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amymay

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Hi everyone,

I'm working on my town at the minute and would love some feedback on how to improve, what I could work on and what would make it even better!

I welcome any feedback and will happily visit any of your dreams!
My DA is in my signature but it is 6C00-0093-2491

Thank you! :)
 
I love the development your town has taken! I am a sucker for landscaping and I loved how you had your paths outlined by the flowers, but what I really enjoyed the most was when you had vertical paths you would have flowers AND trees following it. It looks so uniform and pretty! Might just have to steal that idea ;)

Can't wait to see what updates you make in the future!
 
I don't think there's much I can really say because it looks like most is still in progress. I like the path you chose. I really like how you have aligned the trees with your path alongside retail. I like where you put the grape trellis pwp though I'd love to see a path of sorts possibly leading through it to retail or maybe some sort of landscaping more detail around it. You have a side path that leads from the vertical one to retail but it feels like it negates the charm of where you put the grape vine trellis. Your peach and cherry trees paired together are very cute. The bushes near the event plaza were charming on the left side but since the right doesn't match..it irks me a little lol. The path section by your zen bridge looks a little problematic as well where it gets cut off. House, can't say much because it all is just full sets without much personalizing or individualized accenting. Your character is super cute. :3 Overall, I can see your town is going to be very charming in the long run in theme and design. Right now it looks like normal initial stages and working out the kinks is a gradual thing.
 
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Good start! I really enjoy the paths you choose. Most people comment on the actual town I hope you don't mind me giving you ideas for your house. The main room is really neat with the white furniture. Hope about you add some plants in too! I really like everything so far. Keep up the good work
 
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