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[Yukari Yakumo]

I've been thinking this might be interesting for a while now, as I've always wanted more to go on that just Luna's "so-and-so like your dream."
Apologies if this is in the wrong section, but both Train Station and here seem equally valid to me.

Rules are simple:
1) post here with your DA(preferably updated within the last few days) and town name; please type them rather than just say, "it's in the sig"
2) visit the most recent poster's dream
3a) use the edit post button to leave a review inside your original post
3b) in the review, rate the town on a scale of 1 thru 5(1 truly horrible; 5 absolutely amazing; no decimals i.e. no 3.5s etc.), but also leave comments; what features were unusual, what did you like, what didn't you like, what would you suggest for improvement, what you think you'd like to copy in your town, etc.
please be polite and constructive with any criticism.
4a) you may post again for viewing another persons dream and so others will also dream of your town
4b) when reposting, there must be at least 2 posts or 1 day since your last post(again, please keep your town updated)
5) if a post reads "bump," simply ignore that post and use the post prior to that for your dreaming
I will bump this thread if it looks to be fading away; you are welcome to do the same
6) if you read a review of a town, and want to dream of it, feel free to write a review of it too.
Just remember not to leave the dream of the person before you forlorn.
7)The obvious: Have Fun!


To start things off:
Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505

 

[lexy_]

Sounds fun

my town : soledad,
my Dream code : 4800-2253-7299

Review :

Rate : 3

what I like :
your path is amazing, your path on the plaza looks natural, like it
the bush in diagonal looks great (first time I saw that)
the lighthouse is well placed
the Chinese house is cute both inside and exterior side
the Zen house (yukari) is great (good job ) : my favourite room is the bathroom with bonsai (love it)
Alice house is a good start
I love the idea of bambou around the zen city hall


what I dislike and some improvements :
The floral arrangement (it looks more natural that way I guess) but I prefer the same type together (my opinion)
Closed to the coffee, there is too much tree for me, it is difficult to move in this area
marisa's house is empty
it will be good to have a path between marisa's house and the bridge
your road sometimes confused me because sometimes, the road is cut or I am not sure where I should go


Well it is a good start to me, I am sure you can improve your town and it was a pleasant dream
thanks

 

[oak]

Sounds fun

my town : soledad,
my Dream code : 4800-2253-7299

My Town: New Bark
Dream Code: 4400-2728-5950

Review:
4 out of 5

Things I like: There was definitely no shortage of flowers! All your PWP were well incorporated with path patterns! It was a very cute town to look around. All in front of your town hall looked great. I loved the solar panel PWP, I want to use it myself but it's a hard one to incorporate. I can tell a lot of time was put into landscaping.
Criticism: I remember dreaming of your town before, the few things I suggested last time seems to be changed. I have no complaints.

 

[Lyla]

My town is Kinopot, DC: 6100-2187-9911. It isn't how I want it yet heh. I'm in the process of breeding more hybrids so I can make more pretty flower arrangments. ^-^

New Bark was amazing to visit! So many beautiful flowers. The scarecrow put with the field pattern was just so cute heh. It was nice to see the green grass again too. You have put a lot of effort into landscaping this adorable town and it pays off. Hopefully mine will look equally as pretty when I have enough hybrids haha.
Only think I would change is perhaps have some more natural looking areas too instead of every part being so planned (trees and flowers scattered).
5/5 town! ^-^

 

[JellyBeans]

OK, I'm looking round Kinopot.

I love the purple tulips by your plaza, and generally all the hybrids you have. Your path is awesome, but as it's Winter it stands out a bit with the green grass, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Your little campsite area is amazing, with the hammock and log bench <3 A campfire in front of the log bench would look even better! Your town is generally really good, and I like your cafe placement and signs leading down to the beach (also I saw hamlet's plot. he's a cute )

Overall rating? 4/5. Liitle bit messy with clovers but *shrug*

*also jelly of some of your PWPs. Wisteria trellis and picnic blanket <3*

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Now it's my turn to dream
Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505

~
Defi
Rating: 3/5

Likes:
- the statues just inside Jess' door
- oodles of flowers on the beach, made me feel like it was a tropical island on a winter afternoon

Dislikes:
- underdeveloped; lack of greenery and public works projects makes it seem rather empty; though I do see a lot of potential and the layout leads me to believe you already have some ideas of where you'd like to go
~

 

[lexy_]

oups I visited your town yesterday so I will be back when a new dream will be out

 

[doetothelindsay]

My town: Fairview
Dream address: 5900-3372-1885

Just visited Gensokyo!
Rating: 3/5

I really liked all the variety of paths and flowers you had! And all of the PWPs. The wisteria trellis leading up to re-tail looked great. The christmas room inside Yukari's house was really cute.

I did feel like your town was a little overcrowded though, there were tons of trees and bushes, sometimes it felt like a maze. It was hard to follow all of the paths because they never really went in a straight line. But overall, I enjoyed your town! There was a lot to look at and explore, and I definitely was not bored

 

[TeeTee]

My DA is in my signature
Fairview:
4/5
I like your town, it's filled with flowers and trees! I wish the flowers and trees are a little more organized. There are few parts of your town where it's overfilled with random flowers (like the light house, north of your town plaza, fountain etc). I suggest arranging your pretty flowers into some patterns around buildings, paths and PWP.
I love your houses! Lindsay's house is awesome except the left room where there were so much stuff on the carpet.
Your villagers are cool. Diana recognized me and said "Good morning Cherry! Oh I didn't know we were inside a dream."
The path lay out is good but there are a few twists and turns between Stitches house and Yasdnil's house. The place I loved the most is the park area just south of your train station.

 

[lexy_]

I wanna do it again (working n my dream badge right now )

my town : soledad,
my Dream code : 4800-2253-7299

Rate HARVEST : 4

Likes :
the princess outfit
love the path and photo board
the bamboo alley is beautiful
great floral arrangement ^^
your PWP are well paced ) good job here
I love the room with blue and pink furniture, so original love it
you got some original room like tv show room (great idea)
I like it when you put set together like gorgeous and golden set and your customisation is great
space room is cute (I used blue design but red looks good too)


Dislikes :
zen bell is hiding by Bamboo
all rooms are the same in the golden house except the museum room, I mean I love how you design the set but seeing bed, closet, chair, table....everywhere is kinda boring for me sorry
your convenience store seems a little empty and I am not a fan of campus set and 7-11 set together

I had a good dreams thank you

 

[Mokuren]

My town: Merupuri
Dreamcode: 6500 2133 9860

The path is really beautiful. But it would look better in spring together with the pink trees ^-^
. So many beautiful flowers *-* I really love that!
. The water with the waterpumb is amazing!!
.The town flag! I like the design so much <3
.The entrence to the gate. The dogs in the gras and this amazing stonepath.
. Your house with the shops are just sooo amazing. I love the spa *-*
.you have many pwps

Dislike:
.For me there isn't a concept.
. There are hardly any trees only flowers. The town is a little bit empty without trees ;___;
.There is much stuff laying arround
.and I don't like the area with the woodpath and the hot speing sooo much - somehow it don't match

All in all I like your town and I had a good dream so I will rate your town with 4/5 )

 

[aceroo]

My town: Gwoecien
DA: 6900-2190-3267

Like:
•I really love the little flowers on the path and the cherry blossom trees look adorable !
•Beau <3
•Your cafe and windmill placement♪
•The tiny pandas in the path!
•The patterns around the train station
•The stumps by the campsite～
•The patterns your hybrids are in (especially the ones by the metal bench )
•The snowman set in one of the homes
•The zen area in the corner of the map <3

Dislike:
•I couldn't access a few of the rooms in some of the houses, but I'm just assuming they're a work in progress
•If there could be a few more pwps?
•There's not that much to dislike about this town, it's just so cute ;o;

All in all, it's looks like you've worked hard on this town and it shows ^^ It's very cute, especially with the pink trees and paths (and of course Beau)
I'll give a 4/5 and that's only because I wish the houses had a bit more 'character' if that makes sense? But I do really love your town ☆彡

 

[sidneyac]

My town: Honolulu
DA: 5100-2511-4955

Like:
- symmetrical arrangement of flowers/bushes/trees/etc.
- the sky<3
-your paths. Very pretty!
- wow wow wow. Lots of flowers/hybrids. Keep up the good work!
-your pink rococo room. That was my fav room!
-your paper hat! (Where'd you get it btw?)
-you have apple! Cutest animal new leaf villager by far!


Dislikes:
-basement was very cluttered. Not sure what that was about.
-outside was dark..
-max's house was completely cluttered also..
-your paths sometimes would just randomly stop.
-stuff just laying out on the ground outside
-flowers weren't really arranged in some spots.. Just put there and didn't seem right
-carol's house was cluttered too..
-mushrooms everywhere? Don't get that.
-some trees were rearranged very nicely but also some weren't


OVERALL RATING: 2/5
-sorry.. I just need to work on some things even thought I could definitely tell you have worked very hard.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

bumping
(would go dreaming, but at work now)

 

[sidneyac]

I want someone to visit my dream so bump!!

 

[misschips46]

My review of Honolulu
Like
I like the steps on the pathing slabs
Lots of flower arrangements
The flower pattern slabs outside retail was a nice touch
I like the picnic sort of area below the town hall with the row of trees and two beach chairs + iron bench on the left
The iron heart and with pink and white roses looks very cute i haven't seen this PWP before i want it!
The shell paths on the beach are so cute an idea i would never think of
I like the way sidneys rooms are done by sets
All the landscaping by Rolfs house is really nicely done

Dislike
Not a dislike but your yellow bench at the bottom was on the middle of a stair?
There is some kind of clock PWP but it's hidden in a row of trees


I have only completed the upper half of my town! would like some feedback on my work before I do the bottom half
please don't judge the bottom half it's a complete mess!

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Town: Gensokyo
DA: 4300-3457-8505
just updated and changed a few things

~
Bugsley

Likes:
-so many flowers
-second floor of Ms Chips house
-looks like a bamboo grove has begun to grow in the north-east corner. always love those.

Dislikes:
- the two bridges northwest of the plaza seem too close together to be attractive. would move the west-most one to west of the campsite
-investment in incomplete Gracie sets seems to leave you with a shortage of funds which leaves your homes and town underdeveloped(could be wrong, but that's the impression I get)

Impression: you have room to grow, but you have a nice layout to work with

Rating: 2/5

Suggestions:
- a lighthouse just south of the plaza where the path abruptly ends
- cultivate your bamboo grove more selectively when it's in a constricted area like that, rather than just let it plant itself
- investing in Gracie items is okay, but remember that your home and town need some tender loving care as well
~

 

[a potato]

Town: MugenKao
Dream Address: 4400-2116-9774
Likes:
The stairs in the town plaza as well as the other designs there.
Water paths
All of the houses!
The stonehenge thing
The Japanese section (Good job on bamboo placement :])
Everything!
Dislikes:
Nothing!


I feel like I'm fascinated by everything, lol. 10x better than my town!
My town is really messy. Ignore the random paths missing by the train station and town tree.

 

[oak]

Town: MugenKao
Dream Address: 4400-2116-9774

Town: New Bark
Dream Address: 4400-2728-5950

Likes:
- Your tree plaza, it looked great circled in bushes
- The orange, purple & black roses above David's house
- David's Halloween room
- All your signs
- The cube sculpture

Criticisms:
- Maybe some more flower organization or colour coordination?
- The flower archway has a lot of potential to be a really cute part of your town! I'd say get rid of the drinking fountain directly behind it, and redesign the area. Maybe a cute dirt path running down the center of the archway, and have a bigger path surrounding everything, running down to the opening of the tree plaza. And the add pink flowers everywhere. Idk if that made sense, but I have a glamorous vision in my head.

Rating: 3/5, Your town was lovely to run around in. c:

 

[sidneyac]

Dream address:5100-2511-4955
Town name: Honolulu

Likes:
-your paths! Seems like you out a lot of work into them.
- the circle with the trees you did around the town tree with the white carnations!
-lots and lots of hybrids/flowers!
- your scarecrow farm thing! Very cute c:
- picnic pwp! I've wanted that for so long!
-pine trees separated from other trees/ very organized
-very symmetrical. I love symmetrical
-PLAYGROUND! Super adorbs! I've always wanted that ball thing!
- how you coordinated colors. (Warm colors vs cool colors)
-your sand with bamboo!
-bonfire pwp.
- your town looks so natural. It's awesome
-log pwp! I wanted that one too
-bakery looking room! I find those to die for<3 roasted marshmallow chairs! Very creative
-your town in general!
-insect/outdoor looking room. I love the bush bed in there! Hydrangea bed? Nice touch!
-what's NOT to like at your town! My goodness!

Dislikes:
-maybe more flowers in some places??
-goodness mosquitoes kept biting me!!
-gah! Your other house was under construction! Darn it was my last place to go! Lol

OVERALL RATING: 5/5
You have talent with decorating. Seriously I don't know how you do it, but keep it up! I really enjoyed it! Actually I went there the other day too! Haha