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this used to be a thread to review dreams, I am too busy to keep it going :(

I will still leave honorable mentions up


HONORABLE DREAMS:
Ymir - Ymir Forest (4500-2572-2352) -------- 9.5/10
Almonte - Tikibones (4800-5564-3638) --------- 9/10
Bellocan - Mayordarryn (5000-5241-0999) -------- 9/10
 
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I'd love it if you visit mine :) I'll visit yours as well! The code is in my sig!

I guess I should clarify that I'm not 100% done with my town yet, I'm trying to get more pwps to fill in some of the blank-er areas hehe
 
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if that means "go visit my dream," then im on it ;)

Yep that's what it means. I don't think we have the same tastes but I thoroughly enjoyed visiting your town. I met some interesting villagers I had never experienced before, and that's a big plus for me!!!
 
'Ello there ^_^ You may check out mine, if you wish! DA is in my sig~ :3

The area by my windmill was only one day old, it's been worked on since then! :D I just wanted to upload during the last day of cherry blossoms :3 There are also a bunch of random flowers on my beach >< Sorry for that mess!
 
The town of EVERLEAF
from Plum Pudding

Notes:
Very intriguing town since I woke up!
It was raining in the dream which I have not seen before, and made it really peaceful in my opinion.
4 leaf clovers were everywhere, which I find very positive as they are hard to come about. props to you on that.
Beautiful PWPs everywhere. I am a huge fan of the illuminated tree which you had.
Loved the variety of fruit trees.
Many flowers.
I saw some Jacob's Ladders. Congrats on a perfect town ^-^
Lots of nice patterns on tree stumps :)

Things to change:
The plaza seemed a bit disorganized.. maybe you should pick up some of the clothes
Didn't see a lot of hybrids :/ Having some would make your town perfect
I'm not a huge fan of the fire hydrant placement in front of the cafe... idk it seemed a little off
Maybe be a bit more organized around your town in general

Very very enjoyable dream, I'd recommend it to others

7/10
 
I liked the wide variety of paths used in your town jacob_lawall!

Plum Pudding, I'm about to visit your dream now :)

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@Plum Pudding, I love your town map! I've never seen a river like that before, it's really nice. Also we have a very similar playground in our towns! I like the natural feeling your town has. and I'm jealous that you have the trellis pwp. I really want that one!
 
The town of EVERLEAF
from Plum Pudding

Notes:
Very intriguing town since I woke up!
It was raining in the dream which I have not seen before, and made it really peaceful in my opinion.
4 leaf clovers were everywhere, which I find very positive as they are hard to come about. props to you on that.
Beautiful PWPs everywhere. I am a huge fan of the illuminated tree which you had.
Loved the variety of fruit trees.
Many flowers.
I saw some Jacob's Ladders. Congrats on a perfect town ^-^
Lots of nice patterns on tree stumps :)

Things to change:
The plaza seemed a bit disorganized.. maybe you should pick up some of the clothes
Didn't see a lot of hybrids :/ Having some would make your town perfect
I'm not a huge fan of the fire hydrant placement in front of the cafe... idk it seemed a little off
Maybe be a bit more organized around your town in general

Very very enjoyable dream, I'd recommend it to others

7/10

That's very kind of you! Thanks for the recommendation.

The clothes at the plaza are for dreamers to wear and they fit my town theme. Male character on the left, female on the right. I always leave them there too since I update regularly but I didn't remember it was raining during my last update. I like the rain too.... There is an umbrella at the bus stop :)
 
I'd love it if you visit mine :) I'll visit yours as well! The code is in my sig!

I guess I should clarify that I'm not 100% done with my town yet, I'm trying to get more pwps to fill in some of the blank-er areas hehe

Town of LONDON
by kayleee

Notes:
beautiful sights of varieties of organized bushes and blue pansies! Caught my attention!
Big tree with nice patterns underneath ^-^
Variety of fruits
lots of pink, blue, and purple roses which I love <3
Golden roses around the flower clock looked very nice :)
I loved all the bamboo and clovers
Nice placements for houses
Jacob's Ladders and fountain in front of a beautifully designed castle looked really good
Cool PWPs everywhere
I like how you didn't use many paths :) It was all so natural, i liked that
Nice gate and police station
Retail had a beautiful set up
Loved the consistency of theme throughout the town

What to change
Needs more PWPs :/ It seems like too many flowers and clovers (like my town xD)
I didn't see any perfect fruit trees? Maybe I missed them?
There seemed like an excessive amount of clovers, I always thought of them like a flower, not a path
The red roses on the beach was cool, but maybe you can do something cooler to the beach to enhance you town by maybe putting patterns and clovers :/

Super nice town, once its complete, Itll look even better =)

8/10
 
Town of LONDON
by kayleee

Notes:
beautiful sights of varieties of organized bushes and blue pansies! Caught my attention!
Big tree with nice patterns underneath ^-^
Variety of fruits
lots of pink, blue, and purple roses which I love <3
Golden roses around the flower clock looked very nice :)
I loved all the bamboo and clovers
Nice placements for houses
Jacob's Ladders and fountain in front of a beautifully designed castle looked really good
Cool PWPs everywhere
I like how you didn't use many paths :) It was all so natural, i liked that
Nice gate and police station
Retail had a beautiful set up
Loved the consistency of theme throughout the town

What to change
Needs more PWPs :/ It seems like too many flowers and clovers (like my town xD)
I didn't see any perfect fruit trees? Maybe I missed them?
There seemed like an excessive amount of clovers, I always thought of them like a flower, not a path
The red roses on the beach was cool, but maybe you can do something cooler to the beach to enhance you town by maybe putting patterns and clovers :/

Super nice town, once its complete, Itll look even better =)

8/10

Awesome, thank you :) yeah my beaches are pretty lame right now I still have to come up with an idea for those, and some of the big flower patches will be broken up when I unlock more pwps like the windmill, trellis, the other fountain etc. and the clover paths are a new thing I was trying, I couldn't find any single-wide paths that I liked so I tried something different xD I wasn't sure about it at first but it's growing on me. Thanks again!
 
'Ello there ^_^ You may check out mine, if you wish! DA is in my sig~ :3

The area by my windmill was only one day old, it's been worked on since then! :D I just wanted to upload during the last day of cherry blossoms :3 There are also a bunch of random flowers on my beach >< Sorry for that mess!

the town of Almonte
by my good friend tikibones ;)

notes:
yay cheery blossoms
looked nice since wake up :)
0.0 beautiful symmetry
Beautiful roses, paths, and PWPs
Rocks did not seem like a problem =)
The pink trees were nice <3
tree stumps with patterns were great placement
Lots of hybrids and fireplaces :)
Flowers were matching the houses 0.0
lots of cedar trees with good placement!

Things to change:
The town gate should have a theme as well. Your town hall looked great, but the Gate seemed too boring for the town!
I'm not a fan of the placement of your cafe, it was a little hard to into
Maybe a little more public work projects
Some more fruit trees...

Great town, had a very nature feel to it

9/10 :)
 
Feel free to review Bellocan if you're still looking for rad towns to review ♪
Dream Address is in my signature ♥
 
I just updated today and would love some feedback! I started back in August '13, so I'd like to say a large portion of my town is complete. My dream address is 4500-2572-2352 if you're still looking for towns =)
 
You can check out my town Twilight if you wish! The DA is in my signature.

the town of TWILIGHT
by Psicat

Notes:
NICE PATTERNS
cool Bridges and PWPs
Loads of flowers
cute playground ^-^ I have never seen a hopscotch before so that was nice ^-^
golden roses and jacob's Ladders were nice
variety of fruits :)
nice beaches i liked the patterns
lots of fairytail streetlights
best house was the golden castle (assuming it was the mayors?) good trees and red and black roses
Loads of mushrooms and gifts :)

Things to change:
Needs more hybrids
the patterns were nice, but seemed a little colorless
if your gonna put clovers on the ground, maybe 4-leaf clovers would be a little bit better?
maybe a little more fruit trees, like different fruits, not just cheeries

Lovely town =) had a little bit of a halloween/fall feel to it

6/10
 
Thank you for the review, mi amigo! ^_^ I totally understand what you mean about the cafe. Almonte is my original town from almost a year ago - when I first started playing, and I placed my cafe there not knowing about paths and all of the other pwps c: I've gotten used to it... Sometimes I'll buy a to-go coffee and sit with it next to my campfire x3 I've also been trying to get my 100th visitor so I can change up the train station area~ Hehe.

And I have been adding moar fruit trees! :D

Again, thank you for the review! And kind words, too! ^___________^
 
Feel free to review Bellocan if you're still looking for rad towns to review ♪
Dream Address is in my signature ♥

the town of BELLOCAN
by Mayordarryn

Notes:
NICE PATTERNS very intriguing since i woke up :)
Always love the cheery blossoms
Big tree
carnations, bushes, and mushrooms were all really nice
Pretty town hall
had Jacob's Ladders <3
familiar flag.. have I visited there before?
Pretty PWPs and flowers all around!
Four leaf clovers had nice placements
lots of fruits
VESTA!!!
wow ive never seen those bush PWPs before..
Beautiful Pink trees
Flowers that matched the houses!!
Looks a lot like a park in some spots ^-^
I have the same water pattern, its very pretty
MUFFY!!!
Nice retail set up =)

Things to change:
not much really...
I don't like cedar trees when its cheery blossom season :/
I don't like the hammock PWP, substitute that with something else.. its ugly xD

Wonderful town

9/10

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I just updated today and would love some feedback! I started back in August '13, so I'd like to say a large portion of my town is complete. My dream address is 4500-2572-2352 if you're still looking for towns =)

the town of ymir
by Ymir Forest

Notes:
ive been here before!! my friend recommended it to me ^-^
Lovely Patterns
Spring blossoms <3
nice PWPs and Bushes
Carnations were beautiful
I liked when u cut the trees in different sizes <3
Nice bridges and Jacob's Ladders
consistent theme with a lot of trees :)
Not much else to say =)

What to change:
Needs at least one fruit tree xD


BEAUTIFUL

9.5/10
 
Wow that's awesome considering I've never released it anywhere else but my blog! Well, hope you enjoyed your second visit at least, haha. Also, there actually is one, just one, perfect cherry tree hidden in my town's forest ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄
Thanks so much for visiting and critiquing!
 
you are more than welcome to visit

http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?293570-which-town-would-you-prefer&highlight=

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DA's :

PAARL : 6600-4628-2156 (4 "humans" - full houses) / fairy-tale theme / all DLC
SEABELL : 6100-4544-2483 (3 "humans" - 2 full houses) / no theme really (bit modern) / some DLC
TASMANIA : 6600-5552-5401 (3 "humans" - 2 full houses) / modern / some DLC
OSHII AI : 6100-5014-4991 (2 "humans" - full houses) / nature zen theme / little DLC
 
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