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The story can be real or fake, I don't care. Give me your tears for this digital villager.

Best story wins. This ends in two hours or 8PM EST for anyone wondering what time.

Actually, here's my full list of villagers. Pick which one you want, note that it says which are original and which are not: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1O2sZ1yU5YaVfNEClyhjq08HOJ3vUZszn6E2j1Cg6Lmg/edit#gid=0


Questions so far:
The story must be related to the villager you want
You can enter as many times as you want but only one villager at time
 
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Marina please....
Marina was born on a rainy night with a howling wind blowing rapidley.
When Marina was born her mother had passed...away...
1st Month:Marina was 30 days old...she was a quiet child...she was perfect in a way...nobody could describe.
The first time she cried:Marina was quiet...until her father ripped her book...Marina cried so soothley..you could
not hear...
1st year:When Marina turned one she grew a tentacle...it was odd at the time...mainly
because octopuses only have eight legs.
Fathers death:Marina had lost her father at 3 years old...she was young and she didnt understand...
10th year:As Marina prepared for her lost year before high school....she was bullied by Octavian...and beloved by Zucker...
21st Birthday...Marina never had a party or a smile since her fathers passing...that all changed
when she meet Olaf...Olaf was a smug anteater...who liked style and Marina liked designing....they seem
unlikly to get along but...they sure did...
1st date:Zucker had the courage to ask Marina out...she accepted...
Marriage:Marina was under pressure with the weeding...so she fled the church.
Arikui:She arrived at Arikui...the town of hope and love...She lived a happy life with her new friends...

Arikui:means Anteater in japanese
and is my town name.
Thank you for reading...
 
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Mine is for Lucky. Based on a cat story that teared me up.

A puppy was a stray in a small town of GrimGate. He was a rag, straggly and hideous. He was missing an eye, has his fur turned black and had a small voice. His name was unknown.

It wasn't until one girl named Raven found her. Raven was young. She picked up he pup and looked at him. His collar said one word: Lucky. She decided to take him home.

But then, Lucky met a fate. Terrible one. He tried to be friendly with a local bear cub. It turned bad.

Lucky was in the town square, in pain as he was beaten up by Vladimir. He was bad. So they bandaged him.

He survived it. But he was a live, living mummy.

He live life and was fine. Moo.
 
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For Ribbot

It was a warm, midsummer day, in a small house in the suburbs of a small town whose name has faded into history. Two brothers rushed down the stairs into the living room. The younger brother s trying to keep hold of a duffel bag, nearly dropping it several times. The elder was trying not to laugh at his struggling sibling. As was the tradition, these two brothers would play Animal Crossing together on their Nintendo every day, taking turns at fishing, catching bugs, and chatting with the neighbors. It was always an enjoyable time that the brothers would have together. However, for a few days, that would not be the case. The boys' mother called out from across the house, "Sam! You ready to go?"
"Yes, ma! Just a minute!", a squeaky voice shouted back, "Me and Petey are saying bye to the neighbors!"
"Alright, but be quick. We don't wanna be late for camp!"
"Sure thing, ma!"
As their mother went back to the car, Pete brought the character around town, talking to each neighbor at least once. First was Cesar, the grumpy old gorilla who lived on the beach. Neither if the boys had liked him that much, but Pete had mentioned envy of his mustache on several occasions. Next was Savannah, a friendly zebra whom both boys enjoyed the company of. As the boys conversed with each neighbor, their mother grew impatient. After quite some time, she came back into the house, visibly disgruntled. "We're leaving, Sam! Get the lead out!" Neither Sam nor Pete responded.
"Now, Samuel!", she clamored. Sam, upset to be pulled from his game, pleaded, "Aww, but there's one more guy, ma!" Pete had reached the last neighbor, a frog named Ribbot. A super cool robot, he was Sam's favorite of them all.
"There was one more guy ten minutes ago! Let's go!" Pete started the conversation with the automaton, and was told about a topic he hadn't heard before.
"Aww, but ma--" Pete was unsure how to respond and gestured to get Sam's attention.
"Samuel Mitchell, you take you and your bags to the car right now!" As he read the words on the screen, he let out a gasp of shock. The 13th was only a couple days away, he wouldn't be back in time to do anything about it. Animal affairs were among Sam's responsibilities in the virtual town. Pete barely knew which buttons did which, he couldn't manage the town for that long.
"Okay, ma..." Once she brought out the secret weapon, the middle name, there was no point in attempting to stall any longer. As he hugged Pete goodbye, he whispered, "Don't let him move out, big brother." He then stumbled out of the house and into the car, with bags in tow, and drove off. Pete selected the option to keep Ribbot in town, to which the frog responded "Hmm, now I'm being pulled in different directions! I just don't know what do do now, toady!"

While at camp, Sam could only think of Ribbot. Ribbot was his best friend, his fishing buddy, the peanut butter to his jelly, the hide to his seek. He could barely stand to go to school without saying hi to him first, much less summer camp, much less ... He couldn't bear to think of it any longer, yet he knew the 13th was fast approaching. Could Pete convince him to stay? For a short couple of days, Pete would spend hours tirelessly working to keep Ribbot in town. Dozens of letters, presents, conversations and favors kept Pete so busy, he barely spoke with any of the other animals. In fact, he played for so long, the batteries of the controller dried up. There was no way to play any further, to turn the toad back into their little town. He used the last of the battery life to save and quit the game. Only time would tell where Ribbot would end up...

On the 15th, two days after the supposed move and three days since the controller's batteries had dried up, Sam had returned home. Pete was there at the door, and both boys darted into the living room, the elder brother remembering to grab the batteries their father bought that afternoon from the kitchen counter. Sam put the Animal Crossing disc into the Nintendo, and waited anxiously for the game to boot up. When their character first exited the house, Pete noticed that the mailbox had some letters in it. One from Savannah which contained a spiffy new shirt, two from Tom Nook's shop with furniture attached, and one from a... Ribbot. As Sam read the letter, a few tears trickled silently down his face. Pete was awestruck, sitting slack-jawed as he read along. The letter in question goes as follows:

Dear Sammy,

Sorry I didn't get to see you on my last day, but I
wanted to tell you that I'm embarking on a new
adventure! I sure hope you can remember all the
fun times we shared, because I sure will!

See you around, Ribbot
 
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I want Fauna. I NEED fauna. Please god let me meet her. I don't know where to start with my 'story' so i'll just... jump right into it. When i was around five or so years old I moved a bit further down state to the countryside. My father had bought a farm house accompanied by 35 or so acres of land. My dad hunts. Growing up I didn't really understand it or necessarily agree with it... But I was young. I was young and didn't understand. Maybe it was because I hadn't been exposed to the horrors of the world we live in, yet..... Or maybe because I just didn't really care about hunting or killing wild animals and just wanted to play with my toys, I'm not sure..... At one point, my dad went hunting on the dense woods located on our property,,, and he had my mom and i drive out there as far as the fourwheelers could do in order to help him field dress it. It. It made my heartache. The lifeless look on the poor deer's face.... I started crying loudly, dropping to my knees and bawling into my hands. I then knew the travesties that made life for these poor, innocent creatures so awful.....

My father had a friend from work, whose wife would take in orphaned baby deer and raise them till they could fend for themselves. I started going over to their house and bottle-feeding the fawns... There was one in particular, who I called "dearie" who i bonded very well with. She was a sweetheart.... I have to leave soon so I will try to sum this up as briefly as possible (i will come back edit my message, telling the story in full upon my return...) she and i were buds. We had both lost our mothers at a young age, destined to be taken in by others who would raise us to our full potential. Except Dearie would never get to reach her full potential. There was a breach in the fenced in area where the little doggie igloo-type things that the deer stayed in.... A coyote had broken in. The man and his wife heard commotion outside, but by the time they chased off the animal... Dearie was no longer with us. I was devastated.


Years later I am now a young adult, with a copy of ACNL for my nintendo 3ds. In my town I had lots of cool villagers!! Including one deer whose name was Fauna, and a wolf named Chief. One day Chief (a cranky villager) got into an argument with Fauna and upset her deeply. I tried to cheer her up, and at the time it seemed like it worked. The next day i had lost my 3ds ac adapter and could not charge my system. I found it two days later. Fauna had moved out. She was gone. Forever. She reminds me so much of that fawn that I had bonded with as a child... And her catchphrase is even "dearie" which is what i named the fawn...

I have a new town now. And a new chance to make things right. Please god let me meet her.
 
It's not every day you see someone made out of stitches and patches. It's not like he was born that way yet eyes will still stare and fingers will point at the freak show. His fabric body also happens to be colorful so it's not easy to go around unnoticed. Other villagers have given the nickname "Stitches" and he has been known as that for as long as he can remember. He can't even remember his original name. Stitches would try to be friendly with others but they would turn him away as they would say, "He makes me feel uncomfortable." Every sleepless night the fabric bear would look at himself in the mirror and ask, "Why are you not perfect like everyone else?"

Then one unexpected day a new villager moved in. Her name is Coco. As she greets herself to other villagers they also turn her away. Why? Stitches goes to see for himself and finds something that's even stranger than him. Why, this villager... She looks like a lifeless wooden doll. When she speaks she doesn't make a smile or a frown. She doesn't even blink or breathe. How is she alive? As Coco notices Stitches she waves at him. Like everyone else, he pretends he doesn't notice her and walks towards the other direction. He doesn't want to become more of a freak than he already is. If he is seen with a villager like Coco, he could be looked down upon even more so. "No, this is good." Stitches says to himself. "The other villagers will be too busy disapproving her and forget how much of a freak I am.

That following night Stitches could not sleep again. So he decides to go out on a stroll to clear his mind. Why couldn't he get Coco out of his mind? It is then that he hears sobbing in the distance. He looks over and finds Coco on top of a hill and seems to be crying into her paws. Stitches hesitates but finally decides to approach the wooden rabbit. "Mind if I, uh, sit here?" He asks her quietly. Coco looks up and Stitches was a bit surprised as there are no tears or any expression on her face. She nods slowly and looks back down. Stitches sits next to her and they are both quiet for a few long moments until he finally asks, "Are you sad?"

"Why would I be?" Coco replies. "I have no feelings. I'm just a freak." She hugs her knees close to her chest. "No one wants to be my friend because I don't look like a normal rabbit. It's the reason I moved here in the first place because I thought..."

"Things would be different?" Stitches finishes her sentence. Coco looks up and nods.

"Yeah... Different." They are silent once more. Stitches looks at Coco for a long moment. Now he feels terrible for ignoring her today. She's just as miserable as he is.

"I bet you look at yourself in the mirror every night wondering why you look the way you do." Stitches breaks the silence.

"At least you can see your own frown." Coco remarks. "People make fun of me and can't see the pain they're causing. I can't smile, cry... I always look the same no matter what."

"Well at least you're not as colorful as I am." Stitches points out. "Everyone notices me because of how colorful I am. I'm easy to make fun of. With your plain color, you can easily stay in the shadows."

"But I don't want to." Coco begins to make sobbing noises again. "I want to be noticed. I just want friends. I don't want to be alone anymore." The little wooden rabbit begins to cry, at least it sounds like she is. There's no tears or facial emotion to indicate that she is but it's pretty obvious to Stitches.

Stitches puts a fabric arm around Coco. "I'll be your friend." He tells her softly. "I'm sorry I didn't wave back when you did earlier today. I was just afraid I would be judged more if I was seen talking to you."

"So then... You'll be my friend even if other villagers make fun of you?" Coco asks, her sobbing noises growing quieter.

"Y-yeah." Stitches stutters out, looking away for a moment thinking if he has made a grave mistake. Then he suddenly feels two little arms wrapped around him. "Oh, thank you!" Coco says. "You're the nicest villager I have ever met!"

That following morning Stitches goes out to retrieve is mail when Coco approaches him. Stitches looks around anxiously making sure no one is around to see them together. "Hello, Stitches! How are you today?" Stitches nods at Coco and smiles nervously. "Fine. I was just going to go to the store and see what snacks I could buy today so I'll be busy."

"Oh, that sounds like a good idea! How about I come with you?" Coco insists. "We could have a snack picnic together if you want." As Stitches opens his mouth to reply, Ankha walks by and notices the two. She scrunches her nose at the very sight. "You're not friends with that thing, now are you, Stitches?" She asks in a snooty tone.

"Uh, no. Of course not. Why would I be? I-I mean, just look at it!" He points at Coco who has made no expression to that comment but instead slowly turns around and walks away.

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Stitches receives a letter that he finds on his doorstep after he returns from shopping. He opens the letter as it says, "I'm sorry that I have burdened you, Stitches. I really liked you. I guess since no one wants me around then I'll do everyone a favor. I hope you have a good snack. -Coco"

"No..." Stitches drops the paper and everything else he was carrying and run towards Coco's house. "No, this can't be! This can't be happening!" As he reaches her house, there are fire dogs surrounding her house, putting out the fire.
 
OKAY THIS CONTEST IS OVER, thanks for playing everyone, winners will be announced in two seconds.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Best Writing: Mr. Marowak for Ribbot

Fake n' Best Sob Story: sweets for Fauna

Lil' Spooky Story: Store-chan for Stitches

That's right, all three of you win. I'm aware that two of you cannot take your villagers right now so I'm going to load up Stitches now assuming Store-chan is ready.

Thanks to everyone who entered.
 
OKAY THIS CONTEST IS OVER, thanks for playing everyone, winners will be announced in two seconds.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Best Writing: Mr. Marowak for Ribbot

Fake n' Best Sob Story: sweets for Fauna

Lil' Spooky Story: Store-chan for Stitches

That's right, all three of you win. I'm aware that two of you cannot take your villagers right now so I'm going to load up Stitches now assuming Store-chan is ready.

Thanks to everyone who entered.

Thank you so much! I just need to move out one of my villagers as she is in boxes right now. If no one wants her then I'll void her.
 
((Darnit, I was too late! Oh well))
This one here is for Julian! Sorry if it is kind of long! :)
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Julian's childhood was not a pleasent one...
There was once a time where he was endlessly tormented,
just for his apperance...
"His bright blue coat is weird and those starry-eyes were just creepy!"
Those words he heard endlessly, but what we was bullied the most for...
was his single ivory horn...
Everyday, Julian was picked on....
No matter where he hid, those demons would always find him...
Overtime his bright spirit began to dim,
to the point where he chose to end his life,
forever....
Atop that bridge he stood....
The only though was
"It will be over soon..."
"All I need to do is jump..."

As his hoof's grip slowly released, he heard a yell...
A human running to save the colt...
"Please! Come down! You don't have to do this!"
"Why would anyone care about me?! Im a freak! I have no reason to live! Please, just go away!"
"I understand you're in pain, but please, at least listen to what I have to say!"
"You are only doing what those bullies want you to do! Are you just going to what they want, or are you going to hold your head up high and stay strong?!"
Julian froze, his eyes the person's words hitting him in the heart
"Everyone is worried about you! You can come down and show everyone that your spirit shines like the sun! You can come down and show those bullies that they were wrong to mess with you! You can come down and show everyone that there is nothing wrong with being different!"
You know what Julian did?
With tears in his eyes,
he came down from the bridge.
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Thank you for reading :)
P.S. The human's idenity is up to you
Why did I have to be listening to the Fairy Tail slow theme while typing this :(
 
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