Paradox (Chapter 18)

[Grawr]

Wow. The whole "don't stray away from the path" stuff seems really familiar...

Great job, though.

(As I said before, Bul, I'm leaving on vacation soon, and I think I'll miss the last like...5 chapters or something.... So if theres any way you could like PM them to me soon, that'd be good. I believe I'm leaving the 18th...maybe I won't be missing too much...I dunno'. >_< )

Familiar? What do you mean?

Thanks.




I'll send you the chapters in case you're going to just about leave and the chapters aren't all posted yet.

I'm just now thinking that The Oddysey (don't know if you've read it) was kind of similar to that part of the story (When Jericho wasn't supposed to stray from the path or whatever).

And, yeah, I'll PM you soon before I'm leaving, so I can read anything I'll be missing.

 

[Bulerias]

Wow. The whole "don't stray away from the path" stuff seems really familiar...

Great job, though.

(As I said before, Bul, I'm leaving on vacation soon, and I think I'll miss the last like...5 chapters or something.... So if theres any way you could like PM them to me soon, that'd be good. I believe I'm leaving the 18th...maybe I won't be missing too much...I dunno'. >_< )

Familiar? What do you mean?

Thanks.




I'll send you the chapters in case you're going to just about leave and the chapters aren't all posted yet.

I'm just now thinking that The Oddysey (don't know if you've read it) was kind of similar to that part of the story (When Jericho wasn't supposed to stray from the path or whatever).

And, yeah, I'll PM you soon before I'm leaving, so I can read anything I'll be missing.

Ah, The Iliad And The Odyssey? Or are you talking about something else?

 

[Grawr]

Wow. The whole "don't stray away from the path" stuff seems really familiar...

Great job, though.

(As I said before, Bul, I'm leaving on vacation soon, and I think I'll miss the last like...5 chapters or something.... So if theres any way you could like PM them to me soon, that'd be good. I believe I'm leaving the 18th...maybe I won't be missing too much...I dunno'. >_< )

Familiar? What do you mean?

Thanks.




I'll send you the chapters in case you're going to just about leave and the chapters aren't all posted yet.

I'm just now thinking that The Oddysey (don't know if you've read it) was kind of similar to that part of the story (When Jericho wasn't supposed to stray from the path or whatever).

And, yeah, I'll PM you soon before I'm leaving, so I can read anything I'll be missing.

Ah, The Iliad And The Odyssey? Or are you talking about something else?

The Oddysey is the sequel to the Iliad, I believe. Yes, thats what I'm talking about. Oddyseus wasn't supposed to stray from his path either, really (take the Siren's song, for example).

 

[Bulerias]

Wow. The whole "don't stray away from the path" stuff seems really familiar...

Great job, though.

(As I said before, Bul, I'm leaving on vacation soon, and I think I'll miss the last like...5 chapters or something.... So if theres any way you could like PM them to me soon, that'd be good. I believe I'm leaving the 18th...maybe I won't be missing too much...I dunno'. >_< )

Familiar? What do you mean?

Thanks.




I'll send you the chapters in case you're going to just about leave and the chapters aren't all posted yet.

I'm just now thinking that The Oddysey (don't know if you've read it) was kind of similar to that part of the story (When Jericho wasn't supposed to stray from the path or whatever).

And, yeah, I'll PM you soon before I'm leaving, so I can read anything I'll be missing.

Ah, The Iliad And The Odyssey? Or are you talking about something else?

The Oddysey is the sequel to the Iliad, I believe. Yes, thats what I'm talking about. Oddyseus wasn't supposed to stray from his path either, really (take the Siren's song, for example).

Yep, I've read all that. You know, though, I had no intention of emulating anything that was featured in those books (fantastic, though, weren't they? Homer were crafted masterpieces...), though I gotta say you bring up a good point.

 

[Grawr]

Wow. The whole "don't stray away from the path" stuff seems really familiar...

Great job, though.

(As I said before, Bul, I'm leaving on vacation soon, and I think I'll miss the last like...5 chapters or something.... So if theres any way you could like PM them to me soon, that'd be good. I believe I'm leaving the 18th...maybe I won't be missing too much...I dunno'. >_< )

Familiar? What do you mean?

Thanks.




I'll send you the chapters in case you're going to just about leave and the chapters aren't all posted yet.

I'm just now thinking that The Oddysey (don't know if you've read it) was kind of similar to that part of the story (When Jericho wasn't supposed to stray from the path or whatever).

And, yeah, I'll PM you soon before I'm leaving, so I can read anything I'll be missing.

Ah, The Iliad And The Odyssey? Or are you talking about something else?

The Oddysey is the sequel to the Iliad, I believe. Yes, thats what I'm talking about. Oddyseus wasn't supposed to stray from his path either, really (take the Siren's song, for example).

Yep, I've read all that. You know, though, I had no intention of emulating anything that was featured in those books (fantastic, though, weren't they? Homer were crafted masterpieces...), though I gotta say you bring up a good point.

No, I'm not saying you had the intention of emulating that stuff at all. I just found it similar, in a good way.




(Yeah, Homer's stuff was pretty fantastic. I'm not really a big Epic fan, but I did like those...)

 

[Bulerias]

I have posted Chapters 10 and 11 in the second post because I got past the limit in the first post...

 

[Propaganda Man]

Don't really see how the story made progress. But I like how you used memory of his loved ones to empower him to survive and continue on.

 

[Bulerias]

Don't really see how the story made progress. But I like how you used memory of his loved ones to empower him to survive and continue on.

It wasn't so much the story as it was the character development...

 

[Tennis=Life]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

 

[JJH]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

Um, Jericho dies, falls in love with an angel, dies again, and gets kidnapped.

 

[Tennis=Life]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

Um, Jericho dies, falls in love with an angel, dies again, and gets kidnapped.

How can he die if he's dead already? Is there like another world after you die?

 

[Propaganda Man]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

The best way would to read it or read my posts in this thread.

 

[Tennis=Life]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

The best way would to read it or read my posts in this thread.

It's kind of a long read, and I don't like long reads, especially on the internet.

 

[Bulerias]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

Um, Jericho dies, falls in love with an angel, dies again, and gets kidnapped.

How can he die if he's dead already? Is there like another world after you die?

Your best bet would be to read it to understand it.

 

[Tennis=Life]

I read the prologue like a while ago and I've been forgetting to read, so would someone catch me up with the rest of the book?

Um, Jericho dies, falls in love with an angel, dies again, and gets kidnapped.

How can he die if he's dead already? Is there like another world after you die?

Your best bet would be to read it to understand it.

Oh, also.....umm Chapters 7-9 aren't there....

 

[Bulerias]

Oh, sorry about that. They're back up now.

 

[Tennis=Life]

Oh, sorry about that. They're back up now.

K, I'll see if I can read it sometime.

Wow, 11,000 words......

 

[Bulerias]

Oh, sorry about that. They're back up now.

K, I'll see if I can read it sometime.

Wow, 11,000 words......

That's around half of the first half... Basically a fourth of the whole story.

 

[Tennis=Life]

The longest I've wrote is like 1,000 words.............and that took forever well because it was kind of a boring essay.

 

[UltraByte]

The longest I've wrote is like 1,000 words.............and that took forever well because it was kind of a boring essay.

Yeah, good luck in high school.