Another Dream Review thread

[Yukari Yakumo]

get your town reviewed, review other towns

please be nice and constructive

 

[ieRWaZz]

I'd like to review some
So give me your dream adresses

If anyone wants to review mine, my dream adress is is my signature

 

[TheGreatBrain]

I have some fun themed towns in my signature.

I'll check out and review yours in a few.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Oops. Double posted.

 

[PurpleLutari]

My DA is 7100-5786-5940, it's still in progress but if anyone wants to visit go ahead o/

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Yukari- Do you have a dream code? I could visit your town too.

Town of Fendar.

I've visited Fendar just recently. Last time I dressed as a witch. This time I went with the funky wig and cool dress.

I love the Pikachu's and foresty path. The cute signs next to the houses are nice.The flower colors and arrangements look great, and I love the area with the bell. I know I'm repeating a lot from my last review. Sorry about that.

The campsite is so lovely. I would love to have a place like that in my backyard. Ahh yes. This is the town with the gorgeous beach area leading to the dock.

Your town is so lovely. I had a great time visiting both times. I shall return.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Town of Starfall.

First off. I love your town name. I was hoping you would have a starry path, and you didn't disappoint. It looks beautiful. Oh my goodness, it's everywhere. It really makes me feel like I'm in the sky with the star pattern all over. I love the water path going through parts of the town too.

Blazes house- Nice job on the main room. I love that it matches the town theme.The entire house is nicely decorated. I like the game room in the back. The library on the right is also one of my favorites.

You said your town was a wip. I look forward to visiting again when it's finished. So far so good.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Yukari- Do you have a dream code? I could visit your town too.

sure; just updated during a thunderstorm
DA: 4300-5239-7124

would like a little advice about
*Should I move the tower over to the left, keep it as is, or just remove it and make the area between Olivia and Amelia more of a forest?
*A PWP in the little glade north of Mira? I was thinking the bell, but open to ideas
*What flower combo would be good in front of the zen garden? want something blue/purple-ish

I've seen your others towns, so I'll visit Cherish

note:
+ like
- dislike
* neutral

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Cherish
Town:
+gems around the town tree is interesting
+gem theme going here
+nice fountain
+nice use of flowers; combos are interesting
+trellis area
+clover path
+very nice starry path
+park area is nice, but a little
+lighthouse area
-path does not connect to Annette's and Chuck's houses
-feels too simple

Houses:
Annette's House: Character theme house
*Main: Copper and Booker
+Right: Reese and Cyrus
*Back: Dr Shrunk
*Left: Brewster
+Basement: Blathers
+2nd Floor: Gracie

Layne's House:
*Main: sports
*Right: Pac Man
*Back: resturant
*Left: spooky, but a little too simple
*Basement: Superman's fortress
*2nd Floor: Mario World

's House:
-Main: umm...
+Right: music room
+Back: puppies!
+Left: Happy Birthday!
+Basement: ice cream shop
+2nd Floor: nice garden

Chuck's House:
+Main: AHOY!!; nice table as map design
+Right: underwater
+Back: pirate restaurant?
+Left: Jaws?
+Basement: very nice designs
+2nd Floor: wet cabanna

Suggestions:
* alter the path from the bridge to make the path to Annette's and Chuck's houses more noticeable
* add to Layne's interiors

Final Thoughts: Layne's house had interesting concepts but each room was a little too simplistic. Looking back, the rest of the town feels a little like that. It is nice, but sadly just... nice. I can't call it amazing or wonderful because there just isn't really much "WOW!" to it. But, that maybe that's the point.

Rating: 3.5/5
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[Vizionari]

My dream address is 4200-4401-7842 if anyone wants to visit. If I have time I'll go look at some other towns o:

 

[MrGameAndScotch]

4800-5483-8257

Would also be happy to take a look at other towns.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Yukari. I can see what you mean about the tower. I think you should keep it, but it would look better moved to the left a bit. As for the area above Mira. I think a bell would go nicely there. I was going to suggest a picnic blanket, but I don't think you can with that rock in the way. I also see that you have a patterned picnic blanket anyway. As for blue and purple flowers. I think blue and purple pansies look nice together.

Your town is pretty. I like the paths and the houses are nicely decorated. Thanks for sharing your dream town. I had a lot of fun exploring. I really liked the area around Marisa's house. Nice job.

 

[disneydorky]

My dream address is 5800-5738-6242, I've been focusing on the town a lot lately, and am pretty dang happy with it. There are a couple untidy places still, it's always a work in progress, but I'd love to see what you guys think!

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Town of Tenshi.

I like towns that have paths that are colorful and completely different from everyone elses. I like that there are all kinds of neat little areas to explore. The area above the bridge on the West side of town is very lovely. It's like a secret little forest garden. Your town is so nicely decorated, and the flowers look amazing, but that West bridge baffles me. You have a one space path going up to the bridge, and a bush and tree blocking both exits.

Ai's house- Very cute main room. I love yellow. The basement was fun. I made sure to get my drink on before exploring the rest of the house.lol. The sewing room is my favorite, although the entire house is very nice.

Lurai's house- Also nicely done. The basement is my favorite.

I had a great time in your lovely town. Thanks for sharing.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Town of Pallet.

This is the third time I've visited your dream town. I love the colorful paths and cute signs. The houses are great. I never tire of visiting them. This may be my third time visiting, but it won't be the last. Fantasic job.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

~
Vizionari
DA:4200-4401-7842

Tenshi
Town:
+cherry blossoms!
+interesting path
+flowers
+fountain area
+nice use of alternating path and clovers
+hot spring area
+winding paths are nice
+bench at penninsula
+flower clock area
-too many flowers! it takes a lot for me to say that, so that's saying something

Houses:
Ai's House:
*Main:interesting, but so yellow...
+Right: nice kitchen
+Back:very nice bathroom; never seen a bathroom like that before
+Left: pleasant bedroom for a costume maker
*Basement: nice, but the Imperial K.K. doesn't feel right(partly for mismatching the room but also repeated in the main room)
+2nd Floor: island picnic

Lurai's House:
+Main: very nice parlor
+Right: nice spa/bathroom
+Back: very nice underwater theme
+Left: interesting combo of cabana and gracie; points for Soul K.K. with gracie(I happen the think they are great together too)
+Basement: Wow. I can just feel the cavities forming right now
+2nd Floor: a happy couple and princess and ice theme combo

Suggestions:
* fewer flowers. just so many...
* maybe try different music for Ai's basement
* for Lurai's left room, see what a cityscape wall looks like(not that the room is bad, but I've done gracie and Soul K.K. with it before and it was perfect)

Final Thoughts: Very nice; a lot of time and effort was put into this and everything fits perfect. Just... so many flowers...
Rating: 4.95/5
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[TheGreatBrain]

Town of Dinoland.

This is another town I've visited and reviewed before. I love the colors of flowers, and the houses are always a joy to visit. I love the left and right rooms in Jessica's house. Very pretty town. Great job.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

bump

updated mine; moved the tower and added a bell
DA: 4300-5239-7124

 

[HungryForCereal]

aw i wish i can post my DA now but im not even close to finishing my town.