Ivytree Dream Address - Need Review Please!

[Ray-ACP]

Hi =3 I've been beautifying my town for a long while now, I need loads more trees, flowers and bushes but I wanted people's opinions on what kind of areas, designs I should do or have done well/not well. I'll make a little form to critique it to give some direction but anything you think needs improving let me know please!:

[ I'll be offering 5 TBT Bells for anyone who reviews! ]

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I'm not going for any theme btw. Here's the form:

Path Layout:
Design Choice (is the designs used good or not):
Nature (i.e too much or little):
Public Work Projects:
Other:


You don't have to use the form btw, you can give general opinions too, it's just a guide = )

 

[Ray-ACP]

Bump

 

[Little Birdly]

Pardon me, but what does "PWP" mean?

 

[Ray-ACP]

Sorry i should have been more clear, public work projects!

 

[Little Birdly]

Oh, alright!

I'll go check it out when I get the chance!

 

[Ray-ACP]

Oh, alright!

I'll go check it out when I get the chance!

TYSM! I think for each person who watches it i'm going to give 5 TBT Bells as an incentive! Until I have no bells left xD

 

[Quill]

Heading over there now

 

[Raffy]

Path Layout: Sometimes confusing. Really cute choice of paths! I really liked the modern stone style. The water paths and the stair paths aren't really my thing.
Design Choice : It's okay. Like I said, I really like the modern stone style but the water and stair paths aren't that great to me.
I like the bush placements and tree placements.
Nature (i.e too much or little): I felt like I barely saw any flowers. I saw some blue pansies. Lots of bushes and trees.
Public Work Projects: I saw a few PWP's, The Lighthouse, The Fountain. I like what you did with them and how the path's make it look real.
Other: There was nothing on the beach. Some fruit trees but that was it. Maybe lay down some beach paths?

Overall, I really enjoyed exploring your town! bluebears plot was there lmao
I wish I could see more flowers everywhere, beside Villager's Houses and around the Town Hall, etc.

 

[Quill]

Path Layout: A+ good work
Design Choice (is the designs used good or not): I like your paths. I find grey stone can be very sterile, but mixing it up with the pink stones here and there was a good choice, and I adore the tiles that look like they have little flowers in them, they're too cute
Nature (i.e too much or little): Good balance. I like your tree/bush placement ad how you have your paths lined in some places but not others. but I think you could use more flowers? There doesn't seem to be a lot, and there's some areas that would look really nice with a little more colour
Public Work Projects: Good so far, I liked the placement of the flower clock and the blue bench. I'd add more, but I don't really have any recommendations.. the stone tablet would look nice with your paths though.
Other: There's a little area down by the beach at the bottom of the map, with bushes and open space in the middle (the area with the water well and park clock) and I thought that was a really cute idea. I don't know if you're planning on putting more in the spaces, but I had fun walking around in it and I like that there's paths on either side so you're not restricted in where you want to go!

Also you have some villagers I've never seen in a dream town before, which I always love coming across!

 

[Ray-ACP]

Path Layout: Sometimes confusing. Really cute choice of paths! I really liked the modern stone style. The water paths and the stair paths aren't really my thing.
Design Choice : It's okay. Like I said, I really like the modern stone style but the water and stair paths aren't that great to me.
I like the bush placements and tree placements.
Nature (i.e too much or little): I felt like I barely saw any flowers. I saw some blue pansies. Lots of bushes and trees.
Public Work Projects: I saw a few PWP's, The Lighthouse, The Fountain. I like what you did with them and how the path's make it look real.
Other: There was nothing on the beach. Some fruit trees but that was it. Maybe lay down some beach paths?

Overall, I really enjoyed exploring your town! bluebears plot was there lmao
I wish I could see more flowers everywhere, beside Villager's Houses and around the Town Hall, etc.

Thanks for the review! I do need to put loads more flowers and lol thank God bluebear moved there as I didn't do the plot reset trick. I think I got off easy lol Is there any part in particular which the layout was confusing or just all in general lol (I've sent you 5 tbt bells =3)

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Path Layout: A+ good work
Design Choice (is the designs used good or not): I like your paths. I find grey stone can be very sterile, but mixing it up with the pink stones here and there was a good choice, and I adore the tiles that look like they have little flowers in them, they're too cute
Nature (i.e too much or little): Good balance. I like your tree/bush placement ad how you have your paths lined in some places but not others. but I think you could use more flowers? There doesn't seem to be a lot, and there's some areas that would look really nice with a little more colour
Public Work Projects: Good so far, I liked the placement of the flower clock and the blue bench. I'd add more, but I don't really have any recommendations.. the stone tablet would look nice with your paths though.
Other: There's a little area down by the beach at the bottom of the map, with bushes and open space in the middle (the area with the water well and park clock) and I thought that was a really cute idea. I don't know if you're planning on putting more in the spaces, but I had fun walking around in it and I like that there's paths on either side so you're not restricted in where you want to go!

Also you have some villagers I've never seen in a dream town before, which I always love coming across!

The bottom part is meant to be a maze but I haven't finished the bush placement lol it doesn't seem all that like a maze because it's too small so I might turn it into something else. Imagine if someone moved right in the middle lol (sent you 5 tbt bells)

 

[Kenziegirl1229]

Path Layout: Very tricky to maneuver. Sometimes paths will just abruptly cut off and not connect to the next path. But I do love the path choice! The beach is very bare, it only has a lost item and some banana trees! I would add sand paths, or little stone paths to and from the dock!
Design Choice (is the designs used good or not): YES! I love the designs you used! They make everything look real to me! LOVE the water and stairs! Good bush ad tree and flower and project placement!
Nature (i.e too much or little): You need a lot more! I love the rare stumps occasionally though!
Public Work Projects: Very good projects! I like the projects you have and their placement! I still think you need a few more though!
Other: Very beautiful town overall! You just need to connect some paths, get more greenery and PWP's, and make your beach stand out! Other than that, very beautiful town and I can't wait to see it again once you are finished!

 

[Quill]

The bottom part is meant to be a maze but I haven't finished the bush placement lol it doesn't seem all that like a maze because it's too small so I might turn it into something else. Imagine if someone moved right in the middle lol (sent you 5 tbt bells)

Ah yes I can totally see that! It's a start of a great maze then. I had a ton of fun winding in and out of it Thank you and good luck!

 

[MasterM64]

I just visited your town and I do have lots of constructive criticism about your town. It will be extensive and I hope you will find it very helpful. I'm a bit too tired to write it all right now so keep an eye out for this post to be updated with my review!

-To be Updated-

 

[Ray-ACP]

Path Layout: Very tricky to maneuver. Sometimes paths will just abruptly cut off and not connect to the next path. But I do love the path choice! The beach is very bare, it only has a lost item and some banana trees! I would add sand paths, or little stone paths to and from the dock!
Design Choice (is the designs used good or not): YES! I love the designs you used! They make everything look real to me! LOVE the water and stairs! Good bush ad tree and flower and project placement!
Nature (i.e too much or little): You need a lot more! I love the rare stumps occasionally though!
Public Work Projects: Very good projects! I like the projects you have and their placement! I still think you need a few more though!
Other: Very beautiful town overall! You just need to connect some paths, get more greenery and PWP's, and make your beach stand out! Other than that, very beautiful town and I can't wait to see it again once you are finished!

A lost item LOL didn't even realise. I will work on the beach soon then, i'm seeing a recurring pattern that the paths need owrk. I'll try my best to simplify and fix em and possibly i might remove some and change the design altogether (easy to do without removing all the tiles) [ sent you 5 TBT bells ]

Thanks so much for your feedback guys! It's really useful!

- - - Post Merge - - -

I just visited your town and I do have lots of constructive criticism about your town. It will be extensive and I hope you will find it very helpful. I'm a bit too tired to write it all right now so keep an eye out for this post to be updated with my review!

-To be Updated-

Looking forward to it!

 

[Ray-ACP]

I've decided to use this pathway instead:

Let me know what you think!

 

[Ray-ACP]

It's taking me ages to redo the paths since I decided to move my main paths to my second character lol it's been a few days but almost got the main paths sorted. I'm remaking the layout a tiny bit just to make it easier to navigate as people said it was confusing. I feel this layout is much better. I also discovered some pwps are misplaced so i'm gonna have to change that D = so much to do. The life of animal crossing lol never ending