Looking for dream town advice

[mayorvanessa]

Hiya, my town is currently a big work in progress so I'd like some advice on what to do with some areas of my town. Such as the south part of my town behind most of the villager houses (Carmen, Beau, Tex, Diva and Broffina). Like what I should I add, change, get rid of, ect. since those areas do seem a bit empty. I would love some advice and feedback from other people. I just updated recently. c:

If you'd like to help me out, my dream address is: 7800-3928-3261
It's also in my signature.

 

[mayorvanessa]

Bump ^u^

 

[mayorvanessa]

Bump ;o

 

[radical6]

eh, ill check it out in a bit (or tomorrow i guess)

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Spoiler: review

likes:
-i like the mayors home. the main room feels casual and the little bath in the back is cute. the left room is alright.
-i like the bottom right corner of your town. the trees and everything are nice and the little picnic thing is cute
-love the little illuminated heart in front of the town hall. looks cute and matches well
-cute bonfire thing

dislikes:
-first off, your town plaza looks kinda weird. the right side of the plaza looks kinda off. i get that its supposed to hook up with the flower clock but it looks weird. maybe cover up the whole plaza instead?

-your town is kinda bare in the south, yeah. add some patterns maybe? or fill it up with flowers. and it could use some more trees. but thats how most people fill up bare spots in their town. the orange trees look odd over there too btw, why does it go from saplings to orange trees? but basically fill the spot up with patterns or flowers/bushes. whatever you wanna do. maybe add some water or stuff?? but you would need another character to hold patterns

-top right could use some more flowers/trees/patterns/whatever too.

-i did this a bit in my town (plan to get rid of it though) but your path going from 2 to 3/4 is kinda weird. it looks good in some places but when it shrinks down to a smaller path it looks odd. but other people might feel different about it so eh

 

[olivetree123]

I can't post screenshots atm so I'll just do a walkthrough type dealie

1) I'd try either not having paths around the plaza period or covering it all (maybe leaving space allowance for visitors like Redd or Katrina) with your path or some other pattern; as it is it looks kind of random and messy. Same could be applied to the area near the station, too.
I love the little gifts and the rain outfit, though!
The little coffee by the cafe is also really cute omg

2) Instead of having a path down the right side of down, why not try a narrower one + a flower garden or bamboo surrounding the path? Kind of limited with Nate's house in the way, though, so I'm not sure how it'd work out. :C

I love love love the area around the wisteria, and the tree stumps around the campfire are adorable. ; o ;

3) Around the villager houses I'd just simply add flowers; maybe pick a particular color scheme, make a rose rainbow, or just surround their houses with matching colored flowers. The same could go for a lot of small areas around town, too: when in doubt, fill it with flowers.

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Overall I really really like it! It needs a few touch ups here and there but as a whole it looks very nice! c:

 

[mayorvanessa]

I can't post screenshots atm so I'll just do a walkthrough type dealie

1) I'd try either not having paths around the plaza period or covering it all (maybe leaving space allowance for visitors like Redd or Katrina) with your path or some other pattern; as it is it looks kind of random and messy. Same could be applied to the area near the station, too.
I love the little gifts and the rain outfit, though!
The little coffee by the cafe is also really cute omg

2) Instead of having a path down the right side of down, why not try a narrower one + a flower garden or bamboo surrounding the path? Kind of limited with Nate's house in the way, though, so I'm not sure how it'd work out. :C

I love love love the area around the wisteria, and the tree stumps around the campfire are adorable. ; o ;

3) Around the villager houses I'd just simply add flowers; maybe pick a particular color scheme, make a rose rainbow, or just surround their houses with matching colored flowers. The same could go for a lot of small areas around town, too: when in doubt, fill it with flowers.

~
Overall I really really like it! It needs a few touch ups here and there but as a whole it looks very nice! c:

eh, ill check it out in a bit (or tomorrow i guess)

- - - Post Merge - - -

Spoiler: review

likes:
-i like the mayors home. the main room feels casual and the little bath in the back is cute. the left room is alright.
-i like the bottom right corner of your town. the trees and everything are nice and the little picnic thing is cute
-love the little illuminated heart in front of the town hall. looks cute and matches well
-cute bonfire thing

dislikes:
-first off, your town plaza looks kinda weird. the right side of the plaza looks kinda off. i get that its supposed to hook up with the flower clock but it looks weird. maybe cover up the whole plaza instead?

-your town is kinda bare in the south, yeah. add some patterns maybe? or fill it up with flowers. and it could use some more trees. but thats how most people fill up bare spots in their town. the orange trees look odd over there too btw, why does it go from saplings to orange trees? but basically fill the spot up with patterns or flowers/bushes. whatever you wanna do. maybe add some water or stuff?? but you would need another character to hold patterns

-top right could use some more flowers/trees/patterns/whatever too.

-i did this a bit in my town (plan to get rid of it though) but your path going from 2 to 3/4 is kinda weird. it looks good in some places but when it shrinks down to a smaller path it looks odd. but other people might feel different about it so eh

Thank you to both. I'll definitely use your advice c:

 

[mayorvanessa]

bump C: