Glaceon2000
Senior Member
My DA is in my sig, I'd love a review 
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- Thread starter krielle
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review of Koholint & Lilith
@sheepfold ~ i'm sorry i can't seem to find your DA anywhere D:
not even on your profile or signature so i'm going to have to skip you for now.
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and for everyone who just posted for a review, i'd really appreciate it if you could be patient :3
i still have a bunch to do in the pages before.
if you would like a notification when i post your review, please send me a PM and i'd gladly notify you!
What I liked:
✿ i find the area with the solar panel and wind turbine really neat!
✿ i actually like the paths you, except for that a part of it is brown. it's really pretty though, especially the ends where there is little lace.
✿ nice use of bushes below the town hall~ btw when i saw dizzy i kind of laughed, he's really adorable in that custom shirt!
✿ neat little presents scattered around the town to make the dream more pleasant!
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i don't like the hoard of fruit trees below the wind turbine and solar panel, i feel like it could be used for so much more. however if your going for a more natural looking town then i completely understand.
✿ if you could make the flowers around the path co-ordinate and compliment the path, i feel like your town would look more well put together. i myself, am not a big fan of brown so maybe i'm being a little biased xD
Overall rating: 7.5/10 ~
✿ i find the area with the solar panel and wind turbine really neat!
✿ i actually like the paths you, except for that a part of it is brown. it's really pretty though, especially the ends where there is little lace.
✿ nice use of bushes below the town hall~ btw when i saw dizzy i kind of laughed, he's really adorable in that custom shirt!
✿ neat little presents scattered around the town to make the dream more pleasant!
What I think can be worked on:
✿ i don't like the hoard of fruit trees below the wind turbine and solar panel, i feel like it could be used for so much more. however if your going for a more natural looking town then i completely understand.
✿ if you could make the flowers around the path co-ordinate and compliment the path, i feel like your town would look more well put together. i myself, am not a big fan of brown so maybe i'm being a little biased xD
Overall rating: 7.5/10 ~
@sheepfold ~ i'm sorry i can't seem to find your DA anywhere D:
not even on your profile or signature so i'm going to have to skip you for now.
What I liked:
✿ my first impression of your map was: WOW! it's amazing that all your villagers are in one small area. just by looking at that i can tell you put a lot of effort into your town. <3 everything is placed in wonderful spots.
✿ flowers around the plaza are neatly arranged and appealing
✿ my favorite area in your town was the area with all the three houses lined up. they all look nice together.
✿ another area i liked is the one with the two circular topiaries and surrounding bushes
What I think can be worked on:
✿ if you ever get the chance to, use more bushes in your town along with the trees. i think it would look better.
✿ honestly, i got tired of seeing roses everywhere. it would be really nice if you could incorporate different flowers, such as carnations <3
i think your town would look extremely beautiful during the time where cherry blossoms bloom, to match with your pink paths.
Overall rating: 8/10 ~ pleasant dream :'D
✿ my first impression of your map was: WOW! it's amazing that all your villagers are in one small area. just by looking at that i can tell you put a lot of effort into your town. <3 everything is placed in wonderful spots.
✿ flowers around the plaza are neatly arranged and appealing
✿ my favorite area in your town was the area with all the three houses lined up. they all look nice together.
✿ another area i liked is the one with the two circular topiaries and surrounding bushes
What I think can be worked on:
✿ if you ever get the chance to, use more bushes in your town along with the trees. i think it would look better.
✿ honestly, i got tired of seeing roses everywhere. it would be really nice if you could incorporate different flowers, such as carnations <3
i think your town would look extremely beautiful during the time where cherry blossoms bloom, to match with your pink paths.
Overall rating: 8/10 ~ pleasant dream :'D
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and for everyone who just posted for a review, i'd really appreciate it if you could be patient :3
i still have a bunch to do in the pages before.
if you would like a notification when i post your review, please send me a PM and i'd gladly notify you!
BluebellLight
bob is love bob is life
5700-3999-5592 <-- Bluebell, my main town! It's almost finished, and all the PWP are in place I believe
its been a few days since ive updated tho
its been a few days since ive updated tho
My Dream Code is: 4100-3430-1008
After having a Dream Suite for half a year, I finally got the badge for visiting dreams. Don't you also get something for people visiting? I've only gotten about 1 dreamer a month, so can a few people help me? My Dream Code is: 4100-3430-1008
After having a Dream Suite for half a year, I finally got the badge for visiting dreams. Don't you also get something for people visiting? I've only gotten about 1 dreamer a month, so can a few people help me? My Dream Code is: 4100-3430-1008
Nope, you don't.
I thought you got something like a Public Works project after 100 visitors?
that's for visits to your actual town, not your dream town
after 100 visitors you can remodel your train station~
Mario3DWorld777
Mayor Jacob of CoolTown
5600-3445-0327
Please note my paths aren't good, I'm kinda unorganized in the game xD and I surrounded my PWP's with tiles for the heck of it.
Please note my paths aren't good, I'm kinda unorganized in the game xD and I surrounded my PWP's with tiles for the heck of it.
Religious-Sonic
moved to lilacvomit
4200-3383-4936
My town isnt 100% complete.The main room and right wing aren't finished at my house and Kyle's and Thanatos' houses aren't completed yet.
My town isnt 100% complete.The main room and right wing aren't finished at my house and Kyle's and Thanatos' houses aren't completed yet.
