Paradox (Chapter 18)

[Propaganda Man]

I just don't see the point to it. These last few chapters...where are all these emotions coming from? He had known those people for less than 24 hours.

How is it 24 hours? Read the last few chapters.

"It's been over a week now..."

And then after that, it was noted that many weeks - or more realistically, months - have passed.

I mean with the characters he felt such emotion for.

 

[Bulerias]

I just don't see the point to it. These last few chapters...where are all these emotions coming from? He had known those people for less than 24 hours.

How is it 24 hours? Read the last few chapters.

"It's been over a week now..."

And then after that, it was noted that many weeks - or more realistically, months - have passed.

I mean with the characters he felt such emotion for.

The emotion he felt for Alejandra was natural, was it not? He knew his parents ever since he was born... And as for Athos, seeing the one who sent him on his path die "just like that" was enough to stir many emotions in him.

 

[Grawr]

Where are the next chapters??? D=

 

[Gabby]

Where are the next chapters??? D=

yes where are the chapters

 

[Bulerias]

This is it, people... The chapters that explain it all.

 

[UltraByte]

D:

Wowwwwww.... That's crazy.... Er.... *leaves to go think for a while*

 

[Bulerias]

I wonder how many of you expected something like this to happen. I bet none.


Even without knowing Alejandra's back story, though, I put enough hints in the earlier chapters so that some of you may have guessed at this. However, I see that none of you have. I guess that's a good thing, since everything's a surprise for you now.

So... Did I do away with "every damn cliche" now, doubters?

 

[UltraByte]

So... Did I do away with "every damn cliche" now, doubters?

.....yes.....

 

[Bulerias]

So... Did I do away with "every damn cliche" now, doubters?

.....yes.....

Haha.




But seriously, I don't even know how I got this idea. It originally just started with the thunderclaps and thunderbattles, but as you can see, it evolved drastically... And this isn't the end of the "HOLY CRAP" moments. They're all just to come.

 

[Propaganda Man]

I've only read 14 so far. And I am not trying to be negative here but I didn't really understand why Jericho is being so calm and asking such unnecessary questions.

"Whatever do you mean?"

I thought Jericho was in a rush. Normally, people in haste say "What are you saying?"

 

[Bulerias]

I've only read 14 so far. And I am not trying to be negative here but I didn't really understand why Jericho is being so calm and asking such unnecessary questions.

"Whatever do you mean?"

I thought Jericho was in a rush. Normally, people in haste say "What are you saying?"

His curiosity is getting the better of him, you could say, and he is just discovering his honed senses.

But you do have a point, that's definitely something to edit...

 

[Grawr]

Wow...





And then, we'll have it finished tommorow, huh? D=


BTW, typo?

 

[Bulerias]

Wow...





And then, we'll have it finished tommorow, huh? D=


BTW, typo?

 

[Grawr]

Wow...





And then, we'll have it finished tommorow, huh? D=


BTW, typo?

 

[Bulerias]

Wow...





And then, we'll have it finished tommorow, huh? D=


BTW, typo?

 

[Grawr]

Wow...





And then, we'll have it finished tommorow, huh? D=


BTW, typo?

 

[Bulerias]

Wow...





And then, we'll have it finished tommorow, huh? D=


BTW, typo?

 

[Bulerias]

So, Propaganda Man... Did you finish the 15th Chapter? It's oh-so satisfying.

 

[Propaganda Man]

So, Propaganda Man... Did you finish the 15th Chapter? It's oh-so satisfying.

No, I'm about to leave for Canada and I'm just making sure everything is set up before I leave. I just entered "Make Me Cry Nintendo" to POTW and emailed myself other things. I'll read it when I get back.

 

[Bulerias]

So, Propaganda Man... Did you finish the 15th Chapter? It's oh-so satisfying.

No, I'm about to leave for Canada and I'm just making sure everything is set up before I leave. I just entered "Make Me Cry Nintendo" to POTW and emailed myself other things. I'll read it when I get back.

Okay. But it's like... It explains EVERYTHING that happened earlier.