Yeah so I've been working on my town and I'm not too sure on how it looks. I'd like some opinions on the layout, houses, paths, trees, PWPs, etc... pretty much everything! I also need some ideas on lots of things! Such as where can I make a good park with benches and lights and fountains?
Hello! I just visited your town. I like your path and water textures around the plaza. The pwp's seem fine. Maybe get a single tile only path for the ones that are 1 tile, as like an off road? There is some areas that the water qr looks a little off.
your town looks nice tho overall sorry i am bad at writing reviews
Wow, getting to tomorrow took more like 48 hours so i apologize... but let's get right to it!
Maywood Review
Paths:
Beautiful stone path! Also love what's going on with the water and lilypads. Bridge path to town tree looks nice. i think if you could outline the path going under the arch, it would look less "floaty" since the rest of your paths have edges. There are some parts of the path that are erased, but I'm going to guess that this is temporary. I think the way the paths are placed currently makes a lot of sense. They work well with the plants you have, as well as the PWPs that are currently there.
Plants:
I'm really liking what you did with your perfect orange orchard. I think it's a very nice arrangement! The bushes I also like, especially the ones around the train station. Flowers seem a bit here and there, but I like the golden roses that outline the path near the town tree, as well as the tulips around the lighthouse. I'm excited to see what you do with them!
PWP:
Like the placement of the lighthouse, illuminated arch, benches, light, and fountain. Not sure if I like the flower clock... I have one in my town too but it's been hard trying to incorporate it into my overall town feel. I'm not really sure what you're going for in your town so I can't really make any judgements on it. I think the well and clock seem a tiny bit out of place, just because most of the PWPs have some sort of path that says "I'm here come look at me" and these two don't.
Houses:
First of all, I'm so amazed that you got that many houses in a line. That's incredible!
/skipping review of storage tent/
Jamie's house:
Main room: First thought: gorgeous, quite literally! Love the clover, sea horse, and phonograph.
Left room: /nothing/
Right room: Love the rococo set-- think it fits very well with the gorgeous set. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Upstairs: /nothing/
Overall, I think you should finalize what you want to do with paths and PWPs before doing anything with plants. I think I enjoy how organic everything looks in your town, but I also appreciate organization efforts being made here. I especially think it's great that you have most of your villagers living in a single line down at the bottom of your town because it allows you a lot of space to be creative elsewhere. I like your choice of path and I look forward to seeing how your town changes!
