Dreams and Opinions

[Haskell]

I want people to dream of my town and give their honest opinion of what it is worth. What I could fix, what I could change, what I could improve. Not just negative things, but that's mostly what I want to hear. Give positive things if you enjoy it.

Pretty much dream of my town and give an honest rating.

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Thank you! I hope that you will dream of Haven!

P.S The Pink Cosmos are for a friend. She still needs to pick them up.




I'm not sure if this is the proper place to post this thread, I apologize if it isn't.

 

[RedRum2514]

I'll check it out! right now I really need some ppl to give some review on my town much like yourself, so I would greatly appreciate it if you could return the favor! My thread

 

[Haskell]

I'll check it out! right now I really need some ppl to give some review on my town much like yourself, so I would greatly appreciate it if you could return the favor! My thread

My 3DS is on red but I'll check it out now.

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I'll check it out! right now I really need some ppl to give some review on my town much like yourself, so I would greatly appreciate it if you could return the favor! My thread

The path leading from retail to the bridge maybe you could have it shift as your making your way past re-tail?

The area below Town Hall and the Police Station could be a park/forest/meadow. I think a meadow or a park would fit your town better. Same with the area below Scarlett.

I liked the area where Rosie and Lolly are. Only if Olivia and Tangy were there with them.

 

[RedRum2514]

The path leading from retail to the bridge maybe you could have it shift as your making your way past re-tail?

The area below Town Hall and the Police Station could be a park/forest/meadow. I think a meadow or a park would fit your town better. Same with the area below Scarlett.

I liked the area where Rosie and Lolly are. Only if Olivia and Tangy were there with them.

I checked out your town and I really like it! it has a nice welcoming vibe and I love what you did with the carnation paths! The flower patches and paths were pretty colorful and well layed out too! Honestly I think your town is perfect the way it is, other than adding a few more flowers to some empty patches its pretty cool!

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And what do you mean when you say "The path leading from retail to the bridge maybe you could have it shift as your making your way past re-tail?" also do you think it would be a good idea to have merry and olivia down the bottom of my map there together? Tangy is temp and merry and kiki I meant to go up the top. and I've thought of a meadow sort of park but I don't know how to go about it?

 

[Haskell]

Look up examples of parks. Watch dream tours on Youtube. Get inspiration.
Have entrance ways to the park. Maybe a flower arch?


Have the path shift at the start not the end. Between retail and the bridge.

 

[RedRum2514]

Look up examples of parks. Watch dream tours on Youtube. Get inspiration.
Have entrance ways to the park. Maybe a flower arch?


Have the path shift at the start not the end. Between retail and the bridge.

I really should do that diving trick, I've been trying to get the flower arch for ages...

 

[Lululand]

I visited your town!

Here are some things I've noticed, in no particular order:

- The area around your town tree was fantastic. Although there was a "T" shaped blank spot in the qr designs on the ground next to the bed I woke up from, probably because of event tents that regularly appear on the plaza (like Katrina, Redd etc) but that's easy enough to fix

- My jaw hit the floor when I saw the mayor's main golden room. Must've taken you ages to get all that stuff. Maybe you simply decided against it, but have you considered putting the golden Villager statue from the amiibo set in there? I think it could look quite good

- The ghost in the huge empty house was a nice touch

- Loved the snazzy cow-print outfit on the white haired guy

- The area under the town hall looks like a work in progress. May I ask what you're planning to do with it? I saw a rock in the middle of a small bush square but other than that, there's a lot of potential for anything you want to do imo

- The campsite's placement next to the villagers' houses wasn't too great, which is a shame because otherwise there was nothing else out of place in your town. Maybe if you moved the last house of the row in another spot and just define the paths of that area a little more?
To do that though you'd need to get rid of Chief and I totally understand if you just don't want to.

- The checkered clover patterns were cool. I also liked the area with the red and golden roses, they looked really good together

- Overall it was a really nicely put-together town that just needs a lil bit more work to become even better


You can check out my town too if you want, I'm also looking for feedback

 

[Haskell]

I visited your town!

Here are some things I've noticed, in no particular order:

- The ghost in the huge empty house was a nice touch

- Loved the snazzy cow-print outfit on the white haired guy

- The area under the town hall looks like a work in progress. May I ask what you're planning to do with it? I saw a rock in the middle of a small bush square but other than that, there's a lot of potential for anything you want to do imo

- The campsite's placement next to the villagers' houses wasn't too great, which is a shame because otherwise there was nothing else out of place in your town. Maybe if you moved the last house of the row in another spot and just define the paths of that area a little more?
To do that though you'd need to get rid of Chief and I totally understand if you just don't want to.

- The checkered clover patterns were cool. I also liked the area with the red and golden roses, they looked really good together

- Overall it was a really nicely put-together town that just needs a lil bit more work to become even better


You can check out my town too if you want, I'm also looking for feedback

I haven't done anything with any other alternate accounts rooms.
I'm planning to get rid of Chief, my friend.

I'm sure you mean the spot under the caf?? Under the caf? is where my flower clock is going to be.

Under re-tail I'm thinking enclose that area with bushes to make it a picnic area right next to the forest.

I'll check it out later. I have to do homework rn.

 

[Reyrey]

lol I didn't get any inspiration except for the paths I got from Cinderella dream town.