Why is that name popping up again ;-;
GODHA PRABGOD ?!
Godha sounds kinda like buddha idk. let's use this.
So, Godha, you really don't need to feel insecure. You did a great and very detailed job on the hair. It's very authentic and looks exactly like on the ref.
The only things I would maaybe mention is that her chest is rather big (my drawing *cough cough* (tried to make her sexy and didn't know how, so extended the size of the chest OMG) and yours looks a bit flat. You could also adjust the eyes to her eye shape. It's more almond-shape-like, right? But these things are totally additionally. Looks fine as it is!! c:
And I would test out to place the eyes lower. I have that feeling that they're placed too high. But maybe just my imagination. Hopefully the critic is allowed ^^' If not, please just pretend nothing happened. Btw, feel free to give critic for my art as well c:
Uhh yeah..the dress... I would just try to blend it and try some textures on it (for the various colors), maybe crayon or so... but I don't know if you have these options. I have no idea how to make the earrings gold-bronze-like, though. Gonna play around with textures as well, I guess >-<
the key to draw metallic is to have a very dark shadow and a very bright highlight

hope this helps ^^