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[xxyume08xx]

My DA is in my sig, it's also still under some development but feel free to stop by.

~Dreaming of Ophylix~
I really like the pattern in the plaza as well as the river pattern. I also like how you surround your plaza with bushes and flowers, if only you could plant bushes right next to fences xD The mossy path is also real nice too although I'm not too sure if the transition between that and the lighter path you have is to my fancy or not xD Also the rock there blocking the two bushes... stupid rocks >.> LOL Freckles really is just smack dead right in front of your house, at least she'll be moving away~ x3 I assume some of your paths aren't finished yet but what you have so far is really nice c: I like how you lined parts of your path and would suggest lining other parts of your path like that too although I understand bushes are hard to come by >__< Also, Rosie is so cute <3 I can see your flower gardens xD Visiting Pheobe's house~ Oooou, your main room looks kinda like those places you get wedding dresses xD Looks very pretty c: I also really like the rococo room, it always fascinates me to see the refurbished rococo furniture for some reason x3 I see you have a picture room downstairs ~ I was actually thinking of turning one of my rooms into a picture room too xD gives me inspiration c: Visiting Caterina's house~ Her house is under development? ^-^ Overall, very nice town ^-^ I see your hybrid gardens xD Ca't wait to comeback after you've bred some ​

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Thats all for tonight~ Will continue tomorrow ^-^​

 

[MindlessPatch]

Here's my review on your town

I absolutely love your combination of stone paths and river paths. If anything your town could probably benefit from some hybrids to increase the flower combos. I love how you've decorated with bamboo around the plaza and leading to the train station. It doesn't feel overwhelming (like some bamboo in other towns) and really compliments the stone paths and red pansies.
You have some beautiful PWPs spread across your town and that clock (not sure what the project is called) surrounded by white and purple violets by the train station is absolutely gorgeous. And those two lunge chairs overlooking the beach are such a great idea. I envy the placement of your lighthouse as in my town where I wanted to build a lighthouse Kid Cat went ahead a built his home there. The fact your town is in nighttime really suits it and adds a really nice touch.
Jenn's house:
Oh my gosh. The mixture of sets looks amazing! It's such a cosy little house judging by the rooms that seem finished. It really has a nice homely feel to it and the two rugs in the first room and right room makes me think of a little country house with a warm fireplace. I can tell it's a work in progress but I really like the main room and room off to the right.

 

[R3i]

dream address in sig

 

[Rafflesia]

DA in sig

 

[Arabelle]

Dream Address is in my signature ^_^
Still work in progress, but I worked on organizing my flowers earlier with my friends (didn't get all of it though xD.. I had wayyy tooo many flowers ahaha).. oh and if you take a look at my house, you can just ignore the basement it's pretty much used as a storage >.<

 

[akidas]

DA is in my sig!

 

[MightyMunchlax]

~Dreaming of Ophylix~
I really like the pattern in the plaza as well as the river pattern. I also like how you surround your plaza with bushes and flowers, if only you could plant bushes right next to fences xD The mossy path is also real nice too although I'm not too sure if the transition between that and the lighter path you have is to my fancy or not xD Also the rock there blocking the two bushes... stupid rocks >.> LOL Freckles really is just smack dead right in front of your house, at least she'll be moving away~ x3 I assume some of your paths aren't finished yet but what you have so far is really nice c: I like how you lined parts of your path and would suggest lining other parts of your path like that too although I understand bushes are hard to come by >__< Also, Rosie is so cute <3 I can see your flower gardens xD Visiting Pheobe's house~ Oooou, your main room looks kinda like those places you get wedding dresses xD Looks very pretty c: I also really like the rococo room, it always fascinates me to see the refurbished rococo furniture for some reason x3 I see you have a picture room downstairs ~ I was actually thinking of turning one of my rooms into a picture room too xD gives me inspiration c: Visiting Caterina's house~ Her house is under development? ^-^ Overall, very nice town ^-^ I see your hybrid gardens xD Ca't wait to comeback after you've bred some ​

Thanks! :3 Yeah a lot of things are still underdevelopment and I have a lot of hybrid breeding grounds. I wasn't sure if I was keeping Cat for a while, but now that I am I'll be working on her house. I'm glad you see the problem that is Freckles. XD I long for the day when she pings to leave. Thanks for the review!

 

[xxyume08xx]

Here's my review on your town

I absolutely love your combination of stone paths and river paths. If anything your town could probably benefit from some hybrids to increase the flower combos. I love how you've decorated with bamboo around the plaza and leading to the train station. It doesn't feel overwhelming (like some bamboo in other towns) and really compliments the stone paths and red pansies.
You have some beautiful PWPs spread across your town and that clock (not sure what the project is called) surrounded by white and purple violets by the train station is absolutely gorgeous. And those two lunge chairs overlooking the beach are such a great idea. I envy the placement of your lighthouse as in my town where I wanted to build a lighthouse Kid Cat went ahead a built his home there. The fact your town is in nighttime really suits it and adds a really nice touch.
Jenn's house:
Oh my gosh. The mixture of sets looks amazing! It's such a cosy little house judging by the rooms that seem finished. It really has a nice homely feel to it and the two rugs in the first room and right room makes me think of a little country house with a warm fireplace. I can tell it's a work in progress but I really like the main room and room off to the right.

Thank you so much for your review~ ^-^ I'm actually in the progress of trying to breed more hybrids, some days are better then others in producing them xD As for the houses, still a major work in progress, I'm just working on collecting furniture right now xD​

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Can you visit mine..? ^_^ Thanks so much! c:

~Dreaming of Ponyvill~
(Yay~ Pokemon <3)
Love how you left little things for me to play with in the plaza <3 I'm gunna get fat off ice cream even in my dreams xD I also really like your paths, I think they're really cute and match your town. The welcome sign in front of the train station is too cute too omg x3 Couldn't help but notice that parts of your town are a bit bare, assuming you're working on those parts~ I would suggest gathering more flowers and trees to line your path. However, I really like how you put a piece of candy in between each tree~ Also, I like how you arranged your bushes so far and would love to see that continue ^-^ One more suggestion for bushes, maybe you could create a pattern of every other or keep all the same bushes around one area to make it more unified~ Visiting Shaymin's house~ I can see you're still working on expanding the house but what you have so far is really nice ^-^ I really like the kitchen like room upstairs, I think you put that together really well~ Visiting Candy's house~ What you have so far feels really comfy c: I really like the carpet you used in the main room O: Visiting Mew's/Celebi's house~ Expanding? x3 All in all, lovely town you have so far, will definitely come back to see it progress further~ ^-^/​

 

[xxyume08xx]

My DA is in my signature. Feel free to come by! I haven't finished my landscaping, but it's coming out nicely.

~Dreaming of Kattown~
Omg, those path patterns are so cute x3 I also really like the two topiaries leading to your town hall <3 I see little spaces in the paths and I'm excited to see what you're going to put in those - Oh bushes! I really like that idea~ The area around your fountain is really nice too ^-^ I also really like how your campsite is in an isolated area behind a pine forest (I've always like pine forests, I've just never got to putting it in my own town xD) c: I would suggest breeding more hybrids and lining your paths with a combination of different colour flowers, bushes and trees~ Visiting Hannah's house~ Oooou, pink xD I like how very room has a certain theme to it, give a different feeling every time you walk into a room~ I would continue that different room theme in the basement as well ^-^ Visiting Daniel's house~ I assume you're working on expanding this one xD But still really like the one themed room c: Overall, great start! ^-^ I can see you've been working hard on trying to get all the bushes xD Looking forwards to seeing it progress even further~​

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I can start VMing once I've reviewed your town, just let me know if you want me to do that~

Only have time for 2 this morning~ Look forward to more tonight ^-^ ​

 

[xxyume08xx]

My dream address is in the sig.... Oh wait I don't have a sig. Lol it's 5800-2701-1467

Some parts still under construction.

Omg don't come visit mine.... It's crap compared to yours... /:

Nahhh~ don't say that, everyone's gotta start somewhere ^-^

~Dreaming of Franklin~
Firstly, I really like your paths and river patterns, I think they match each other very well. However, I came across a smaller brick pattern and I'm not sure if I like the transition between the two path types. I see you have quite a lot of hybrids, so jelly x3 I would definitely suggest lining the paths above the river with trees and bushes as the landscape does look a little flat. You could also try different flower combinations in some part of town - there are a couple places you did this like the white and black roses - Also, for a few pwps (lamppost), putting them in the middle of the road looks fine, but for others (bench), I think it would look better if you surrounded it with bushes and flowers or something. There are also a couple places your main road doesn't reach, maybe you could try finding another smaller pattern and have that branch off from your main path to reach those spaces. Visiting Jaime's's house~ I like how each room has its own separate themes ~ really like the rococo room xD Visiting Joey's house ~ Themed rooms again, nice ^-^/ Left room has been expanded, but you forgot to move the furniture back in place x3 All in all, you have a nice town indeed, would love to see some more lining of the paths ~​

 

[Guero101]

Nahhh~ don't say that, everyone's gotta start somewhere ^-^

~Dreaming of Franklin~
Firstly, I really like your paths and river patterns, I think they match each other very well. However, I came across a smaller brick pattern and I'm not sure if I like the transition between the two path types. I see you have quite a lot of hybrids, so jelly x3 I would definitely suggest lining the paths above the river with trees and bushes as the landscape does look a little flat. You could also try different flower combinations in some part of town - there are a couple places you did this like the white and black roses - Also, for a few pwps (lamppost), putting them in the middle of the road looks fine, but for others (bench), I think it would look better if you surrounded it with bushes and flowers or something. There are also a couple places your main road doesn't reach, maybe you could try finding another smaller pattern and have that branch off from your main path to reach those spaces. Visiting Jaime's's house~ I like how each room has its own separate themes ~ really like the rococo room xD Visiting Joey's house ~ Themed rooms again, nice ^-^/ Left room has been expanded, but you forgot to move the furniture back in place x3 All in all, you have a nice town indeed, would love to see some more lining of the paths ~​

Thank you soooo much!! It's work in progress, but your review means a lot!! can I ask which places you were talking about that my main road doesn't reach?

 

[xxyume08xx]

Thank you soooo much!! It's work in progress, but your review means a lot!! can I ask which places you were talking about that my main road doesn't reach?

Hmmm, I dont entirely remember but I believe beside your campsite, there was an area of land where there were few or no roads O: Not too sure, I'll revisit once I get through the rest of the towns ^-^​

 

[Guero101]

Hmmm, I dont entirely remember but I believe beside your campsite, there was an area of land where there were few or no roads O: Not too sure, I'll revisit once I get through the rest of the towns ^-^​

Well I kinda don't want paths at the campsite. I wanna make it give it a Forrest feeling. Like how I planted the cedars around it. I wanna have nothing but cedars and camping related pwps in that area. Anyway when your not busy you could possibly come and help me out a bit?

 

[xxyume08xx]

Well I kinda don't want paths at the campsite. I wanna make it give it a Forrest feeling. Like how I planted the cedars around it. I wanna have nothing but cedars and camping related pwps in that area. Anyway when your not busy you could possibly come and help me out a bit?

Ooou okay~ I understand, I was only giving suggestions so its really your choice if you do them or not ^-^ and suree! No problem at all~​

 

[Guero101]

Ooou okay~ I understand, I was only giving suggestions so its really your choice if you do them or not ^-^ and suree! No problem at all~​

No but some of your suggestions are good! whenever you can swing by. Let me know

 

[Swiftstream]

Dream address in signature!
Thanks

 

[tarakdeep]

Mine is in my sig the second code

 

[Anie]

Mine is still a work in progress, but I am kinda happy with out it is turning out. My address is in my signature. I will visit yours tonight!

 

[xxyume08xx]

Mine is in my sig the second code

I don't see your signature O:​

 

[tarakdeep]

Mabey beacuse I'm on mobile Idk but you can check my profile it should be there and we havethe same path