Rate my town (Be extra critical)

[XenonKnight56]

Please give me a lot of advice
Tell me what things need improvement
My towns not complete, tell me what to do with spaces
thank you

My DA is 4400 6596 8238

 

[Licorice]

I'll check it out and edit my post afterwards.

 

[XenonKnight56]

thanks

 

[XenonKnight56]

nobody's given me a review yet :'(