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[OnAvance]

Dream Address: 4900-3394-8207
Town Name: Hydra
Still a bit of a WIP, especially the right side of it. It's getting there lol

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Such a pretty town !

Likes:
I really like the beach with the shell path and the pretty flowers. Really cute and clever
Lots of PWPs
ANKHA !
Amazing zen garden/bamboo grass area

Criticisms:
I like paths with borders - your paths are great though it's just a personal preference!
There aren't a lot of trees - but that might just be because I like a ton of trees lol
A lot of stuff on the beach
Not my favorite furniture sets - but again just a personal preference

I enjoyed your town Overall 4/5! It feels a lot more complete than my town

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

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[Yukari Yakumo]

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[Yukari Yakumo]

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[Oblivion9312]

Dream Address: 4400-2565-9616
Town: Iselia
It's still kind of a work in progress. I'm waiting for some PWPs, I need to breed some more hybrids, and the mayor's house is under construction, but I think it's coming along nicely.

Edit: I visited OnAvance's dream.

I hope this doesn't seem too spotty. I'm just kind of writing it as I go. To start off, I love your path patterns! They're very pretty, and they're nicely organized.

Great placement of the police station and the campsite.

The pattern you used for the flowerbeds made a great wallpaper for the kitchen in the mayor's house. I wouldn't have thought to use it for that, but it actually fits perfectly.

I can clearly see the start of landscaping. I know you said it's a WIP, and it looks like you're off to a great start! Keep working on landscaping and getting more PWPs and I bet it'll be awesome when you're done. I look forward to seeing it finished!

As a WIP it's kind of hard to give a rating on the number scale, but I'll give it a 7. Keep up the good work!

 

[lexy_]

my town : soledad,
my Dream code : 4800-2253-7299

I will review Town: Iselia

like :
love your path ...so pretty
We have both wolfgang cool ^^
i love the zen house...the garden is really pretty and love the idea of bodyguard who did not let me to enter to the room
love flower around the caf? + flower arch+ bushes ....really pretty love it
in front of the hall, well done ^^ ...it is nice view with flower clock
your flag is cool

Dislike :
mixing bamboo and tree looks a little weird for me
sometimes your pwp is hiding by tree/bamboo


I had a good dream thanks you
you did a god job on your town

 

[nyenisu]

town: Chimeria
dreamc: 4200-2959-7153

warning: still a WIP! i'm waiting for dreamies, hybrids and pwps to be completed in order to finalize my town. ^ ^
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Review for Soledad

I really like your zen-garden feeling near the middle of your map. (sorry, can't post pictures D: )
I think it's very pretty, especially when you updated it with the cherry blossom leaves just falling everywhere. The paths are pretty cute! I like the bridge/wooden panel paths near the bamboo. (I was going to use those for my town too, but decided not to.)
I also like your choice of flower placement.

Some of the things I didn't really like was that you had fruit baskets on the ground/plaza. For me, I don't like random things on the ground unless I have no room to put them anywhere or I am still setting up my town layout and etc.
I think some of the placements of the PWPs were a little off-putting to me. For instance, the bus shelter(?) i think that's what it's called, is kind of just there out of nowhere, but again, this is my personal opinion. Also, the animal tiles were a little random for me as well.

The flowers on the beach surprised me because I did not know you could put flowers on the beach. Interesting.

Overall, I'd give you 4/5! Very pretty town. c: GOOD JOB. (4.5 if we were allowed to put .5s. xD)

 

[Saranghae]

My town: Kinoko
Dream code: 5200-2104-8713

I'll review Chimeria

The town of Chimeria:

Likes
- Love your paths!
- Super cute how you have little sign(s) pointing to destinations
- The area outside your mayor's house is gorgeous
- I like how you used cut down bamboo in some areas
- Love your camping area
- Having a specific 'trade area' is a really good idea

Criticisms
- I wish you had more trees and greenery in general I'm a greenery nut though
- Could use more PWPs

 

[emeraldfox]

Reviewing saranghae's town. Will update when done.
My dream address is 5500-3249-1368

 

[Noofle]

Town: SM Town
DC: 4500-2883-0021

Reviewing: Kiwiland

Fun fairytale theme, loved the path pattern in from of Fig's and Alyssa houses. Have you thought of adding a 3rd path pattern, might add more another layer to your grounds. Very beautiful hybrids, I like the areas where they are grouped by color but missed seeing flowers on the other side of your town. They seem to be more sparse compared to you other large beautiful flower beds. I would like to see more trees also.
Alyssa's house: LOVED the cafe, very clever and imaginative, I am so jealous!! Also loved the downstairs, so colorful and fun. Enjoyed the snowman in Fig's house, cute and fun. I would like to see you add more personal touches to the full set in the rooms. You are so wonderful at tying other items to the sets that it is a little bit of a let down to see a plain Pave room after seeing your cafe.
Rating 4 out of 5
^.^

 

[Noofle]

Had some extra time so I decided to go to Kinoko

Beautiful town, love your paths especially how the water paths surrounds your buildings with their small bridges. Water bridges around the Roost are especially beautiful, as is the playground with the lovely hybrids and bamboo enclosing it.
AMAZING color scheme of your fairytale house!! Your rooms are well put together, they are fun, colorful and exciting without feeling cluttered.
I guess they only complaint I might have is the amount of trees.There are so many that it feels a little crowded and it can be hard to turn around.
Beautiful town ^.^
Rating 5 out of 5

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Good to see some life here again.

Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505
changed a few things. wondering about the new path in the southern area.

will do two reviews in one this time

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Town: SM Town
DC: 4500-2883-0021

Rating:6/5
Likes:
- the whole plaza area
- hotspring
- lighthouse
- Nalani and Jia's exteriors
- Nalani and Jia's interior... everything(seriously love and don't even know half of the furniture)
- ... whole town
Dislikes:
- it's so awesome and not mine.
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Town: Honolulu
DA:5100-2511-4955

Rating: 5/5
Like:
- so many flowers; love the tulip rainbow near the plaza.
- the arrangement with the fountain in the north-eastern corner
- the hotspring and area around it; same for the fairy tail clock
- we have similar taste in paths
- made me feel like I might have been in real Hawaii
-... did I hear Meow Mix?

Dislike:
-...nothing really. maybe just too nice.
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[Noofle]

Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505
changed a few things. wondering about the new path in the southern area.

will do two reviews in one this time

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Town: SM Town
DC: 4500-2883-0021



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Thank you so much for reviewing my town, still need to work on boy's houses though, it is always a work in progress. ^^

 

[Byngo]

SM Town: 3/5

Likes:
-Your plaza. It's absolutely gorgeous! I used to have the pond patterns in my town.
-All your houses are cute!
-I like that all the buildings in your town were centered in one area, it kind if gives the feeling that it's a cute little dense village.
-I really enjoyed walking through your bamboo area with all the bushes.

Dislikes:
-Aside from a few areas of your town, it seemed a little barren. But I understand if it's a WIP. ^^
-Your flowers seemed to be strewn about, with no order. I think ordering your flowers by color and species would do a lot.

Overall, dreaming if your town was an enjoyable experience. c:

My DA is in my signature.

 

[ChrisNewLeaf]

Likes:
- Spring blossoms is always a plus
- Nice zen-like theme going on. Liking the garden areas also.
- The Bamboo garden is awesome. Probably the best part of the town (from the outside).
- Nice path, matching the town theme.
- Liking the colour coordination of the hybrids, with the blue and purple section near your house, and red and pink in other places.
- Your main house: I like that you've gone for realism here, making a real-looking house with a main room, bathroom, kitchen etc.
- Nice bush placement, particulalrly around the coffee shop
- Decent villagers, and bonus points for having multiple deer and hamsters at once

Dislikes:
- Characters named Mule#2 and Mule#3 with mediocre/generic houses. Obviously, I can see that they're just there to hold your items based on the names, but it would have been nice if they added something to the town too.
- Your Main house: The simple and real theme was very nice, but it was also just a little samey, mainly due to repeat items and flooring. The bathroom was an exception for this though. Also the basement seemed out of place in this house.
- The mushrooms and stumps were pretty messy
- The outline for redd's tent or something similar remains in your town plaza. I know it's a small detail, but I noticed because OCD

Overall 3/5.

I thought it was a very nice town with more potential to get even better. Nice work.

Note: For whoever goes to my town - The back room of ???? whilst almost complete still lacks a few items. Also the beach is a breeding grounds and space for items I'm selling (with the exception of my hidden beach).

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Don't like saturating with my own town, but trying to give it a new breath; also need some advice on my town.
Specifically the house interiors other than Yukari's, should Alice's exterior stay as Manor or change to Fairy Tale Castle, layout of the south-western section, where to put hybrids for decoration, and what and where more pwp's.

Also, putting link to thread in my sig.

Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505

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Town: LushLeaf
DA: 7900-2501-0253

Rating: 4/5

Likes:
- lot of flowers and bushes meticulously arranged
- moat around the plaza tree
- the forest area was interesting
- north-western beach
- ???' shoddy zen castle exterior; never seen that combo before
- ???'s interior(someone else loves Majora's Mask , and would love to have the QR for the Majora's Mask and Ghost patterns)
- Kris' regal modern exterior
- Kris' interior; the hotel theme was inspired. lobby, stage, guest rooms complete with maids and different perfect fruit,
- ocean and jungle themes in WW Chris' east and west wings and birthday basement
- Chris' front yard and exterior; never seen the golden exteriors on the fantasy castle
- Chris' interior; throne room, dining room, library, and island. someone's loaded and not afraid to show it.

Dislikes:
- few trees; momma loves her trees
- jukebox in library seemed weird; would've expected a phonograph
- someone's loaded and not afraid to show it.
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[Sir Takoya]

Dream address is in my signature. Please be sure to visit my houses too.

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Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505

Rating: 3.5/5

Likes:
-Your park/picnic blanket
-Fountain above floral clock
- Yukari --- Christmas room
- Yukari --- Room to the left in the Zen house. Looks very traditional.
- Reimu --- Again, very traditional in the first room
- Reimu -- Although a bit empty, the ice room looks like a nice WIP
-The dead trees on the lower side of town
- Marisa --- WIP of a zen garden theme
- The lower have of the town has nicely placed trees/paths
- Cute castle. Don't change it to a cottage or anything else.
- Alice -- Alpine room.
- Alice -- Gorgeous room...is gorgeous. Cake made me hungry by the way. >.<
- Alice -- Classic room. You should consider an opulent rug for the flooring.

Nuetral:
-Your exotic room upstairs in Yukari's house. But the Fancy doll looks out of place.
- Yukari --- Your creepy room is very creepy. (Again, mush furniture looks a bit out of place)
- Yukari --- Harmonious spa room (But why an outdoor bath indoors...?)
- Reimu --- Rooms to the right, upstairs, basement, and left slightly empty/unexpanded.

Dislikes:
-Cutie marks on the path. It's nice, but doesn't look nice on the path. I'd stick to the stone
-River flowing into train station
-stair patterns
-Flowers are a bit random. Try using a checkerboard style and see how it works out
-Trees seem randomly placed at the upper half of the town
- Yukari --- Gem furniture placed within the harmonious room. It looks a bit strange.
- Marisa - First room is almost completely empty. Along with some of the other rooms.
- Alice -- a few of her rooms are empty

Sorry if some of this seems a bit harsh. Better to tell you the truth, than tell you nothing.
A few projects to consider are the fairy-tale projects and the normal bell on the lower half of town, and some Zen projects on the upper half of town.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Dream address is in my signature. Please be sure to visit my houses too.
Sorry if some of this seems a bit harsh. Better to tell you the truth, than tell you nothing.
A few projects to consider are the fairy-tale projects and the normal bell on the lower half of town, and some Zen projects on the upper half of town.

thanks. and yes most of Reimu and Marisa's houses are WIPs.

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