and bushes near Flora's house and the town hall just looks amazing! The peaches goes together great with the pink and white roses!
PWP's - The illuminated heart at Fauna's house is amazing! It looks so good together with the roses! The "secret" log bench by the flower arch is absolutely amazing! It's really a great idea, I think I might borrow it - if that's okay? :i

In general - Your town is great! Even though it's on two islands, it seems to be like one! There is a lot of system and patterns in the way you have placed the trees, bushes, flowers, PWP's and everything. I've visited your town before, but I don't know if I've reviewed it? Anways, I thought your town was amazing then and I still do. There is not really anything I would change, if I could. So all in all, you have an amazing town!

 

[Ras]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you found my path to the log bench. I was so happy when Phoebe gave me the suggestion. If you find a way to make something similar, I would love to see it. If you've updated your dream with the minor changes, I can't wait to visit again.

 

[Byngo]

I'd love for you to review mine. <3

My DA is in my signature~

 

[MisterEnigma]

Thank you so much for your review Akina! I'm really glad you liked my flowers and trees, I've been working hard on building up my gardens. I will definitely work on my paths more, but I'm very glad you liked the pattern! I'd love to go for the fairytale theme, but I haven't gotten as many fairytale PWP's as I've wanted, so I think I'll have to get more pings from my peppy villagers for that. Thanks again!

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

I kinda need one.
Need advice on what and where for more PWPs(really want a geyser and zen garden), and what to do with some of my other characters rooms(all of Alice's except the main, Marisa's left and 2nd floor, Reimu's right)

 

[Akina]

Yay! Two more towns to review! I'll get right to it!

Ras - I will be working on my town today, I could update it when I'm done? c:

Fawful - I know the feeling! I have noooooo fairytale PWP's suggested and it's so difficult to get my town to work without it. But I'd love to see your town when you have worked on it some more

 

[Akina]

I'd love for you to review mine. <3

My DA is in my signature~

Paths - I love your path at the plaza! And the small path to the flower arch and the log benches; it is soooo cute! The pattern on your path is just really cute and you have a nice variety of triple, double and single paths! I really like that When I walked to the other island, I was really surprised with the zen/bamboo theme around Hamlet's house! It looks amazing!
Trees - The cedar trees around the plaza looks amazing. Your trees do look amazing all over your town! I love that you have saved your dream town with the cherry blossom trees! It makes it all look fantastic!
Flowers - Your flowers are just.. breathtaking! So many pretty hybrids, so many different combinations and systems, making it look so pretty! I'm jealous of those flowers haha!
PWP's - Your PWP's are awesome. I like your small gardens, especially the one near the pink and white carnations. Oh dear God! Your caf? looks amazing! It's very nicely placed and with all the bushes and flowers around it? Wow!

In general - Your town is one of the most wonderful towns I have ever visited! I really love your theme and how you have set it all up. It is working, really working and gives me an impression of a town that just flows. Everything is connected, everything matches in one way or another and it's just very well put together! It must have taken a lot of time and a lot of bushes! And trees! But I'm really impressed with your town and I love every single bit of it!

 

[Akina]

I kinda need one.
Need advice on what and where for more PWPs(really want a geyser and zen garden), and what to do with some of my other characters rooms(all of Alice's except the main, Marisa's left and 2nd floor, Reimu's right)

Paths - I was very confused by your paths. It might be because it's night in your dreamtown, but I didn't know where to go. And there were so many different paths and when I finally thought I found the right one, there suddenly was a complete different path. If I were you, I would decrease my number of paths and perhaps only use 2-3 different paths c:
Trees - I like your trees, there are a lot of them giving a bit of a forest feel to your town
Flowers - You have a lot of pretty flowers!
PWP's - I really like the flower clock and the fountain! Your caf? is placed really nice and I like your flowers, trees and bushes around it! You could place either a geyser or a zen garden around the perfect apple trees, near the plaza?
Rooms -
Alice: I really like the gorgeous room! If you want to change it, perhaps you should go for an office/library looking room? That would be really great Are you planning on expanding the room in the back? You could perhaps make it some kind of trophy room? I don't know. The room on the left seems to be some kind of toilet? If I were you, I would make it like a fancy/old/vintage-ish bathroom! With the clawfoot tub in the middle! Or wait for the Taurus tub? Something like that And rococo wall/floor. The top floor could be the bedroom. Perhaps the princess series, if you like that one? Or the regal or rococo would fit in For the basement I would suggest a dungeon! With a throne, tiki torches and some other things making it look like a middle age castle-ish. Perhaps with a Merlion or two? You could also make a room for teaparties! With afternoon teaset, all kinds of cake and so on?
Marisa: left room - I don't really know.. It's hard to give suggestions when I don't know what theme you are going for. But perhaps some kind of lounge room? With a chaiselonge, music, statues, sofas and stuff like that? Second floor - the music makes me think of the kiddies series? I don't know. I usually make the 2nd floor into the bedroom. Perhaps the blue series would be great?
Reimu: How about some sort of asian/zen kitchen? I don't know if there is furniture for that, but it would be awesome!

In general - I like your town, even though it is confusing with the paths It still feels connected somehow. If it was my town, there would a lot to work on. I would make it less crowded and perhaps cut some trees, remove a bit of the paths to make room for the zen garden and geyser. You could really make it work! Perhaps with some bamboo? But you need to have the room for both of them, or at least that's what I think The best placed zen gardens/geysers I have seen have been somewhere with a lot of room. Preferably with bamboo, trees or bushes around it

Let me know if you want me to be more specific on some things

 

[Ras]

I went in Lunatic's. That was really nice. I can't wait to get those topiaries. It's crazy, but I really liked the streetlights, especially the ones right next to each other. It was cool seeing Fauna and Diana right together. The weirdest thing is when I started up, Bianca was standing completely still and Flora was pushing her sideways.

 

[Byngo]

Paths - I love your path at the plaza! And the small path to the flower arch and the log benches; it is soooo cute! The pattern on your path is just really cute and you have a nice variety of triple, double and single paths! I really like that When I walked to the other island, I was really surprised with the zen/bamboo theme around Hamlet's house! It looks amazing!
Trees - The cedar trees around the plaza looks amazing. Your trees do look amazing all over your town! I love that you have saved your dream town with the cherry blossom trees! It makes it all look fantastic!
Flowers - Your flowers are just.. breathtaking! So many pretty hybrids, so many different combinations and systems, making it look so pretty! I'm jealous of those flowers haha!
PWP's - Your PWP's are awesome. I like your small gardens, especially the one near the pink and white carnations. Oh dear God! Your caf? looks amazing! It's very nicely placed and with all the bushes and flowers around it? Wow!

In general - Your town is one of the most wonderful towns I have ever visited! I really love your theme and how you have set it all up. It is working, really working and gives me an impression of a town that just flows. Everything is connected, everything matches in one way or another and it's just very well put together! It must have taken a lot of time and a lot of bushes! And trees! But I'm really impressed with your town and I love every single bit of it!

Thank you so much! <3

When I get the time I'll be sure to review your town for you. :3 Probably later today.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Thanks. Updated in the daytime so now you can get a sunny view. Mostly unchanged, except removed a little path area in the south-west and moved some flowers around.
As for specifics,
PWPs: I was thinking of near the P Apple grove, but I'd like to keep a forest there. Maybe a bench though.
How about a zen garden with some bamboo to the right of the train tracks?

Alice:
Gorgeous Room - would like to keep the theme, just not sure on furniture placement
Back -Actually was thinking of the princess series
Left - like the bathroom expansion idea
2nd Floor - mostly like it as is, just don't know what to put in the back left corner
Reimu - like that idea, though it might look repetitive with the main room
Marisa - like your idea of a lounge area. 2nd floor I'm starting to think of doing the lovely series.

 

[Byngo]

~Review of Delphi~

Likes: Right of the bat, I love your paths. They're adorable! They are used often, but that's just nitpicking.I really like how you have a lot of nature like tree's, flowers and bushes. The illuminated arch area is cute! I also like how a lot of the buildings are concentrated in one area-it makes for a nice village feel. c:

Dislikes and improvements: It seems like your flowers are scattered all over the place. Organizing them by color and species would definitely make your town more organized. I can tell your town is a WIP in progress, but it has a lot of potential-particularly where the jumble of houses are, 'cause there's two big open spaces. It would be really cool to make one of those areas into a park, with a bus stop to make it look like a cute little urban village, or something.

Overall, it was a nice town-like I said you can tell it's a WIP-but with a lot of potential to be really cool! 3.5 out of 5.

 

[Akina]

Likes: Right of the bat, I love your paths. They're adorable! They are used often, but that's just nitpicking.I really like how you have a lot of nature like tree's, flowers and bushes. The illuminated arch area is cute! I also like how a lot of the buildings are concentrated in one area-it makes for a nice village feel. c:

Dislikes and improvements: It seems like your flowers are scattered all over the place. Organizing them by color and species would definitely make your town more organized. I can tell your town is a WIP in progress, but it has a lot of potential-particularly where the jumble of houses are, 'cause there's two big open spaces. It would be really cool to make one of those areas into a park, with a bus stop to make it look like a cute little urban village, or something.

Overall, it was a nice town-like I said you can tell it's a WIP-but with a lot of potential to be really cool! 3.5 out of 5.

Thank you so much

I've been working on the flowers this morning. I think I've spend more than one hour just organizing them! But, if you have time and it wouldn't be too much trouble, would you give some tips on how to organize the flowers? I can update my town so you can see how I've done it now..

 

[KaptenK]

I'll visit your town right now!

-My dreamcode is 6700-3676-3100 :3 (it's a work in process but I think I got something going)

 

[Akina]

I'll update my town in a minute, if you could wait?

And I'll review your town in a few minutes

 

[KaptenK]

I'll update my town in a minute, if you could wait?

And I'll review your town in a few minutes

Oh, I didn't see this xD I can visit it again, is it updated now?

 

[Akina]

It's updated now

 

[KaptenK]

Review of Delphi:

Your town is very pretty! Most of the complaints I had was fixed in your update xD It feels very natural and the layout is comfortable. You've done a good job with the paths and I don't think you've used them too much at all (which is my number one complaint in many other towns I've visited).As I said I don't have any big complaints but if you want some tips this is what I came up with:

Your house is really nice, but I personally find it kind of unsettling if there's no music in the majority of the rooms, so there's that. You have a really nice spot over the area where most of your villagers live (with the fountain) but I'm guessing it's not a place where you pass by very often since it's not on the way to anyplace you would often visit. A bridge nearby would make you pass that area more frequently and provide a shortcut to the residential area. This is, again, just my personal opinion.

Also, don't be afraid to plant more trees! You have plenty, but some areas seem kind of flat and trees are a good way to prevent that!

Overall, I've had a great experience visiting your town and I'm sure it's a wonderful town to play in

 

[Ras]

Your house is really nice, but I personally find it kind of unsettling if there's no music in the majority of the rooms, so there's that

I haven't been in the house, but I assume dreams work like streetpass houses: if the music player is set to shuffle, it is silent to visitors. Sucks, but that's the way it works.

 

[Akina]

I have updated my dreamtown. It would mean a lot to me if someone would visit it and let me know what they think!
I need a bridge, but I'm waiting for the fairytale one. Also I need to organize my trees. The flowers on the beach are just for getting more hybrids


If you do visit my town, and also if you don't, please let me know if you want me to review your town