Please visit my dream town! Criticism WELCOME <3

[MayorJuan]

I have almost had my town Arkaden for a year now this September 28th. I was wondering if any of you guys would check it out and tell me what is good/bad and if you like it I would REALLY appreciate it! thanks xx

5700-4804-9229 - Dream Adress

 

[Hoppy~Shnell]

I'll check it out~ I'll edit my post as I visit.

Spoiler: My visit~

Hmm, I've never seen it storm in a dream town before. but hey, there's an umbrella, so... xD
Never seen this path before...and I like it!
I liked the roses with bushes and yellow flower groups!
Holy perfect peaches! o_o I wish I had them, I have pears instead :c
Your house was pretty nice! I can also tell you're probably a big Marina fan? o3o
I like the rose rainbow a ton! a̶n̶d̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶a̶ ̶n̶a̶k̶e̶d̶ ̶u̶n̶i̶c̶o̶r̶n̶ ̶o̶m̶g̶
Paige has a cute little bakery, but something's off...
I absolutely love statue fountains! The one with the violets around it seems really fitting.
Oh, hey, Pietro and Tia live here. They both told me not to doze off in their homes. z_z
Wow, the Zen area around Pekoe's house is great! Really goes with her home, too.
The beach looks a lot better than other beaches I've seen, but your lonely beach is, uh, kinda lonely D:
Overview!
I like the PWP placements! ✓
Pretty good flower placements as well, but areas with just one type and colour of flower are kinda bland. -
There are only two residents, but that's not a bad thing. They've both got decent homes~ ✓
Plenty of fruit, but a bit too many in one area is never a good thing. -
You picked a good path! I've not seen this one before. ✓
Overall score: 7.4/10

Sorry if I was a little rough, it's my first dream review in a while.

 

[MayorJuan]

thank you so much!

 

[MayorJuan]

Wow, thanks for the review @hoppy and yes I dont really do much with my beach lol I just use it to put unused flowers xD but thanks It means a lot that you took time to visit and leave a review!!!

 

[toadsworthy]

I loved visiting your town! It is definitely a sensory feast for the eyes! I love the quaintness of your brick path combined with all the flowers... it resonates cute throughout the whole town! (hope thats what you wanted....) all your villagers fit so nicely in with this too! However, there can be too much of a good thing, and I don't particularly like walking on flowers (just feels wrong...) but I'm glad I did because there was a lot of great moments in your town... Pekoe's house and set up was stunning! absolutey, and the little bit of negative space used in it makes it that much more serene! The flower topiary set up was gorgeous too! Just two of my fav spots, but there were so many! The house were very nice too! the sweets cafe had a good mix of cafe themed items but had a good mix of personal touches which i always love to see too! The first room of Juan's house was a work of art! I loved it, combined with the music and everything was just spot on! Idk what was with all the pictures... but I would prefer you set up more rooms like that first, and use the pictures sparingly, but what do I know lol. Overall I think the work you've put in over the year is tremendous and definitely shows... but if you wanna take your town to the next level then using an editing eye will make it look even more chic! Make the paths and cohesive with all the houses and PWPs to make for even grander adventure!

Loved it! come visit Riften whenever!

 

[MayorJuan]

I loved visiting your town! It is definitely a sensory feast for the eyes! I love the quaintness of your brick path combined with all the flowers... it resonates cute throughout the whole town! (hope thats what you wanted....) all your villagers fit so nicely in with this too! However, there can be too much of a good thing, and I don't particularly like walking on flowers (just feels wrong...) but I'm glad I did because there was a lot of great moments in your town... Pekoe's house and set up was stunning! absolutey, and the little bit of negative space used in it makes it that much more serene! The flower topiary set up was gorgeous too! Just two of my fav spots, but there were so many! The house were very nice too! the sweets cafe had a good mix of cafe themed items but had a good mix of personal touches which i always love to see too! The first room of Juan's house was a work of art! I loved it, combined with the music and everything was just spot on! Idk what was with all the pictures... but I would prefer you set up more rooms like that first, and use the pictures sparingly, but what do I know lol. Overall I think the work you've put in over the year is tremendous and definitely shows... but if you wanna take your town to the next level then using an editing eye will make it look even more chic! Make the paths and cohesive with all the houses and PWPs to make for even grander adventure!

Loved it! come visit Riften whenever!

WOW Thank you so much! You put a big smile on my face! And yes thanks for the feedback! Will definitely keep that path idea in mind because I am always open to making my town look better =) and yes I would love to visit!

 

[MD Fey]

I love your town. It's really lovely and your houses are nicely decorated. The room with villager pictures is just wonderful. I love the places where you put your pwps and how you plant flowers around them. It's neat and lovely. The area around Pekoe's house fits her house perfectly. I feel like she receives special love from you, haha.
I think you can also put some path down to lead people to the fairytale bench. It's kinda empty there. I feel sometimes you have too many flowers around. Maybe you can replace some of them with bushes, paths, or pwps.
Anyway, your town is truly wonderful and good job!

 

[Muyho]

Woah, your Pekoe area is awesome! I want that grass too.

 

[MayorJuan]

Thank you ALL!

 

[MayorJuan]

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