Locker Man, like some feedback

[David]

made these for my video course. only grade 11 so its not uber pro or anything. i just want some feedback on them.

part 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TwUWJRNIULI

part 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bsyoa1Ivl2E&feature=related

If you liked the movies theres a fan page for locker man and padlock on facebook
http://www.facebook.com/#/pages/Locker-Man/196360523485?ref=ts
http://www.facebook.com/#/pages/Padlock/350835765366?ref=ts

 

[Zex]

Lockermannnnn!

 

[David]

Lockermannnnn!

never again.

 

[kierraaa-]

oolololol
Nice!

 

[Zex]

Lockermannnnn!

never again.

Lockermannnnn!

 

[Bacon Boy]

Liked it. Your're getting better.

 

[David]

Liked it. Your're getting better.

thanks man

 

[Gnome]

Liked it. Your're getting better.

You're*

And I like it.

 

[«Jack»]

It was OK.

 

[Pear]

Haha, awesome.

I wish I had Lockerman at my school. My Locker is as far way from all my classes as humanly possible because my name is first alphabetically. Besides that, its lock hasn't been replaced in the 30 years my school's been open, and only opens 1/3 of the time. Even then, I have to kick it. :/

 

[David]

Haha, awesome.

I wish I had Lockerman at my school. My Locker is as far way from all my classes as humanly possible because my name is first alphabetically. Besides that, its lock hasn't been replaced in the 30 years my school's been open, and only opens 1/3 of the time. Even then, I have to kick it. :/

ahaha thats awesome

 

[AndyB]

Firstly, Zexion- you're an idiot.

Secondly, very nice short movies. Good camera work, nice editing. (awesome music. ;D)
And all for a class, that's just amazing.

 

[SilentHopes]

It was OK.

^

 

[coffeebean!]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

 

[SilentHopes]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

<big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big>ಠ_ಠ</big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big>

 

[David]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

i dont see whats wrong with them, theyre really nice, funny people.

 

[David]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

<big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big>ಠ_ಠ</big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big>

come on dude, none of that crap in my thread please.

 

[coffeebean!]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

i dont see whats wrong with them, theyre really nice, funny people.

They remind me of valley girls. The way they were talking.

 

[David]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

i dont see whats wrong with them, theyre really nice, funny people.

They remind me of valley girls. The way they were talking.

dont knwo what that is but w/e. it was funny when we were shooting it, we had to retake it like 5 times cause of giggling and forgotten lines. it was great.

 

[coffeebean!]

I liked Part 2, the girls at the end of Part 1 make me want to hurt innocent children.

i dont see whats wrong with them, theyre really nice, funny people.

They remind me of valley girls. The way they were talking.

dont knwo what that is but w/e. it was funny when we were shooting it, we had to retake it like 5 times cause of giggling and forgotten lines. it was great.

Alright.

What I mean is, it seems kind of unnatural the way they were speaking. Like it seemed really rehearsed.

"Oh wait, is that my locker?"
"I think it is"
"Wow, are you kidding? Oh my goodness"

It just doesn't seem natural.