Giveaway ~Julian The Fantastical Unicorn Raffle Short Story Extravaganza~ [ENDED]

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Hey everyone! So I've gotten my 7th tier 1 villager from my temp cycling town (darn you just die already! :P) and once again I have all of my dreamies and I don't really care about bells and I know alot of you out there want yourself a piece of that Julian, so I have decided to host another raffle*the audience gasps in total shock*.

But this raffle is going to be different from the others because I'm looking for something specific if you couldn't already tell by the title. I want you to write me a short story. Well to be more specific I want you to complete me a short story. I will start the story off with a paragraph or two just as a introduction then I want you to create a short story out of it. This means have some kind of an ending to it. It doesn't have to be one of those "and they lived happily ever after" endings or anything like that. It doesn't have to be satisfying or answer any questions if you don't want it to. As long as it has some resemblance of an ending. Ending the story on " Jill was about to go outside when she stubbed her toe and then...." doesn't count as an ending. I really don't want to see anything like that.

This contest will just strictly be based on who's story is best. The only "rule" is that you must have dreamie proof of Julian so I know only the people that really want him as a dreamie and not just to sell for profit or trade will get him.

Get creative and whatever comes to your mind just go for it! I'm really intrigued to see what you guys come up with. Have fun guys and good luck :)

Ok here's what you have to work with:

His eyes slowly began to open. Almost immediately his head started throbbing as though someone has broken a beer bottle on his head. As he started to look around he could barely see his own two hands let alone his surroundings. He definitely knew he was inside. The foggy, dusty atmosphere made it hard to breathe. He could hear rats behind him fighting over some kind of food. A dripping sound was coming from the other side of the room that was so loud he could practically feel it. He started to stand up slowly. After a bit of a struggle, he arose to his feet. After he stood up questions immediately started rushing through his head like lava erupting out of a volcano. "What is this place?" "What am I doing here?" "How did I get here?" "Why am I here?"

He knew those questions couldn't be answered in his situation as he looked around, being able to see a little bit better as time passed. He spent hours looking for anything that might give any clue as to where he was or why he was there. He found Nothing. Absolutely nothing. There was no furniture no food nothing just a barren, old, dusty, rat infested, mold filled room. After spending what seemed like a lifetime searching for something in the room he was in,he saw what looked like a book laying flat on the floor in an opposite corner of the room where he had awoken from earlier. He must've looked over that book a thousand times seeing as it was camouflaged seemlessly into the dusty, lifeless, gray colored floor. He grabbed the book and looked at the first page. "Welcome To Hell" written by....him? He was the author? He obviously had no memory of writing any book. Is someone trying to frame him? Is he being taken as a slave for god knows what sick twisted purpose? Is he going to be tortured for information he doesn't even know?

Before his mind could think the worst, he heard a bang on the door.......



Link to the reddit post can be found here: http://www.reddit.com/r/AdoptMyVill..._julian_the_fantastical_unicorn_raffle_short/



List of participants:

TBT: rosielover, Mayor of Hyrule, MannyK

Reddit: BubbySnowFlake, TawnyPriscilla, hellosunnydays, Axamin

Good luck to all the participants!!
 
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Awesome idea, if I didn't already have my own Julian I'd be very tempted to enter!

Good luck to all those searching for their own Unicorn dreamie!
 
Before his mind could think the worst, he heard a bang on the door.......

AND OUT CAME THE SPANISH INQUISITION, because nobody expects the SPANISH INQUISITION

JK, good luck to all the entries!
 
As I wake up from losing consciousness, I am face to face with my enemy the dark lord. "So you thought you could stop me? What a fool you are thinking that you could stop me from taking over the world! Now your foolishness will not only lead you to your doom, but the reason why billions of puny humans will be in my control." He put his head back and laughed his evil maniac laugh. Once he stopped his laugh, he turned his head to me, his glowing blood red eyes looking at me. He smiled at scary as the Cheshire Cat does. "After all you are only my son." I tried to lunge a him, only to realise that metal bonds were strapped tight on me adding to the deadly battle field where time is frozen and the sky is red full of mutant minions and evil psycho killers. I grunt and squirm soon to realise that the metal bonds grow stronger when you try to break out of them. The dark lord walked away and I was left on my own. This isn't he first time I've been against my father. This isn't the first time he has tried to take over everyone and turn me into his dark infested child. My head pumps from the memories of the pain i had from growing up as a child. But I will never be his dark child as I am Marcus, guardian of the good and a progressional magic user and ninja. I focus all my energy and open the bonds. I stretch out and get myself ready - weapons check. Armour check. All parts I inherited off my father (red eye scar down my neck red and dark brown hair and a dark magic rage) showing. I charged out to find an army of werepires waiting for me. I use my telekinesis to swing most

- - - Post Merge - - -

Of then werepires away followed by a power kick and a magic swing. All on the floor now for my father.

Strange I thought only werepires? Where are the rest of the monsters traps? I soon realise the dark lord is living him Against me the ultimate fight of good and evil. I am greeted by a side kick right across the face. I fly to the ground and snarl in pain. I get up and greet my father with a punch only to find him use dark magic to reflect the attack. I get attacked by myself and wrestle my dad to the ground, punching and kicking him with all my might, seeing him struggle and start to laugh happily. He uses his telekinesis to fling me off him but I bring him with me I turn him in the air so he lands on the ground.he then uses dark magic to turn my body against me. I knew I wouldn't make it if that would happen so I focused all my powers into one solid ray And aim at him he then uses all his power to aim at me. He is to strong for me - the force hits me hard and I collide to the ground. I use my power to reflect it At my father. He screams in pain and falls to the ground. I stare at him Nd suddenly realise I have defeated the dark lord. But.. Is this really what I wanted? I walk up to my father. "Dad are you ok?" Isay off my guard. He helped out his hand as if he wanted me to help him up. I reluctantly help him by holdin his hand. Suddenly a terrible pain strikes me. I scream in pain I stare at my hands and see them change to a grey evil colour my brain goes hungry for evil and my teeth turn to fangs - my father is turning me to his dark son!!! As I scream the last good scream of good I hear my father laughing evilly as I turn dark...
 
Err yogi moto check out your signiture... It's been removed and btw when those this end?

I know but i'm just far too lazy to edit it atm :P

Also Idk when it ends that's why it says "TBA" :P Whenever Julian pings me to move i'll set an end time
 
(Good thing I have a story writing WEBSITE, PS, I joined an hour ago, but I do want Julian)

"Furry! Come on! The Candy Waterfall awaits us!" Sugarbottom shouted, as we ran towards the waterfall. Everyone wanted a dip in the candy! Especially with the Laffy Taffy. But when we got there, we were greeted with an old lady smoking a pipe, and holding a pig in her right arm.
"No." She said in a raspy voice. I punched her in the face and jumped in.

THE END
 
I know but i'm just far too lazy to edit it atm :P

Also Idk when it ends that's why it says "TBA" :P Whenever Julian pings me to move i'll set an end time

Oh yeah good point! Lol your to lazy!

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(Good thing I have a story writing WEBSITE, PS, I joined an hour ago, but I do want Julian)

"Furry! Come on! The Candy Waterfall awaits us!" Sugarbottom shouted, as we ran towards the waterfall. Everyone wanted a dip in the candy! Especially with the Laffy Taffy. But when we got there, we were greeted with an old lady smoking a pipe, and holding a pig in her right arm.
"No." She said in a raspy voice. I punched her in the face and jumped in.

THE END
Lol lol lol that is funny! Welcome to the bell tree forums! I hope you enjoy your stay!
 
Julian opens the door, and Agent S from LungTown (my town ) is there. Julian is amazed because they were old friends. Julian asks why she is here. Agent S tells him that she needs help defeating the evil Ankha that has taken over LungTown. Julian and Agent S wait for the next train to LungTown. When they get to LungTown they hear Ankha yelling at the villagers. Agent S and Julian run to Ankha's house, but they are too late. Ankha had put a curse on Coco. She took away her eyes and mouth. Ankha turned Stitches into a stuffed bear. Julian then sprinkles Ankha with his glitter. Ankha is furious, she whams Julian on the head hard! But she was distracted by Julian's falling glitter! Agent S removes Ankha's Egyptian headdress. This made Ankha lose her powers and turn into a normal cat. Ankha then runs out of the house... never to be seen again. They put her headdress in a box and tossed it down into the ocean.
Julian then decided to move to lungtown and lived there next to Agent S so that if anyone threats Lungtown, they could save it!

I WOULD REALLY LOVE WINNING JULIAN!!!!

Here is the backstory on my town! http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?140041-Your-Towns-Backstory
 
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Ok Julian pinged me to move and is in boxes now! I'll set the end time for this at 9 pm est so 2 hours from now!
 
1 hour left everyone! This is your last chance to enter for a chance at your dreamie! Don't let this opportunity pass you by!
 
I am so exited! A chance for my ultimate dreamie... but after reading the other story I don't feel so confidant :(
 
Ok time is up no more entries are allowed!

First off I want to say a HUGE thank you to everyone who participated! I can tell a lot of you put a lot of time and effort into these stories and it really means a lot that you guys worked so hard for this contest!

Secondly I just want to mention that NOTHING other than the actual story itself had any impact WHATSOEVER on my final decision. I based my decision on what story I enjoyed reading the most. That's it and nothing else. Even though some of you described how much you would love to have Julian or the pains of missing out on him, and those are all moving and happy accordingly, but in the end it had no influence on my decision. Also some of you shared how much time and/or effort you put into making this story and again, that's all great and I appreciate that very much, but it had absolutely no effect on my decision.

I've been reading all the stories in this last hour of the competition and I have my results! Would you guys like to know the winner? Hehe I bet you would. Ok no more stalling I will announce the winner. Here it goes!

AND THE WINNER IS......
 
The winner is AXAMIN who entered on reddit! Congratulations for winning the Julian Raffle/Giveaway!
If you guys would like to read his story I have a link to the reddit thread for this same raffle/giveaway and what I thought about it in the OP.

Thank you to everyone who participated! I wish all of you could win that was some tough competition *wipes sweat off head*. I hope you all find your dreamie soon!
 
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