💖Please visit my dream town💖

[Mayor Jasmine]

​H​ello everyone. I am looking for people to visit my dream for my (almost) completed main town and/or my work-in-progress second town (nowhere near completion yet), and give me feedback and/or suggestions on them. My main town is Mayor Jasmine of Clarity; 4100-6056-5413. My second town is Mayor Jasmine of Midnight; 4000-6246-6611.

Please visit my town, and I would love to visit yours too, so feel free to say your dream address also. After I have visited your dream I will give u feedback on it via this thread and via VM/PM as well. Thank u! <3

Also, just a side note: My main town is alltogether decorated, both outside and in the houses. However, my second town is mainly focusing on the rooms in all of the houses, there is really nothing happening outside there quite yet.

 

[Jacob]

visiting now!

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I visited you main dream and let me just say WOW

i thought it was so unique! the color sequence was breathtaking
The begining reeaaally caught my eye too

it was so intracate and complex i just loved it

The only things that bothered me was all the stuff on the ground- not a big deal tho

and just random flowersm but that doesnt even matter! Amazing town so unique!
my code is: 4100-2374-1493

go if you please ^0^

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

visiting now!

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I visited you main dream and let me just say WOW

i thought it was so unique! the color sequence was breathtaking
The begining reeaaally caught my eye too

it was so intracate and complex i just loved it

The only things that bothered me was all the stuff on the ground- not a big deal tho

and just random flowersm but that doesnt even matter! Amazing town so unique!
my code is: 4100-2374-1493

go if you please ^0^

Aww, thanks so much! That's super sweet. <3 I'll see what I can do to possibly organize the flowers a bit more. And I'll visit your town in just a bit too, thanks a bunch. cx

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Also sent via VM:

@Jacob_lawall:

Oh my gosh, I absolutely love your town!! It's so perfectly organized! I especially love how all of the PWP's fit in and look so amazing in your town and how perfectly sorted all of your flowers/scenery is. I also love all of your paths and bushes and the time of day u decided to record your dream address at. The sunset adds such a wonderful glow to it! <3 I think I need to add a lot more PWP's in my town as well. Thanks so much for sharing!! :3

 

[ieRWaZz]

Hey Jasmine,
I visited your town too, you have some very cool items in your houses. I liked your dream though your town is at some places a bit chaotic, not a clear path to follow. Maybe you can also plant more trees and bushes to create more depth And you've got so many hybrids on the beach why don't you give them a place in your town? Overal I liked your town! And you have lovely villagers! Good luck on finishing

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Hey Jasmine,
I visited your town too, you have some very cool items in your houses. I liked your dream though your town is at some places a bit chaotic, not a clear path to follow. Maybe you can also plant more trees and bushes to create more depth And you've got so many hybrids on the beach why don't you give them a place in your town? Overal I liked your town! And you have lovely villagers! Good luck on finishing

Thanks! I'll try that, I was actually thinking I would add more bushes as well. And ok, I'll look for more places to put the flowers. Any ideas as to where I should put them?? If not that's totally ok though too. Thanks so much! <3

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Bump~

 

[town-of-kanto]

I just visited Clarity. It was really pretty! My favorite part was the stepping stones by the fountain. The Isabelle flag was cute, too.

Since you asked for advice....I would say that the campsite could be more campy, and it is a little confusing to get around your town (but it's all so pretty, I don't mind being lost). Oh, and I thought the area near the right waterfall was nice, too.

Would you mind visiting mine? 4300-5761-7336
I need suggestions for the area near the lighthouse, as well as the fountain area.

 

[thatawkwardkid]

http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?63526-The-Offical-Dream-Addresses-Thread

You can just post your Dream Address here, you know.

 

[town-of-kanto]

http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?63526-The-Offical-Dream-Addresses-Thread

You can just post your Dream Address here, you know.

People don't really give feedback there...

 

[Meilumi]

I'll take a look at your main town!


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Goodies right by the plaza! The candy trail on the beach is also really cute.

I agree with what other people have been saying about the patterns on the ground/flowers planted somewhat randomly. More bushes and a greater variety of trees would definitely add more depth. I also don't know if you want clear walking paths for your town or not. Depending on whether you want your town to look more "orderly" or not, you could add walking paths and possibly line those with trees/flowers/bushes?

I'm also confused by the paper in the fence, is it just for storage purposes? You have a really cool peninsula in the center of your town that you could possibly remake into a nice central area like a park or a garden, possibly with PWPs such as sculptures/fountains/illuminated structures.

I really like the idea with the towels in the spa room/bathroom (?) your zen-inspired house. Is it just called a face towel? I want possibly get one myself. The rainbow balloon room is cute too.

Really enjoyed your town, take a look at mine? DA is 4400-2232-3867! (Mei from Sonder)

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?63526-The-Offical-Dream-Addresses-Thread

You can just post your Dream Address here, you know.

It's alright, like town-of-kanto said, they really don't give feedback there. Thanks for the suggestion though. cx

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I just visited Clarity. It was really pretty! My favorite part was the stepping stones by the fountain. The Isabelle flag was cute, too.

Since you asked for advice....I would say that the campsite could be more campy, and it is a little confusing to get around your town (but it's all so pretty, I don't mind being lost). Oh, and I thought the area near the right waterfall was nice, too.

Would you mind visiting mine? 4300-5761-7336
I need suggestions for the area near the lighthouse, as well as the fountain area.

Aww. Thanks so much. Lol, I'll see what I can do to work on it so people don't get lost. And as for the campsite I'll maybe add some more outdoorsy PWP's to it then soon. And sure, I'll visit your town soon too and see what suggestions I can make for u! <3 Thanks so much again! x3

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I'll take a look at your main town!


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Goodies right by the plaza! The candy trail on the beach is also really cute.

I agree with what other people have been saying about the patterns on the ground/flowers planted somewhat randomly. More bushes and a greater variety of trees would definitely add more depth. I also don't know if you want clear walking paths for your town or not. Depending on whether you want your town to look more "orderly" or not, you could add walking paths and possibly line those with trees/flowers/bushes?

I'm also confused by the paper in the fence, is it just for storage purposes? You have a really cool peninsula in the center of your town that you could possibly remake into a nice central area like a park or a garden, possibly with PWPs such as sculptures/fountains/illuminated structures.

I really like the idea with the towels in the spa room/bathroom (?) your zen-inspired house. Is it just called a face towel? I want possibly get one myself. The rainbow balloon room is cute too.

Really enjoyed your town, take a look at mine? DA is 4400-2232-3867! (Mei from Sonder)

Thanks for visiting! Yeah, I'll see what I can do to plant more scenery and orginize paths a bit better sometime in the near future. And as for the paper in the fence, yes that was just for storage, but I think I should really take that out and put like some flowers or something in it, thanks for reminding me. And I totally agree that my town needs more PWP's, especially things like u mentioned as well.

And the towel in the bathroom/spa room is actually just called a "towel" in the game. It's actually the towel that Blanca uses to wipe off her disguise in April Fools day. When Blanca gives u a towel to guess which villager is her in disguise u can just put it outside of the house that she is currently in once she gives it to u so u can keep it, and then when u go back inside that house she will give u a new towel. And if you'd like u can just repeat that step until u have the amount of towels that u want to keep. I hope that was clear enough and not confusing by the way.

Thanks so much again for your feedback! I really appreciate it. I will be sure to visit your town hopefully later today or tomorrow and let u know what I think of it also. x3

 

[Arabelle]

Visiting your main town now c:

Wow, your path in the plaza is so colorful! xD I like the boppers and beans that you left out. c: I don't think it's necessary to have all the golden tools out for dreamers since you can borrow(?) or take tools from Lloid (the gyroid next to Luna).. Normally people leave a wetsuit by plaza or by beach ramp in case someone wants to swim.. Well, I don't mind it, I just rarely see someone leaving out all the tools xD; haha don't mind me. I saw a lot of rainbow color schemes around the town with flowers.. it's really colorful and cute.

I think you chose a great spot for the cafe c: Very nice landscaping and PWP placements around cafe. I was lying down on the lounge chair in front of cafe and noticed the bushes are kinda mixed up.. (same by the Retails). personally I like seeing patterns or using the same kinds, like white/pink/white/pink or something like that.. but the way they lined up still looks nice. (When I didn't have enough bush starts I used to mix them up too haha) I also like the flower arch by train station! Nice symmetry and paths around it c: great job!

I really like the dirt path (brown paths?) you have.. I used it in my old town before~ looks natural c: I actually liked that paths are kinda wide in your town. Feel so free to run around everywhere..haha lol if you have extra room for more QR codes, there's a lot of grass patterns with variety of stuff like petals, flowers, patterns.. I use a couple of different grass w/ flower patterns myself.. so it doesn't look so uniformed(?) or repeated?..

Nice touch with the candy trails on the beach c: oh and I see you have a lot of hybrid flowers on the beach~ reminds me of my old beach area haha I just finished cleaning up all my extra flowers & landscaping on the beach >.< It would look nicer when you finish landscaping with those extra flowers c: keep up the good work!! I really like it.
By the way your villagers are so cute! :3 I saw couple of my old villagers and it was nice to see them again..haha i like how most of the houses on the south side too.

When you get a chance, my DA is 5500-5128-3236. Just updated it earlier today.. It's finally finished! no more clutter on the beach.. >_< lol

 

[MegaAquaKat]

The first town reminds me of those pretty tumblr towns I see a lot and I love the town's theme. Its really pretty and I think I've seen screenshots of your town before (especially the plaza area) Improvements: Not really a town improvement but when you finish the town, I recommend updating the town when there's a rainbow to add that colorful feel to it.

The second town once I got there I was surprised by all of the song albums just lying around (ooo music notes! Yum.) The second town is sweet and simple and the place is very relaxing. I love the random clovers around the town. Improvements: Try adding more normal trees(the ones with no fruits on them) and flowers and try using the natural grass wear technique for the paths.

Overall these town are really cute and beautiful ^-^ I r8 8/8 m8
Also if you want to see my town, its 1900-5108-3808 (Its not done obviously but I try to update it as much as I can). Even though the town name and the mayor's name is Japanese, everything is in english (i dont know about the villager's catchphrases though). Feel free to explore

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Visiting your main town now c:

Wow, your path in the plaza is so colorful! xD I like the boppers and beans that you left out. c: I don't think it's necessary to have all the golden tools out for dreamers since you can borrow(?) or take tools from Lloid (the gyroid next to Luna).. Normally people leave a wetsuit by plaza or by beach ramp in case someone wants to swim.. Well, I don't mind it, I just rarely see someone leaving out all the tools xD; haha don't mind me. I saw a lot of rainbow color schemes around the town with flowers.. it's really colorful and cute.

I think you chose a great spot for the cafe c: Very nice landscaping and PWP placements around cafe. I was lying down on the lounge chair in front of cafe and noticed the bushes are kinda mixed up.. (same by the Retails). personally I like seeing patterns or using the same kinds, like white/pink/white/pink or something like that.. but the way they lined up still looks nice. (When I didn't have enough bush starts I used to mix them up too haha) I also like the flower arch by train station! Nice symmetry and paths around it c: great job!

I really like the dirt path (brown paths?) you have.. I used it in my old town before~ looks natural c: I actually liked that paths are kinda wide in your town. Feel so free to run around everywhere..haha lol if you have extra room for more QR codes, there's a lot of grass patterns with variety of stuff like petals, flowers, patterns.. I use a couple of different grass w/ flower patterns myself.. so it doesn't look so uniformed(?) or repeated?..

Nice touch with the candy trails on the beach c: oh and I see you have a lot of hybrid flowers on the beach~ reminds me of my old beach area haha I just finished cleaning up all my extra flowers & landscaping on the beach >.< It would look nicer when you finish landscaping with those extra flowers c: keep up the good work!! I really like it.
By the way your villagers are so cute! :3 I saw couple of my old villagers and it was nice to see them again..haha i like how most of the houses on the south side too.

When you get a chance, my DA is 5500-5128-3236. Just updated it earlier today.. It's finally finished! no more clutter on the beach.. >_< lol

Thanks a bunch! Yeah, I know that you can just borrow tools from Lloid but I still like to have them out just cuz it makes things easier in general for everyone. Especially if I'm using another character in my game and I forgot to give them a set of tools, then they are already set out and I don't have to keep going back to my main character. Just stuff like that, know what I mean? cx Also, thanks for the wetsuit idea, I'll put one out soon.

As for the bushes by retail and the caf?, yeah, I really didn't have enough bushes at the time to put them in a pattern. But once I get more I think that I should arrange them like u suggested. x3 And for the paths, I think it is a great idea to have more variety, I'll see what I can do. And I'm gonna arrange all of those hybrids on the beach soon too like u suggested. <3

Thanks so much again for all of the lovely compliments and suggestions! I'll be visiting your town in just a bit.

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The first town reminds me of those pretty tumblr towns I see a lot and I love the town's theme. Its really pretty and I think I've seen screenshots of your town before (especially the plaza area) Improvements: Not really a town improvement but when you finish the town, I recommend updating the town when there's a rainbow to add that colorful feel to it.

The second town once I got there I was surprised by all of the song albums just lying around (ooo music notes! Yum.) The second town is sweet and simple and the place is very relaxing. I love the random clovers around the town. Improvements: Try adding more normal trees(the ones with no fruits on them) and flowers and try using the natural grass wear technique for the paths.

Overall these town are really cute and beautiful ^-^ I r8 8/8 m8
Also if you want to see my town, its 1900-5108-3808 (Its not done obviously but I try to update it as much as I can). Even though the town name and the mayor's name is Japanese, everything is in english (i dont know about the villager's catchphrases though). Feel free to explore

Aww, thanks so much! I love all of your suggestions. And I totally agree that I should try to update my main town when there's a rainbow, that sounds so beautiful!

Lol, and I'm glad u liked the K.K. music laid out in my second town, I'm actually going to be cleaning that up soon though haha, they were actually just temporarily there for storage purposes. And totally, once I have cycled out a bunch more villagers (I'm currently partially using it as a cycle town), I will decorate that town too. cx

Thanks again for visiting, I'll be checking out your town as well in just a bit. ^_^

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

@Melumi:

Oh my gosh, your town is so pretty and adorable! I especially love the way that all the flowers, PWP's and scenery was arranged! The flower petals coming from the blossoming trees are really pretty too!

I also absolutely loved the way that Sage's house is set up, with the signs in the main room telling what is in which rooms. And all the rooms are amazing, I especially love the rooms in Sage's house, they are so creative and inviting. <3 I also love how the rooms in Mei's house focus on giving the sets in the game that are a bit less popular than others their time to shine. So creative and cute! cx I also really like the spa rooms in Lin's house. x3

Your town is just so fun to be in! I really enjoyed seeing it all, thanks so much for sharing! ^_^

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@town_of_kanto

Aww, your town is sooooo cute!! I love the Apple orchard that u added, such a cute touch! And I also really really love Hope's main room, all the plants and scenery in it is AMAZING, great job! The clover paths that u have are super cute as well.

Now if I may make a few suggestions, I think the clover path would especially be cute with something in between each clover. Like possibly some sort of water or stone type path, know what I mean?? ^_^ I also think that your town would be especially pretty with more PWP's, paths, bushes, and flowers as well. And as for what you should do around the lighthouse, I think it would be great with a certain flower, bush, and clover arrangement around it. Like maybe some sort of rainbow flower arrangement in particular, but whatever works. And I think that a few different nature type paths and flowers would look nice around the water fountain. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks for sharing! <3

 

[town-of-kanto]

@Melumi:


@town_of_kanto

Aww, your town is sooooo cute!! I love the Apple orchard that u added, such a cute touch! And I also really really love Hope's main room, all the plants and scenery in it is AMAZING, great job! The clover paths that u have are super cute as well.

Now if I may make a few suggestions, I think the clover path would especially be cute with something in between each clover. Like possibly some sort of water or stone type path, know what I mean?? ^_^ I also think that your town would be especially pretty with more PWP's, paths, bushes, and flowers as well. And as for what you should do around the lighthouse, I think it would be great with a certain flower, bush, and clover arrangement around it. Like maybe some sort of rainbow flower arrangement in particular, but whatever works. And I think that a few different nature type paths and flowers would look nice around the water fountain. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks for sharing! <3

Thank you so much! Love the suggestions.

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

@Arabelle:

WOW, your town is so perfect OMG! I love how it's all so girlie and pink (girl power)! <3 The way u arranged all of the flowers, scenery, and PWP's in your town is all so breathtaking! Your paths are all SOOOO beautiful too! The vibe that your town puts off is just so perfect, I loved your town already from the moment that I got there. ^_^

The houses were all arranged so nice too! I especially love how Alice's house is moddled after an Alice in Wonderland theme, so cute! I especially love the giant chess game room, what a nice touch! Your Caf? room in Arabelle's house and Nature room in Juliet's house are just all too perfect as well.

Your town is just so amazingly perfect, thanks so much for sharing!! Keep up the good work! <3

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Thank you so much! Love the suggestions.

No problem, good luck on your town!! <3

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@MegaAquaKat:

Aww, your town's so nice! c: I especially love the area by the Japaneese character's house and by retail. So flowery and cute! And your Marshal shrine in the Japaneese character's house is neat also! Hehe, I love Marshal too so I completely understand what you're going for there. x3

If I may make a few suggestions however, I would suggest adding some PWP's and a few more varietys of flowers, scenery, and paths. I think it would make it even cuter!

Thanks for sharing! <3

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Bump~

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Bump