Paradox (Chapter 18)

[Tyler]

well

I have it saved to word. (2007 Trial FTW) so i'll read it when i get the chance.

 

[Bulerias]

well

I have it saved to word. (2007 Trial FTW) so i'll read it when i get the chance.

You mean you've got my whole story saved to Word? D:

Tell me how you like it once you're finished with it!

 

[Gabby]

LOVED THE LAST CHAPTER!

 

[Bulerias]

Well... Since my mom's been really busy with Master's Degree stuff and all, the computer downstairs has been occupied almost all day, so I haven't really gotten a chance to write. I've got 6 pages of the first chapter of the second part written, though.

 

[UltraByte]

Well... Since my mom's been really busy with Master's Degree stuff and all, the computer downstairs has been occupied almost all day, so I haven't really gotten a chance to write. I've got 6 pages of the first chapter of the second part written, though.

Holy..... 6 pages?

 

[Bulerias]

Well... Since my mom's been really busy with Master's Degree stuff and all, the computer downstairs has been occupied almost all day, so I haven't really gotten a chance to write. I've got 6 pages of the first chapter of the second part written, though.

Holy..... 6 pages?

As I said, the second part will be significantly longer, more involved, and a heckuva lot more epic. So you can say the first part was like a prologue...ish thing... D:

 

[Micah]

How long is part 1?

 

[Bulerias]

How long is part 1?

Precisely 50 pages.

 

[Gabby]

Well... Since my mom's been really busy with Master's Degree stuff and all, the computer downstairs has been occupied almost all day, so I haven't really gotten a chance to write.

 

[Bulerias]

Got sort of inspired by the 7th Harry Potter... The second part will be MUCH longer than what I expected. Probably an extra 100 pages to what I was already planning. I mean... I've already got 12 pages, and it's only the FIRST CHAPTER. D:

 

[Propaganda Man]

Bul, did I talk to you about chapters 15, 16, and 17?

 

[Bulerias]

Bul, did I talk to you about chapters 15, 16, and 17?

I'm assuming you mean "Bul". 0_O;;

But did you manage to read the complete first part? What do you think of it?

 

[Propaganda Man]

Bul, did I talk to you about chapters 15, 16, and 17?

I'm assuming you mean "Bul". 0_O;;

But did you manage to read the complete first part? What do you think of it?

I don't remember what I planned to say when I first finished reading it. (I just had this crazy dream where I was a prisoner on Cuba. They were having a holocaust where they killed Americans and I brought it down some how with my perfect aim and hesitation )

But from what I remember...I didn't really like it. My brain tells me its because of the wording you use for speech. That just kept throwing me off (there's more too, let me look back)

 

[Propaganda Man]

Here it is

Alejandra had left everything go for him when he could not do so for her

 

[Bulerias]

Bul, did I talk to you about chapters 15, 16, and 17?

I'm assuming you mean "Bul". 0_O;;

But did you manage to read the complete first part? What do you think of it?

I don't remember what I planned to say when I first finished reading it. (I just had this crazy dream where I was a prisoner on Cuba. They were having a holocaust where they killed Americans and I brought it down some how with my perfect aim and hesitation )

But from what I remember...I didn't really like it. My brain tells me its because of the wording you use for speech. That just kept throwing me off (there's more too, let me look back)

I would be glad if you pointed out the mistakes and things you didn't like, 'cause this is really the first draft. It's nowhere near "final draft" quality.

 

[Bulerias]

Here it is

Alejandra had left everything go for him when he could not do so for her

 

[Propaganda Man]

Here it is

Alejandra had left everything go for him when he could not do so for her

 

[Bulerias]

Here it is

Alejandra had left everything go for him when he could not do so for her

 

[Propaganda Man]

Here it is

Alejandra had left everything go for him when he could not do so for her

 

[JJH]

Just thought I'd let ya'll know, I was listening to a song by my favorite artist, and it's full of paradoxs. I think. Would an example of a paradox be:
"I stand by my right to speak freely, but I worry 'bout what kids learn from TV."?

I'll see if I can't find it somewhere...




Uber-pwning edit: I found one version on Youtube. It's from June 13 on the Jimmy Kimmel Show I believe.... (Whatever the "Jimmy Kimmel Show" is.) The song starts about 5-10 seconds into the video and ends around 3:34. If you listen all the way to the end you'll hear part of one of Toby's other newer songs.
Love me if You Can
This song has no swear words but some very minor religious suggestions. One line says:
"I believe that Jesus looks down here and sees us,"
Most of his other songs may use the "A-word" once or twice, so listen to those at your own risk. (I don't mind at all, and one of my favorite songs ("Courtesy of the Red, White, and Blue" (or "The Angry American")) can be found on the "Related Video" list for those who don't mind one single use of that word.) Enjoy!

And Bul, do you have an approximate release date for Paradox 2: The Second Story in an Epic Tale with a Big Word as the Title ?

OCM EDIT: Hmmm... Way to use the power of "bump".

OCM EDIT II: Mr. Bul, do you plan on finishing this... Hmmm...