I need some constructive criticism on my DA

[menrfrommagmar]

I'm currently working to (hopefully) finish my town soon but I'd like to know what you guys think about my town so far. I'd like to have at least one thing stated that could/should be changed. I don't mind any compliments that are given about my town either! Thank you so much for your help!

My DA is 4900-5287-5199

 

[LeonCabrio]

Hi! I have just seen your town, and here are my suggestions:

- I see (from my point of view) an important lack of "greenery" in terms of trees and bushes (flowers are ok).
- Although the path pattern is nice, I you have used it too much. There are some moments in which all I could see around me was patterns and more patterns.

Advice:

- From my point of view, I would make paths less expansive and wide. This will give you more room for planting trees and bushes and place more PWPs.

 

[LeonCabrio]

Hi! I have just seen your town, and here are my suggestions:

- I see (from my point of view) an important lack of "greenery" in terms of trees and bushes (flowers are ok).
- Although the path pattern is nice, I you have used it too much. There are some moments in which all I could see around me was patterns and more patterns.

Advice:

- From my point of view, I would make paths less expansive and wide. This will give you more room for planting trees and bushes and place more PWPs.

 

[menrfrommagmar]

Hi! I have just seen your town, and here are my suggestions:

- I see (from my point of view) an important lack of "greenery" in terms of trees and bushes (flowers are ok).
- Although the path pattern is nice, I you have used it too much. There are some moments in which all I could see around me was patterns and more patterns.

Advice:

- From my point of view, I would make paths less expansive and wide. This will give you more room for planting trees and bushes and place more PWPs.

Thank you for reviewing my town! I'm still working on the whole pattern/greenery ratio. The patterns will be a lot less frequent as I get more PWPs that are appealing.

 

[jadedrays]

Hello! I'm currently in your dream town and I definitely agree with the statement above. You need a lot more greenery and a lot less patterns. It's nice, but too much. The layout of your town is good too, and the placement of pwps definitely works. Good Luck!!

Jaded Rays

 

[menrfrommagmar]

Hello! I'm currently in your dream town and I definitely agree with the statement above. You need a lot more greenery and a lot less patterns. It's nice, but too much. The layout of your town is good too, and the placement of pwps definitely works. Good Luck!!

Jaded Rays

Thank you! I'm still working on a good pattern/greenery ratio!