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[MajesticMayor]

Your interior fits the castle theme very well. I'm not sure about the exterior. It is gold, but I don't know. I am personally not a fan of this type of exterior. I would recommend a wooden zen door as it resembles old style castle doors more.

I laughed at the basement room you have. It is perfect. A dungeon for the peons. Brilliant. My FAVORITE room in the house was the banquet hall. You might want to change the wallpaper and flooring to look more elegant. Nice lobby. You could probably add more bathroom stuff to your bathroom. The upstairs Gorgeous furniture I feel is too modern as opposed to castle-like. Pretty nice chapel in the right room. You might want to use a hard floor to give off the impression that it is like a church. Correct me if I'm wrong with this room.

Overall, I like it a lot. It's spacious, which is what I feel a castle should be, but I feel like you can fit a few more castle-esque items into certain rooms in certain areas to bring out your interior some more.

What wall and floor do you think I should use for the banquet hall? Should my upstairs be a rococo maybe?

 

[keybug55]

Okay, take two in the updated town. Rating the indoors this time.

Outdoors: okay, golden house. Not much creativity because it's all the golden stuff on a castle exterior, it does look really nice though.

Center room: It's like what I would imagine a castle foyer to be like, exempt better. I kind of want to see some symmetry with the statues (one girl on the left and one on the right), and I would like for there to be two knight guards between the columns and the northern wall looking at each other.

Northern room: I see we have a throne room with a baptizing being held, that's actually very original. The clock looks kind of out of place, so I would suggest removing it unless it hold some significance. I would also suggest putting in a baby carriage since it is a babtizing. I do like the placement of the golden knight as if he was a very important knight in the castle. Not really complaining about the other furniture in here, so let's move on.

Eastern room: Not ENTIRELY sure what's going on here, a church room? A conference room? Maybe I'm not getting it right away, so I guess I might just leave it as my fault for not getting it.

Western room: A banquet hall with the finest food! Nice! The rococo furnature is sadly not blending well with the stools and kegs in the northern side of the room, so I suggest changing the rococo chairs' color or getting regal chairs. Not too sure what the King is doing with a picnic basket, but I'll try not to question it. This room looks unfinished so I won't look over it any further.

Upstairs: The place where the king and queen sleep. Refurbish the rococo bed or replace it with another bed. If you can, try to mix rococo with gorgeous in this room, and add a editor's desk to display kingdom work. Nothing much to add from here.

Downstairs: Graveyard, and also a place that makes me excited for Halloween. Throughout my adventure exploring this castle, I was kinda hoping for a war room, but this works too. It looks like zombie nobel men are controlling the undead to overtake the kingdom...or am I just overthinking again ^_^' I would like a dirt floor, an ivy wall and more of those skeletons that look like they're crawling on the ground. Not sure what the painting is for, but I guess it's a ghost girl.

Final Verdict: 6/10. Rooms are still a bit unfinished, but so far it looks pretty cool. To my surprise this is the first castle house I've ever seen. All you mainly need to do is refurbish the rococo series in the Eastern and Upstairs room.

 

[MajesticMayor]

Okay, take two in the updated town. Rating the indoors this time.

Outdoors: okay, golden house. Not much creativity because it's all the golden stuff on a castle exterior, it does look really nice though.

Center room: It's like what I would imagine a castle foyer to be like, exempt better. I kind of want to see some symmetry with the statues (one girl on the left and one on the right), and I would like for there to be two knight guards between the columns and the northern wall looking at each other.

Northern room: I see we have a throne room with a baptizing being held, that's actually very original. The clock looks kind of out of place, so I would suggest removing it unless it hold some significance. I would also suggest putting in a baby carriage since it is a babtizing. I do like the placement of the golden knight as if he was a very important knight in the castle. Not really complaining about the other furniture in here, so let's move on.

Eastern room: Not ENTIRELY sure what's going on here, a church room? A conference room? Maybe I'm not getting it right away, so I guess I might just leave it as my fault for not getting it.

Western room: A banquet hall with the finest food! Nice! The rococo furnature is sadly not blending well with the stools and kegs in the northern side of the room, so I suggest changing the rococo chairs' color or getting regal chairs. Not too sure what the King is doing with a picnic basket, but I'll try not to question it. This room looks unfinished so I won't look over it any further.

Upstairs: The place where the king and queen sleep. Refurbish the rococo bed or replace it with another bed. If you can, try to mix rococo with gorgeous in this room, and add a editor's desk to display kingdom work. Nothing much to add from here.

Downstairs: Graveyard, and also a place that makes me excited for Halloween. Throughout my adventure exploring this castle, I was kinda hoping for a war room, but this works too. It looks like zombie nobel men are controlling the undead to overtake the kingdom...or am I just overthinking again ^_^' I would like a dirt floor, an ivy wall and more of those skeletons that look like they're crawling on the ground. Not sure what the painting is for, but I guess it's a ghost girl.

Final Verdict: 6/10. Rooms are still a bit unfinished, but so far it looks pretty cool. To my surprise this is the first castle house I've ever seen. All you mainly need to do is refurbish the rococo series in the Eastern and Upstairs room.

the eastern room is actually supposed too be a court room type thing ha! Should I keep the tables in the banquet hall and just change the chairs? And do you think I should just make my upstairs full rococo set? And my basement is kinda like a dungeon but I need more creepy skeletons and creepy stones!

 

[keybug55]

the eastern room is actually supposed too be a court room type thing ha! Should I keep the tables in the banquet hall and just change the chairs? And do you think I should just make my upstairs full rococo set? And my basement is kinda like a dungeon but I need more creepy skeletons and creepy stones!

Try experimenting with Classic Buffet tables, if it doesn't work keep the rococo tables, and try experimenting with classic chairs. Or experement with both Classic Buffet tables and Classic Chairs.

Something tells me you need some candelabras and K.K. Durge playing downstairs. A stone wall would work perfectly. Not sure about the flooring since this wiki I'm using is not giving me floor/wallpaper pictures. Use a few weapons downstairs to make it look more like a dungeon like a glowy ninja sword. I might suggest using black chess pieces for decoration, unless if it doesn't fit for you of course.

 

[Eirynfox]

OK

1st, Outside, nice. I like it. Gold look, grey bricks and BAM turret roofs. Gotta love it. But you are BUSTIN' MY CHOPS HERE!! where is the drawbridge? where is the portcullis even? every castle needs a drawbridge or even a moat! Don't really like the wooden planks on the ground either, not very castle like. Everything else! Spick an span.


2nd Entryway. Regal, pillars? Love them, repetitive theme just sets the mood for what's to come. Running water? the sound is great. Would love to see your statues scattered between the pillars as well while you are saving up for more water lions. The guard just adds more weight to your score. I wonder if adding more pillars or putting your statues down the side might help out as well? possible a lady in waiting or a servant mannequin would look spiffy here.

3rd Left room. Banquet hall! great idea, needs a fireplace, a good rug on the floor and possibly some light. Some jolly music needs to be playing, something renaissance. Don't like the table choice, two big tables would look better and less... kiddy partyish. Otherwise I love this room! a jester would be great here in this room!

4th Right room. Church? I like the idea, don't like the wallpaper, don't like the telephone in this room Almost feel like I'm moving from ancient days to more modern when I look at the feel of the previous two rooms and then come to this one. It just doesn't fit. Otherwise I like the room. Could also make this a sitting room with tapestries or such with the same look and feel? I think this room could be utilised more by making it look a little more official for what it is about? is it a law court?

5th Back room. Interesting concept, I like it! throne room perhaps? a matching guard in gold would help balance it out a little. The clock really sticks out for some reason? not sure if I like it? some side tables with plants (flowers, maybe gold rose?) might help spice the room up a little bit more.

6th top floor. Lovely, very nicely set out. Would like to see a place for the queen to sit as she has her makeup put on for the day, and possibly a screen for them to change behind. More regal paintings on the wall are needed of the king and queen themselves or even past kings and queens would look good here. The beds don't match and its off putting to the feel of the room.

7th Basement. Love it. can't think of much else to add except for maybe some seating, anything granite looking might be good, a couple of flower arrangements? and you would have a great burial place thingy (can't think of the name) otherwise if you are going for a dungeon then you need it too look more.. I don't know.. Not even sure the game is build to make it like a dungeon! Would need rack, maybe things that look like instruments of torture would be good....

Overall I like where it is heading, think it could still use some work before it is top notch, but I can see that you have put A LOT of effort and A LOT of time into making it look really great so far!

Hope this helps!

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O I just saw the moat.. great! its the river outside.. I think you need some sort of (possibly matchin) path way from the moat to the castle.

 

[MajesticMayor]

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