‣ all things nice | WINNERS ANNOUNCED PG 641
- Thread starter doveling
- Start date
SensaiGallade
✨ Étoile 2020 ✨
Go on then!
lol i bet it was better than mine..i literally suck at writing poems, i'm better at stories tbh
pls dont kill me x.x
The Fair is a Magical Place
by: ShayminSkies (me)
The summer nights be hot and lonely,
until you step into the fair,
but then you realize its couple games which makes it unfair,
you turn around and glance closely,
and see a magical spark in the sky,
you ask yourself "Why am I alone, why, why?"
Look around find a bench, and take a sadly seating,
as you thought back to when your lover said they were cheating,
you sit there on the bench sad and weary,
until a beautiful maiden as wondrous as a fairy,
looks at you with her golden eyes,
and offers to share her fair pie
She sits down next to you, her look is amazing,
like a delicate breeze passing by,
she gave you a fork and you both ate pie,
only for her to run off and say bye,
she drops her pink heart glow wand that was still blazing
You gently pick it up and remember what she said: "come to the Ferris wheel by 10"
the time on your wrist says 9:49,
you quickly run with all your might,
as you get there you notice no one's there,
and just get in the line feeling like you lost a fight
You stand there almost ready to the front line,
and then you see her, now your world turning bright,
she goes next to you, you glance at the time which was 9:59
together you get on the ride, feeling like fireworks on a hot summer night
you notice you still had what she dropped, you hand it over,
until you realize she had a new one with a lucky clover
While you are on the ride, spinning and spinning,
she gives you the lucky clover wand,
you ask "I'm not lucky what's this for?"
she holds you and gives you a kiss that felt warm,
this day at the fair was a memorable one indeed,
because she gave you a glow wand that would be considered a weed
The Fair is a Magical Place
by: ShayminSkies (me)
The summer nights be hot and lonely,
until you step into the fair,
but then you realize its couple games which makes it unfair,
you turn around and glance closely,
and see a magical spark in the sky,
you ask yourself "Why am I alone, why, why?"
Look around find a bench, and take a sadly seating,
as you thought back to when your lover said they were cheating,
you sit there on the bench sad and weary,
until a beautiful maiden as wondrous as a fairy,
looks at you with her golden eyes,
and offers to share her fair pie
She sits down next to you, her look is amazing,
like a delicate breeze passing by,
she gave you a fork and you both ate pie,
only for her to run off and say bye,
she drops her pink heart glow wand that was still blazing
You gently pick it up and remember what she said: "come to the Ferris wheel by 10"
the time on your wrist says 9:49,
you quickly run with all your might,
as you get there you notice no one's there,
and just get in the line feeling like you lost a fight
You stand there almost ready to the front line,
and then you see her, now your world turning bright,
she goes next to you, you glance at the time which was 9:59
together you get on the ride, feeling like fireworks on a hot summer night
you notice you still had what she dropped, you hand it over,
until you realize she had a new one with a lucky clover
While you are on the ride, spinning and spinning,
she gives you the lucky clover wand,
you ask "I'm not lucky what's this for?"
she holds you and gives you a kiss that felt warm,
this day at the fair was a memorable one indeed,
because she gave you a glow wand that would be considered a weed
Last edited:
visibleghost
ʕ •̀ o •́ ʔ
great poem !!! mine was really short because i am really bad at being poetic.
awe what no thats really good i love it
- - - Post Merge - - -
a story writing contest would've been great
SensaiGallade
✨ Étoile 2020 ✨
Very long but very good. Trust me, I've seen longer!
I'm sure its creative :3 let us see lol
Summer Night
In August, we gather 'round,
for when the fair comes to town
Glitter, contests and delight
Our happiness will shine like stars, on this summer night
Jump up for joy, celebrate with friends,
hope that tonight will never end
Play some games, sit back and relax
The fair is grand, so always expect the best
If you're new here, then enjoy the ride!
Let your fears melt away for the night
Glow wands, feathers, and much more!
Tell me, what are you waiting for?
Don't be worried, I assure you, you'll have a blast
The fair leaves town in 3 weeks, so participate while you can!
And even when you're blinded by bright lights,
you know you'll always remember this warm, summer night
*cringe*
In August, we gather 'round,
for when the fair comes to town
Glitter, contests and delight
Our happiness will shine like stars, on this summer night
Jump up for joy, celebrate with friends,
hope that tonight will never end
Play some games, sit back and relax
The fair is grand, so always expect the best
If you're new here, then enjoy the ride!
Let your fears melt away for the night
Glow wands, feathers, and much more!
Tell me, what are you waiting for?
Don't be worried, I assure you, you'll have a blast
The fair leaves town in 3 weeks, so participate while you can!
And even when you're blinded by bright lights,
you know you'll always remember this warm, summer night
*cringe*
its cute and good! c: I like it <3
the poems shared so far are wonderful!
I done a last minute acrostic (when all the first letters of the first word spell out something - in my case the name of the poem) and sent it in at 1am last night. I can write, I have good literature skills but writing something made up and/or creative just isn't my strong point, honestly I'd ace pretty much any essay, but this type of thing kills me.
I done a last minute acrostic (when all the first letters of the first word spell out something - in my case the name of the poem) and sent it in at 1am last night. I can write, I have good literature skills but writing something made up and/or creative just isn't my strong point, honestly I'd ace pretty much any essay, but this type of thing kills me.
thank you c:
- - - Post Merge - - -
honestly, i'm better at writing things that i can relate to...writing is my therapy in a way, which is why majority of my stories are depressing
i can't relate to fairs or summer nights at all, which is why my poem didn't turn out so good
good morning to you too! c:
good morning <3
