Can you tell what's going on in these tops?

[juneau]

I made a few pro designs today, some with "layers" of clothes, off-shoulder designs, etc. but I'm concerned the colors I chose might not make the effects I was going for clear. I just wanna know what they look like to someone who's seeing them for the first time.

I didn't put this in the Able Sisters subforum because I think that is more for sharing QR codes, and this is a discussion kind of thread, so I'm putting it in general. I hope that's right.

Anyway, the clothes:

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1)



Same design, different color



2)



Edited - made a version without the blue part.

3)

Could you tell me what it is you see when you look at the designs, and include any jewelry, clothing articles or even what the texture looks like (knit, denim, tee). Thank you!

 

[Gummysaur]

For the first one, I think a little too much is going on in the neck area. I'd like it without the undershirt or necklace. Same with the purple one.

For 2, I think it's pretty, but I don't know what the blue thing in the center is xD;

The last one is my favorite. I think it's fine as it is.

 

[Ras]

Top one looks like a grayish sweater with a blue or purple strapped shirt (I'm a guy, I have no idea what things are) underneath, with a cross chain hanging down.

Middle one looks like an armless strapped shirt with maybe some bracelets.

Bottom looks like an open denim jacket with gray sleeves, a white shirt underneath, and a necklace. Second look, probably not a necklace but the bottom shirt just has a couple of buttons at the top (one buttoned and visible).

Looks great. Hope I got what you're going for. I probably couldn't even make a shirt with horizontal stripes that would not be embarrassing.

 

[juneau]

Gummysaur: Hmm, yeah, I think I'll stick with the simpler designs for now then, thanks for your input!

The blue thing in 2) is also an undershirt, the design was supposed to look like a large white sleeveless top over a blue tanktop, something like that. But yeah, it's kind of hard to see, especially when zoomed out outdoors.

Ras: Yay, I got the denim right. I love denim designs (but I can never seem to find enough existing ones), so it's good to know I can do that lol. And thanks! You nailed it, got more or less everything I was trying to do.

It is a necklace in 3), but I should probably darken that so it doesn't look like part of the shirt.

 

[Ras]

I've seen girls wearing the thing in the second set, I just don't know what to call it. It's usually real light, airy and transparent, right? I'm no Gracie, but it looks like a real thing to me.

 

[Scribbler397]

I clearly see the textures. You did a good job on those. Is the first necklace a cross?

 

[juneau]

I've seen girls wearing the thing in the second set, I just don't know what to call it. It's usually real light, airy and transparent, right? I'm no Gracie, but it looks like a real thing to me.

Lol thanks, I don't know what it's called either tbh, but I was going for something like this:

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But with another shirt inside. Preparing for Spring.

I clearly see the textures. You did a good job on those. Is the first necklace a cross?

Thanks! Yeah, it's a cross, I find cross necklaces the easiest to do considering the small sizes of the designs.

 

[sn0wxyuki]

I like the first one just the way it are^^ Hopefully you can make the qr code cause I really like the one with necklace xD

 

[juneau]

Thank you! I will put some codes up in the Able Sisters subforum when I'm done tweaking the colors.

 

[Saranghae]

You did a great job!! I'm really bad at describing clothes but I can definitely tell what everything is.

 

[juneau]

Thank you!