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╰☆╮ Elsa's Dream Review ╰☆╮ (Not accepting DAs atm)

Elsa's Dream Review

Recently I have unlocked the Dream Suite and I would love to visit towns in order to get inspiration on what to do with some areas in my town. I already have a ton planned out, but I would love to review dream towns. And don't feel obligated to do anything I suggest you to do, because I will be giving honest criticism if I don't like your map or what you did with an area, or I'll give tips on how to improve it.​

Rules:

Please be patient when waiting for a review.
I am not a fan of modern towns, so please consider this before leaving your DA.
I will write a paragraph or two AS I go through your town and publish it once I'm finished.
I won't always feel like doing this, but feel free to leave your DA. I will get to it eventually!​
 
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Alright will get to them soon, just trying to get Diana out of my cycle town now so she can move back into my new main town. :3 I will write the reviews before I plot reset for her, since that could potentially take the whole day or more.
 
Nevermind, I'm curious so I will just begin now. :)

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My DA is in my signature c:

Dreaming of Ponyvill

As I step off the bed, I notice the lovely pattern work of the plaza and the cute bushes that surround it. Then, I decide to open up the presents that surround the tree. Enclosed are several street pass items, and I decide to hold one of the balloons and chow down on the sweet ice cream. Now that I am finished admiring the plaza, I move past the police station, cafe, and campsite. The bushes compliment your paths very well, but I would have liked to see the campsite in a different area. The cutout board sign is adorable, and the upgraded train station is very adorable. As I walk down the paths past the town hall, I notice more bushes and they look very cute. I notice the cute sitting area as I pass by Candy's house. I then go inside the house so see what is inside. I expected a bakery, but it was a casual house. I then exit and continue on my way. The town would be a lot brighter if you had hybrids instead of normal flowers, and possibly some more PWPs.

As I walk by Shaymin's house, I notice a large candy castle and then I walk inside. The interior is the sweets series, matches the outside completely! To the left is the princess series. In the upper room is a room of cutout trees and grass, along with little animals. I'm not a fan of the sweets series, but it looks great because it matches the outside. To the right is a lovely little sauna area, and I think that's pretty creative. Upstairs is the sloppy series, but I'm not a fan of that series at all so I just run to check the basement. Woah! Downstairs is the best bakery I have seen yet. Wow, amazing! So friggin cute. I even snapped a picture, this is great inspiration for my town's bakery.

As I return outside, I make my way right. The roses that line the path are really cute, and I notice a small house and get curious as to what this can become. I then notice Freya by Re-tail, but I don't talk to her. I notice the "Please Walk" sign and think that that's a cute idea. I then make my way over to the bed again and I wake up.

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Overall it's a great town, I'd say 7/10. My suggestions to you would be to breed some hybrids and place more down, that would really brighten up your town. Your paths are placed very nicely and it was easy to navigate around. I usually don't like the map style but you made it work really well so I was able to ignore that. Also, I would say to save the town in the daylight and when bushes are bloomed to give it some more color as well. ^_^
 
DA in my signature. :)

Dreaming of Amdavad

As I step off the plaza, I notice a lot of items everywhere, none I can use.. Kind of makes the plaza sloppy. I also notice the flowers but there is no distinct path. As I walk by the town hall, I notice the arch and think that's pretty cute, but there are so many flowers everywhere. I continue on and notice the minecraft references and the house. I walk inside, but I only check out the first room. I then notice a path, but then it cuts off. Then, I return to the plaza.

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In all honesty the town is a 4/10. It's pretty crowded with way too many flowers. There is really no pathing and it looks really plain besides the arch, so I just walked through it and didn't know where to go next xD. I understand if your town isn't complete, but I suggest you make paths and put up more PWPs for now and clean up some flowers, or at least arrange them! It would make it look awesome. I also suggest to clean up the items off the ground, because they are just furniture series. :3
 
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Dreaming of Luna

As I step off the bed, wow! Clothing for me to wear. Let's try them on. ^_^ A nice casual look and a free coffee. I quickly chug the coffee and then I walk upwards and notice the beautiful bushwork and scenery with the hot spring. This is amazing pathwork and landscaping with the cut bamboo! I make my way up to the police station and admire the pathwork. The cafe is surrounded by beautiful white flowers, along with the police station. I'm so pulling out my camera and taking a picture of this. As I get to the station, I Notice the beautiful arch along with the paths and hybrids. Two azalea bushes, so colorful.. The fogged weather really fits this town. I notice a large windmill, WOW. So cute with all the hybrids around it and with the fruit trees in the distance. The stumps with the patterns really add the final touch to the area. I walk by Ankha's house and notice the cute bell, and then I walk by the town hall.. the patternwork is so cute. I then stop by Kasher's house and step inside. Absolutely adorable, this room is perfect with the colors. It just MATCHES the town. I want to continue on, so I don't check out the other rooms for now. So many clovers everywhere, there's some inspiration for me. I cross the bridge and find Julian's house, one of my favorites. :3 I don't stop inside, I want to see Marina. The Log sitting areas are so adorable.

I then stumble across Wendell. I plan to save some patterns. I notice Marina in the distance, and I hurry to copy the patterns I like. I take some outfits and one of the flower patches. MARINA IS SO CUTE. I find the cute hammock and the water pump, such a cute idea. Water under the pump, adorable. The bushes around Re-Tail look so cute, I'm going to have to plant bushes around mine too, since we have the same Re-tail style. I then follow the path and find myself at a small picnic area. I snap more pictures, so amazing. I then find myself back at the plaza but I notice that I missed an area so I keep looking and find an illuminated heart PWP. So cute with the flowers around it. I walk over the bridge and see the Trellis PWP as well, and I snap a photo. I then head back to the plaza and hop back into bed.

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Wow, I am absolutely amazed at this town lol. 10/10, definately. Your creativity really shown through and I love what you did with some areas. It even made me question what I'll do with some areas in my town. I LACK CREATIVITY OMG. You made EVERYTHING go so well together, and I really have nothing to say on how to improve it.. It just looks amazing. The only thing I wouldn't have done is put the cafe and police station so close, otherwise this town is just flawless.
 
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Dreaming of Luna


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Wow, I am absolutely amazed at this town lol. 10/10, definately. Your creativity really shown through and I love what you did with some areas. It even made me question what I'll do with some areas in my town. I LACK CREATIVITY OMG. You made EVERYTHING go so well together, and I really have nothing to say on how to improve it.. It just looks amazing. The only thing I wouldn't have done is put the cafe and police station so close, otherwise this town is just flawless.

Ahh thank you sosososooo much for that lovely review! I agree with the police station and cafe being so close all i knew is that i wanted them near mainstreet~
I'm glad you liked the designs! Hopefully i'll get a little peak at your pics! :blush:
 
I'd just have to borrow my sister's laptop to upload the pictures since my desktop doesn't have an SD card slot. :3 I'll PM you the pictures if I upload them. ^_^
 
I'd just have to borrow my sister's laptop to upload the pictures since my desktop doesn't have an SD card slot. :3 I'll PM you the pictures if I upload them. ^_^

Ahh thank you! Dont worry i have the same issue no sd card slot in my laptop either~
 
Please feel free to check mine out. always a work in progress. :) DA in signature
 
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