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[xxyume08xx]

Mine is in my signature if you want.. But it is under construction and not at all amazing. >_<

~Dreaming of Aincrad~
Ahhhh, 8pm is my favourite music, so peaceful <3 Firstly, I love the river pattern you have surrounding the plaza. Also really like how your paths are a continuation of the bricks although the colour is a little off~ However, I would change the river pattern leading to the cafe since it's like I'm walking on water xD I know you're still working on it but here are a few suggestions~ Love how you have so many flowers so maybe you could mix and match different colours, both with normal flowers and hybrids to create more colour around town. I would also fit in trees and bushes into that combination to maybe line roads and such, like what you started to do in some parts~ Visiting Kyriss's house~ Woahhh, I really like how you did the main room, its like a little greenhouse but it has a piano in it, very nice~ Other rooms I assume are still expanding~ Visiting Marie's house~ Ooou, its kinda like a little camping tent right now, but I'm assuming you're going to expand it? Overall, very good start, would love to see the flowers added to the paths~ Will definitely come back to see it's progress!​

 

[xxyume08xx]

you can visit mine, but its not updated.. I'm building my 2nd character and i changed my paths, but feel free to dream my town

~Dreaming of Tokyo~
Love how you have little goodies sitting in front of the tree waiting for me ^-^ Imma kappa! <3 Not sure if you changed your water patterns or not but I really like them ^-^ I also really like how you have bushes and trees lining your paths~ Although, I would suggest using the same bush or maybe a pattern of different ones~ Love how you have a whole variety of pwps, but I would suggest moving the cube one since I don't think it fits with the "Egyptian" theme x3 I also really like your bamboo all around town~ I would definitely suggest breeding more hybrids to make your town more colourful~ Visiting Luffy's house~ I really like all your river patterns around your house. The fencing around your house makes it look like a house built on water~ Oooou, its a restaurant themed room, really like that~ Your arcade room at the back is also really cool, love that one piece sign ;D Your forest themed rooms are pretty neat as well~ Overall, great town~ Really like how you did your house but would definitely like to see more flowers~ Be sure to let me know when you update next ^^​

 

[ali3nchildr3n]

4700-3579-7804
Critiques definitely welcome im just starting to really construct it into a cute little town xoxo

 

[Jesusrey91]

What the ... my reply got erased... DA in my sig...

 

[ChalkZoned]

~Dreaming of Aincrad~
Ahhhh, 8pm is my favourite music, so peaceful <3 Firstly, I love the river pattern you have surrounding the plaza. Also really like how your paths are a continuation of the bricks although the colour is a little off~ However, I would change the river pattern leading to the cafe since it's like I'm walking on water xD I know you're still working on it but here are a few suggestions~ Love how you have so many flowers so maybe you could mix and match different colours, both with normal flowers and hybrids to create more colour around town. I would also fit in trees and bushes into that combination to maybe line roads and such, like what you started to do in some parts~ Visiting Kyriss's house~ Woahhh, I really like how you did the main room, its like a little greenhouse but it has a piano in it, very nice~ Other rooms I assume are still expanding~ Visiting Marie's house~ Ooou, its kinda like a little camping tent right now, but I'm assuming you're going to expand it? Overall, very good start, would love to see the flowers added to the paths~ Will definitely come back to see it's progress!​

Ahh. Thank you! Yeah, they don't have a color to match the real stone unfortunately. ;w; I'm still expanding the basement room, but the upstairs is gonna stay small I think. I like the close quarters. ^_^ And Marie's house is going to stay a tent. <3 I'm still breeding enough flowers to fill up the empty spaces you see.

Thank you so much for your advice though. I think I will change that path by the cafe now that I re-examine it. XD

 

[xxyume08xx]

mines in sig, need to update, maybe update today

~Dreaming of Pawnee~
Right off the bat, I see you have tons of presents waiting for me <3 I really like your lighter road patterns although I'm not too sure if I like the black one~ Your river patterns in the main plaza kinda just cuts off as well x3 However, I do really like your flower combinations you have around town as well as your use of bushes, although I would suggest using a single type or make a pattern of them~ I like how you've got a variety of pwps around town as well~ I do notice that you have a couple bare patches though. Not sure if its just cuz you didn't update but I would definitely suggest filling it in with pwps, flowers, patterns etc. Visiting Misty's house~ Love the little restaurant~ Also, very nice 7-11 shop at the back. As I go through the rooms, I see most of your rooms are different themed restaurants xD (The basement room looks like a dim sum place with the kart x3) Visiting Mikasa's house~ woah, very tripy room~ but the back room was furnished very nicely~ Room upstairs gives off a kinda be beachy feel c: assume you're working on furnishing the rest of the house? Visiting Cecilia's house~ Ooou princess themed c: Expanding? xD Overall, I think you've got a really pretty town~ Would like to see those bare patches filled up though ^-^​

 

[xxyume08xx]

can you visit ninten? I last updated it on easter, and the clothes i set out are a little weird, but it's still under construction. DA in signature

~Dreaming of Ninten~
Firstly, the outfit you left for me is sooo cutee <3 I really like how you started lining your paths with bushes, I would suggest using the same type of bush or make a pattern out of them~ The little water pattern is cute x3 I like how you have a whole bunch of little pwps around town as well ^^ Now time for my suggestions~ I really like your layout of the town, but I would definitely recommend building another bridge to get around easier. I would also suggest breeding more hybrids to make your town more colourful although I'm sure you're working on that xD I would also suggest lining your paths with trees and flowers or bushes, like what you've been doing around retail~ Visiting Kara's house~ The main room is sooo cute! Love the refreshed alpine furniture! The little rooms you have are nice, I like how cozy they feel although I'm sure you're working on expanding c: Overall, great start! I think the first priority is definitely to put in another bridge and landscaping can come slowly after~ Would like to come back to see its progress ^-^​

 

[xxyume08xx]

4700-3579-7804
Critiques definitely welcome im just starting to really construct it into a cute little town xoxo

~Dreaming of Atlantis~
I think the layout of your town is very nice, love how one of your houses is on a ledge close to the ocean~ Not sure if you're planning on setting down paths or not, but I would definitely recommend that so people visiting won't be running around aimlessly, wearing down your grass xD I might also move one of the bridges to somewhere behind your town hall for convenience sake xD I like how you've started to put pwps around town since those will really add to the landscape~ I would also recommend getting more flowers, both normal and hybrids (when you say cute little town, I see lots of pink and purple x3) to line out your future paths, or maybe even dirt paths if you want to put the time into those~ Bushes and trees are also a great path liner! Visiting Cheyenne's house~ Oooou, I really like this room, I love how you have the little capricorn thingy welcoming me in~ Your upstairs is also starting to look like a great regal room c: Also your rococo room <3 love that series~ Visiting Bryce's house~ Ooou, a piano c: I'd say your working on expanding? Overall, great start to your town. I'd say next steps would be putting down paths to line out where you want visitors to walk and where you don't~ Will definitely come back to see the progress~​

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What the ... my reply got erased... DA in my sig...

~Dreaming of Gotham~
Ooou, I see you have an car road kind os pattern, not sure if I personally like that or not~ O: I like how most of your villagers are quite close to each other, you can probably make that into a little neighbourhood in the future if you wanted to xD I would suggest finishing your roads so you have a path for people to walk on to avoid grass wear~ I would also suggest using trees, flowers (normal and hybrids) and bushes to line your roads~ I might have missed them but I don't think I see any pwps around? I would definitely suggest adding some since those really do add a lot of character to your town~ If you don't want your main road to go to smaller little areas, maybe you could us a separate, smaller pattern branching off the main road to reach those places. Visiting Jesus's house~ Ooou, this looks like a very nice little office, I would definitely want to work here~ I would probably change the wallpaper and flooring in the upstairs room since it makes the room look a little shabby ._. Visiting Kelevra's house~ Expanding? xD Overall, great start, I would probably finish the roads and start with a couple pwps around town as a next step~​

 

[xxyume08xx]

Thats all the DA's I have, Remember to leave yours here if you haven't so I can continue dreaming! ​

 

[xxyume08xx]

Bump~​

 

[xxyume08xx]

Bump before bed, still looking for more DAs~​

 

[Kairii]

5200-4148-5515

That's my dream address, if you'd like to have a look at my town. Huge WIP. ^^
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[ethre]

Can you come back to my town and let me know what else should be tweaked?

 

[BerryPop]

~Dreaming of Ninten~
Firstly, the outfit you left for me is sooo cutee <3 I really like how you started lining your paths with bushes, I would suggest using the same type of bush or make a pattern out of them~ The little water pattern is cute x3 I like how you have a whole bunch of little pwps around town as well ^^ Now time for my suggestions~ I really like your layout of the town, but I would definitely recommend building another bridge to get around easier. I would also suggest breeding more hybrids to make your town more colourful although I'm sure you're working on that xD I would also suggest lining your paths with trees and flowers or bushes, like what you've been doing around retail~ Visiting Kara's house~ The main room is sooo cute! Love the refreshed alpine furniture! The little rooms you have are nice, I like how cozy they feel although I'm sure you're working on expanding c: Overall, great start! I think the first priority is definitely to put in another bridge and landscaping can come slowly after~ Would like to come back to see its progress ^-^​

I'm doing MAJOR work right now. I added a second bridge and am replacing the bushes as we speak
Thank's for the tips! ^o^

 

[Jesusrey91]

Thank you for the review yume!

 

[xxyume08xx]

5200-4148-5515

That's my dream address, if you'd like to have a look at my town. Huge WIP. ^^
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~Dreaming of Nexus~
Firstly, I really like your paths, the random little water heart is really cute <3 I also really like how you're starting to line your plaza with bushes, I'm a hugeeee bush person x3 Can't wait to see what you're going to line your paths with ^-^ Really like how you used all the same bushes c: and those little trees are so cute xD I think I would definitely try to get more flowers, both normal and hybrids to populate your town. I'm sure you're also working on pwps since those give a lot of character to your town ^-^ Hmm, uoi've got a road behind Scoot's house that kinda leads to the river xD not finished yet? LOL Visiting Kairi's house~ Omg, love this room, the little cafe is really cute <3 The princess room upstairs is also very nice~ I assume you're working on expanding the rest of your rooms xD Overall, very good start! Will definitely keep an eye on the progress ^-^/ Btw, is your town name a reference to League? xD​

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Can you come back to my town and let me know what else should be tweaked?

Sure thing! ^-^

~Dreaming of Ponyvill~
Oh man, what time did you save it at, I don't think I've ever heard that music before ._. I like how you've added the roses lining your path, I think that pattern looks very nice! I still think you've got a fair amount of empty space mainly in the section above the river that you could expand on~ I would definitely continue adding flowers to sections below the river as well as bushes since i don't think I see any below the river, but around the plaza and town hall looks very nice~ Visiting Shaymin's house~ Love the sweets room! Don't remember if you had that or not before O: But the spa to the right is very nicely furnished imo xD Omg, the back room is like jungle! Love that idea! And stale cupcakes <3 Ooou~ a cafe downstairs, very neat~ And you changed upstairs to a sloppy room~ Visiting Candy's house~ Ooou, a library, I think this is the first time I've seen a room like this O: very nice~ Upstairs looks like it'll turn into a very comfy study~ Visiting Mew's house~ Very relaxing main room, I've always loved the looks of these watery temple kinda rooms~ I like this room very much x3 but expanding the rest of the ouse I assume xD Visitng Celebi's house~ Expanding? Overall, I think I'd like to see more pwps around town, however, your houses have been changed a lot! I really like what you've done with the houses and can't wait to see the rest of them complete!​

 

[Yui Z]

I'd like to visit your town sometime later. =P You can visit my old town, Redwood, if you're ever bored with nothing to do. It's my very own masterpiece (or the closest I've ever gotten to so far hehe).

Dream address: 6800-2775-1196

 

[xxyume08xx]

I'd like to visit your town sometime later. =P You can visit my old town, Redwood, if you're ever bored with nothing to do. It's my very own masterpiece (or the closest I've ever gotten to so far hehe).

Dream address: 6800-2775-1196

Sorry for the long wait!

~Dreaming of Redwood~
Omg, thank you for all the presents once I wake up <3 I really like how you have the bamboo and carnations surrounding the plaza~ I think your little directional signs are very cute~ I love all the flowers as well as the combinations you put them in o3o and you saved during cherry blossoms! Love it~ The way you lined your paths with the bushes and trees is very nice as well~ Omg, you incorporated clovers into a part of your path, I was thinking of doing that but wasn't too sure xD Love the exterior of your town although there is some open space to the top left of the plaza xD Visiting Zoey's house~ Omg this is a very cute living room, I love how you customized the furniture with the AC pattern! Although Im not too sure if the lovely phone thing matches xD I love how its designed as a little house with all the rooms and furniture refurbished with the pattern xD Woah, your basement is a cafe of sorts and it even has a little arcade area xD Very nice house in general~ Visiting Lucy's house~ ooou, a school O: every towns gotta have one xD with a kindergarten room Overall, I can see why you call this a masterpiece, you've done a great job on this town! I know its your old town so not sure if your gunna make any changes, but very nice!​

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Im actually getting quite busy now a days however, don't stop posting DAs! The reviews might come a bit slower but I will get to them! ^-^​

 

[xxyume08xx]

Bump~

 

[Xsy]

I'll let you take a look at my town. :3

4900-2179-2720

But let it be known:
-Iggly ruined a path, so that's why the area around his house seems ... unused. Waiting for him to move.
-Goldie kinda ruined an area too. Both of these people need to leave my town.
-I have put 0 effort into my house. Literally none. Its just a mess of crap that I just needed to drop somewhere.
-Bank's house is a nice little bank, though, so feel free to check that house out. :3
-There are a few gaps here and there I'll need to fill with more flowers, but I'm too lazy to get those done now.
-The beach is where I store my spare flowers... nothing special there, either.

Other than that, I would love any ideas or criticism.