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I feel as if my town need so feed back so it'd be lovely if some other people could review it :)
I can review yours in exchange if you wish' totally up to you!
Thanks

Dream Address of Leaftown :: 5400-3099-9662
 
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I'm def interested! Always nice to get feedback on my town :)

My dream address is in my signature. I'll get to yours in a few hours (because I'm at school... Hehe)
 
I was on my second character when I did this so all of the pictures are of Hoenheim looking like a dork in PJs.
The first thing I noticed when I entered your dream world was that we used patterns by the same pixiv user! Which is pretty cool. After that I noticed that there were flowers EVERYWHERE. Which is fine, but not really my taste. I feel like having just random flowers everywhere makes the town look more messy and disrupts the flow, but it's a very popular thing to do in AC so I try to over look it.
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I found Rudy's house and actually I like the placement! It's not crazy close to any other villagers or PWPs so I think it looks fine.
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I am extremely jealous of your picnic because it's the last PWP i need to complete my park, but I digress.
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I liked all of the rooms of your house, but I was surprised at how much i liked your snowman room. In the old games i always hated the snowman furniture and though it was tacky but it looked really cute the way you set it up, idk.
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and finally, i just really wanted to know what this globe-thing with the fish in it was. I thought it was cool.

Overall I'd give your town a 3.5/5 mostly for the pwp choice and placement. Some of them made sense but others seemed random. The paths were small and curved around a lot which my look nice but is really bad for people like me who like running around a lot. I liked how may trees you had though! I've seen a lot of towns that chop almost all their trees down and the town ends up looking pretty flat and lifeless so it's nice seeing towns that look full of life. Regardless, i enjoyed visiting!
 
I'm def interested! Always nice to get feedback on my town :)

My dream address is in my signature. I'll get to yours in a few hours (because I'm at school... Hehe)

I'm not sure if you have your address updated because the only Tea Town I could find with your mayor didn't have the villagers in your sig (I had to check your profile since your sig wasn't showing)

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I was on my second character when I did this so all of the pictures are of Hoenheim looking like a dork in PJs.
The first thing I noticed when I entered your dream world was that we used patterns by the same pixiv user! Which is pretty cool. After that I noticed that there were flowers EVERYWHERE. Which is fine, but not really my taste. I feel like having just random flowers everywhere makes the town look more messy and disrupts the flow, but it's a very popular thing to do in AC so I try to over look it.
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I found Rudy's house and actually I like the placement! It's not crazy close to any other villagers or PWPs so I think it looks fine.
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I am extremely jealous of your picnic because it's the last PWP i need to complete my park, but I digress.
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I liked all of the rooms of your house, but I was surprised at how much i liked your snowman room. In the old games i always hated the snowman furniture and though it was tacky but it looked really cute the way you set it up, idk.
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and finally, i just really wanted to know what this globe-thing with the fish in it was. I thought it was cool.

Overall I'd give your town a 3.5/5 mostly for the pwp choice and placement. Some of them made sense but others seemed random. The paths were small and curved around a lot which my look nice but is really bad for people like me who like running around a lot. I liked how may trees you had though! I've seen a lot of towns that chop almost all their trees down and the town ends up looking pretty flat and lifeless so it's nice seeing towns that look full of life. Regardless, i enjoyed visiting!

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback (also most PWPs are random and I should fix them)

As for your tone I give it a 3/5
I mainly felt as if it needed more life. Maybe more flowers or trees. However i really enjoyed the park and how we'll it flowed. I'm not a big fan if the map due to the small land area but you really made it work!! Also the larger paths would bother me but I felt as if they suited your town well. Your choice of villagers was nice and I also loved your home. My favorite room is probably the first one. It felt homey and I adored it :3

I would post pics but I'm on mobile because my computer is a butt so I can't ;~;
 
Would anyone be willing to review my town? I'd love for more feedback :3
 
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What I liked:
-Dear god how many hybrids do you have?! D; *jealous*
-Usually the random flower thing doesn't quite sit right with me, but after awhile I quite enjoyed the diversity
-You have some awesome PWPs
-Your treat-themed room made me hungry and it was super cute
-Your path was really pretty!
-There were houses on nearly every corner, it felt like one huge neighborhood! (in a good way, of course)

What could be improved:
-You have some really great PWPs, but I think there should be a method to your madness
-The path was pretty, but it felt a little vanilla after awhile. Maybe some other tiles dotted around for more diversity?
-You should definitely fill your train station with the same pattern path, because the transition from path to stone was awkward

Overall, I give your town a 3.5/5
Mostly because I was really impressed with all of your hybrids and how they were scattered among the normal flowers for diversity. And the sheer amount of flowers was really impressive!
 
I would give your town a 3.75/5
I love the creativity :)
Your place is gorgeous and I adored your school! The landscaping was lovely and I felt that it looked great. However, the part with tulips and trees, I presume a orchard or forest needed something? Maybe a PWP like a bench or something along those lines. Your home was very cute. I loved the entry room and how each room flowed from it with design and taste. I can't believe you started barely over a month ago! When I got the game, I was gone for two months after I started but still, it took me awhile to upgrade my home and such. I also enjoyed your villagers. None of their homes were in awkward places which was great. I kind of felt that some of the paths were awkward when they just ended but you made it work well. I think the best part if your town was the south section, it was beautiful. :3
 
Thanks for reviewing! :D the orchard bit did need some PWPs, but I'm waiting on good recommendations. The southeast part was supposed to be a zen garden, but again I need villagers to recommend these darn things >:( basically my problem is the PWPs LOL! But thank you, thank you~
 
I'll review yours when I have some more time...in the meantime, check mine out? I just changed my path recently and I really want some opinions on it!

(Notes: The Julia house is in the middle of a theme challenge, and therefore it is hideous, please ignore it! And the beach is full of flowers because I'm breeding hybrids, ignore that too xD)
 
I feel as if my town need so feed back so it'd be lovely if some other people could review it :)
I can review yours in exchange if you wish' totally up to you!
Thanks

Dream Address of Leaftown :: 5400-3099-9662


Do me a favor: Review my town as well. But nothing beyond your mood.


What I immediately notice about Leaftown is that it's loaded with hybrids. My town has nothing in comparison to yours when it comes to numerous and various hybrids. I awakened in the plaza area noticed the blue pansies, blue violets, orange roses, orange comsos, purple tulips, pink roses, pink carnations, and red carnations. What I didn't know, at that moment, that that was just a small sampling. So the way navigated your town of Leaftown was just walking around first. They're very pleasing.

When I arrived at the beach, starting first on the south side, I liked the shells you put down. It was nice accessorizing. But with that area of the beach, and the east side, I was struck by the need to tell you that the one thing you need to do is plant more trees. The south side could use some more coconut trees to give more shading. But the east side is anemic with banana trees. Now, the update of this town, at the train station, shows today's date [02.10.2014]. So a couple more (game time) dates are needed on the east side for additional banana trees.


As for the paths: I have no problem with them. They're easy to live with. The grout part of the tile makes them feel earthy. The coloring of the individual tiles are very light. They're not a problem.

I like the one area of Perfect Trees (peaches) where you didn't leave any flowers underneath. It's good for shaking them and having an easier time grabbing the Perfect Peaches whenever there is need or desire. (Like, for example, the request coming from one of your villagers.

Speaking of villagers, you have ten: Fuchsia, Rudy, Kabuki, Julian, Francine, Zucker, Lolly, Marshal, Chrissy, and Beau. Combine them (numerous of whom are much-desired by Bell Tree Forums' members) with four humans, a variety of Public Works Projects, loads of flowers very much highlighted by hybrids ? you have a town that feels full. Short, just by a little, with those beach fruit trees. (Planting more of them, especially the bananas on the east side, will get you there.) Anything more you may choose to do may be with a replacement here and there. Be it a villager, a Public Works Project, or anything cosmetic.

(A side note: I like that have different bridge types. I considered doing that; but, recently, I opted to make mine all Fairy-Tale because, frankly, it was just my instinct to do so for appearances' sake. Your Zen-style Town Hall and Train Station may be an encouraging factor for choosing to venture out into having a Cobblestone, a Brick, and a Wooden Suspension bridge. And they work well.)
 
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