Haiku

[Ricano]

lol for people dat dont know, haiku is a form of japanese poetry that consists of 17 syllables with lines of 5,7, and 5. Heres my example:

Winter
snow falls from the sky -5
grass loses its color -7
saddest of seasons -5

 

[coffeebean!]

what the *censored.3.0* is this?
should be in the museum
i luff haikus tho
xP

 

[Ricano]

-__-

well my bad that its in the wrong place
I just want to see if people can do it and make sense xD

 

[coffeebean!]

In the lone darkness
The Autumn crows and ravens
Peck and Peck my soul

There. XD

[oh and the second line of your haiku has 6 syllables....]

 

[Ricano]

lol good but last line had 6 and second line had 8 =P

 

[coffeebean!]

lol good but last line had 6 and second line had 8 =P

Uhh no hon. I'm pretty sure I got my syllables right.

 

[Ricano]

soul is 2 syllables and
gr-ass los-es its col-or= 7 =P

 

[ohdangitsgabby]

In the lone darkness
The Autumn crows and ravens
Peck and Peck my soul

There. XD

[oh and the second line of your haiku has 6 syllables....]

Oooo. I like coffeh! Creative! ^.^

 

[coffeebean!]

soul is 2 syllables and
gr-ass los-es its col-or= 7 =P

Soul is 1 syllable, and you got it wrong.
That's not how you do it. -__-

 

[Ricano]

lol ours both had 14 syllables in total so whatever xD

 

[ohdangitsgabby]

The bright afternoon
and the empty mid-night sky
Start to fade away

I'm not sure if it's completly correct, but I'm hoping it is!

 

[coffeebean!]

lol ours both had 14 so whatever xD

Umm no.
Dude.....you're not counting your syllables right.
Mine has 17. I make haikus all the time...I know what syllables are. -__-

 

[Demolator40]

Haiku is real cool

I do them all the time now

Well not ALL the time

 

[Ricano]

lol ours both had 14 so whatever xD

Umm no.
Dude.....you're not counting your syllables right.
Mine has 17. I make haikus all the time...I know what syllables are. -__-

dude.... use a syllable counter or sumting cuz mine and urs have 14

 

[Ricano]

Haiku is real cool

I do them all the time now

Well not ALL the time

lol good one

 

[Princess]

my time has come now
for me to leave T B T
all of you good bye

 

[Demolator40]

Sonic is real awesome.

He's better than mario.

He is really tight.

 

[coffeebean!]

lol ours both had 14 so whatever xD

Umm no.
Dude.....you're not counting your syllables right.
Mine has 17. I make haikus all the time...I know what syllables are. -__-

dude.... use a syllable counter or sumting cuz mine and urs have 14

......no.....dude when you pronounce soul I doubt you say 'so' then 'ul' it's all one syllable
-___- you can tell by the way you pronounce it.
WTF. Who uses a syllable counter? .....[you have to be like....nvm] XD
CRY NO! DAMMMIIIIT -.-

 

[Ricano]

lol ours both had 14 so whatever xD

Umm no.
Dude.....you're not counting your syllables right.
Mine has 17. I make haikus all the time...I know what syllables are. -__-

dude.... use a syllable counter or sumting cuz mine and urs have 14

......no.....dude when you pronounce soul I doubt you say 'so' then 'ul' it's all one syllable
-___- you can tell by the way you pronounce it.
WTF. You're using a syllable counter? .....*LOLOLOL

CRY NO! DAMMMIIIIT -.-

nope im counting dem myself, im telling u to use one

and why are you leaving cry?

 

[ohdangitsgabby]

my time has come now
for me to leave T B T
all of you good bye

NO CRY! T.T

STAY for chocolate milk! That you should share with me xD
=^.^=