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╰☆╮ Elsa's Dream Review ╰☆╮ (Not accepting DAs atm)
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Dreaming of Smashvil
As I awaken, I notice the beautiful patternwork on the plaza. The little rivers are ones I haven't seen people use before, I usually see the same ones used over and over. I notice the cafe to the right with beautiful hybrids surrounding.. I must take a picture! I love what they did with the cafe. I then notice the Trellis area with golden roses. I personally dislike golden roses and think it would look better with white and purple flowers or possibly jacobs ladders, but it still looks good. I love the stepwork patterns, they look real. I THEN NOTICE YOU HAVE DIANA AND I INSTANTLY LOVE THIS TOWN. Haha, jk but it is really pretty. The carnations look beautiful around Jinora's house. I go inside and ssee the pink Roccoco series and think it looks pretty cute. To the right I notice the cute bakery. Not the best I've seen I'll be honest but it's still cute. I exit the house after this as I wish to see the rest of the town. The bamboo all around looks very nice. I talk to Diana and she remembers me. I pass over a wooden bridge and notice the cute symmetry with the Zen streetlights. The area around the sauna looks super cute, I just think you should have symmetrical bushes and not just random ones. Also instead of tree stumps you could have cut bamboo. I love the big area of bushes in front of Merengue's house, it looks really cute. I feel like you also should have lined Phoebe and Merengue up next to each other, because it looks sort of out of place, but it's still fine. I then find myself back at Luna's.
Z Z Z ..
Overall your town is a good 7/10!
Your map is pretty nice and you fit everything as I would not be able to make that work lol.
Dreaming of Smashvil
As I awaken, I notice the beautiful patternwork on the plaza. The little rivers are ones I haven't seen people use before, I usually see the same ones used over and over. I notice the cafe to the right with beautiful hybrids surrounding.. I must take a picture! I love what they did with the cafe. I then notice the Trellis area with golden roses. I personally dislike golden roses and think it would look better with white and purple flowers or possibly jacobs ladders, but it still looks good. I love the stepwork patterns, they look real. I THEN NOTICE YOU HAVE DIANA AND I INSTANTLY LOVE THIS TOWN. Haha, jk but it is really pretty. The carnations look beautiful around Jinora's house. I go inside and ssee the pink Roccoco series and think it looks pretty cute. To the right I notice the cute bakery. Not the best I've seen I'll be honest but it's still cute. I exit the house after this as I wish to see the rest of the town. The bamboo all around looks very nice. I talk to Diana and she remembers me. I pass over a wooden bridge and notice the cute symmetry with the Zen streetlights. The area around the sauna looks super cute, I just think you should have symmetrical bushes and not just random ones. Also instead of tree stumps you could have cut bamboo. I love the big area of bushes in front of Merengue's house, it looks really cute. I feel like you also should have lined Phoebe and Merengue up next to each other, because it looks sort of out of place, but it's still fine. I then find myself back at Luna's.
Z Z Z ..
Overall your town is a good 7/10!
Thank you for the review
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A small little update for you guys.
I decided I am going to do some reviews today but lately I've been very lazy as you can tell lol there's about 4-6 I haven't gotten to yet simply just because I haven't felt like it. I will force myself to do them all today and make sure everybody gets a quality review, but I will not be posting as I go through the town anymore. I am going to post as an actual review and not a story since that takes much longer. You can post your Dream Addresses if you want, just don't expect me to get to it today because I plan to do the ones that have been waiting about a week.
I decided I am going to do some reviews today but lately I've been very lazy as you can tell lol there's about 4-6 I haven't gotten to yet simply just because I haven't felt like it. I will force myself to do them all today and make sure everybody gets a quality review, but I will not be posting as I go through the town anymore. I am going to post as an actual review and not a story since that takes much longer. You can post your Dream Addresses if you want, just don't expect me to get to it today because I plan to do the ones that have been waiting about a week.
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