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[JellyBeans]

I need honest opinions on my town. I have gotten used to it by now but I want to know how to improve it..I especially need opinions on my path. This was a tile I found and sorta liked but if you know what might fit it better (1 pattern path) then post a link below... Just visit my town via dream suit (DC is at the bottom of this post) and post your review below. I'm really looking for constructive critisisim. (however u spell it) Ty in advance

MY DREAM CODE IS: 6200-2207-0548. I updated it as I posted this so my town is the newest version

 

[JellyBeans]

Bump

 

[JellyBeans]

Bada-Bump!

 

[Kaiaa]

I will check out your town, give me a few


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Over all, I like your town but it feels really empty toward the bottom. If you like parks, I would cut down some of the trees and put a park there or if you want it to be an orchard, line the perimeter of the orchard with bushes.

In my personal opinion, I love flowers in my town. I have lined my pathways with flowers, spread out bushes, and even bamboo here and there. It helps make the paths look nice too.

Speaking of paths, I like your path but I would take out the stump that's in the middle of the path (I know it's special ) or move the path around it a little more so it's not in the paths way. I would also add another line of the path pattern in the south where you just have 1 line of path. It would look nicer if the paths were 2 patterns thick (sometimes you have to make it a little thicker but that's okay). I would also do that near your fountain. Near your town hall you have a rock in the way of your path, but you can make it look better by just surrounding the rock with path patterns.

Also this bugs me but it's also just personal opinion, by Gwens house, there looks to be a path part missing. If you look at Gwen's house sign and count downward three squares, you should put down a path pattern.

Over all, I think you've done a good job with your town! If you feel like checking my town out, my Dream Code is 5100-2294-2190

 

[Divergent]

- remove that stump in the middle of the path to the left of Re-tail
- the path is okay, although it looks a little depressing being all dark and damp
- More trees lining the paths
- More public works projects

You have a nice town

 

[JellyBeans]

Thanks guys I don't have any good PWPs in the list atm, but when I get them they're going straight in. The path may be temporary, if I find a better one I'll definately use it. I'll remove the stump (I have quite a few others) and I'm going to work on lining the paths with bushes and trees.

@Kaiaa thanks for the feedback! Detailed xD I will take this all into consideration I'll update it when I've edited it a bit I'm still working on parts of it, and will pay lots of attention to the South

Oh and the path is just to get natural paths underneath It'll go in a month or two

 

[Kaiaa]

Thanks guys I don't have any good PWPs in the list atm, but when I get them they're going straight in. The path may be temporary, if I find a better one I'll definately use it. I'll remove the stump (I have quite a few others) and I'm going to work on lining the paths with bushes and trees.

@Kaiaa thanks for the feedback! Detailed xD I will take this all into consideration I'll update it when I've edited it a bit I'm still working on parts of it, and will pay lots of attention to the South

Oh and the path is just to get natural paths underneath It'll go in a month or two

Ah, I see! Well I really like natural paths, not many people use them though so whenever your natural paths start to show, I'd love to visit your dream town again. Good luck getting PWP requests!

 

[JellyBeans]

I'm working on a little park area near the town hall, near the river. I think it'll look fine if I don't say so myself

 

[JellyBeans]

Bump =)

 

[JellyBeans]

I've updated my town - have a look!

 

[majnin]

I'll check it out and post some stuff soon

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Your town is really pleasant. I have a few points to bring up:
- Your PWPs aren't really organised. It seems they've just been slapped down anywhere and they aren't all very well aligned. Saying that, you have great choice in PWPs. I REALLY want the flower arch *jealous*
- I see a little park area with a blue bench and bushes and flowers. I'm not sure if this is a work in progress but right now it's quite untidy. However I see potential, you know what you're doing.
-The path pattern isn't to my taste but you've placed them down really well. It's easy and convenient to get around. Good job!
-Your hybrids are awesome.
-I love the cafe placement.
-Overall it's a wonderful town, but I'd just tidy it up around the edges. It's great!

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Also, please feel free to check out mine. I'd love feedback as I'm trying to do some landscaping at the moment

7100-2368-2706

 

[Lurrdoc]

Hey, I managed to visit you after you updated. Couple of things I'd like to point out.

There are still trees in the way of some areas where your path runs. I think it would be best if you cut down some of the trees in your town and make paths take up less space by zig-zagging. Especially in the area left of the left bridge. The flower arch best looks under a 1 tile path going under neath it as opposed to in the corner where you have it. If I were you, I would make it the entrace to the park you are building. The current path you have looked pretty nice, but the area outside the tile looks like mud. Right now it doesn't match, but maybe during autumn it will.

I really like your fountain area. I can see what your doing with it.
I also really liked the flower bed by the rock/pond formation in front of your train station. I would add some trees on each side if you could before the rock/pond to make it look nice as an entrance piece.

That's all I can think of. Kinda in a rush, though, atm.

 

[JellyBeans]

The paths are just temporary, I'm trying to get natural paths. I still need to cut down a few trees, but I didn't have an axe with me at the time and I haven't been bothered to do it since xD Obviously I'm still working on it day by day Thanks for the feedback, guys - I'll update it again tonight with my days work