Here are my thoughts!
- I really love the colour and flower choices you used to match with certain villager exteriors and buildings! I like to landscape this way as well. Bunnie and Willow are my favourites.
- If I’m being nitpicky with the flowers I’d say the flower clock would be better suited some yellow, white, or red tulips (basically what’s inside the clock lol). I also think the 5 by 5 square of flowers in front of prince’s house seems a little out of place and the combination of flowers don’t work as well as the other areas you’ve landscaped (like the lilies really bother me).
- The section behind prince’s house also obviously needs some work. Were you thinking of putting a PWP there? maybe just get rid of the path and fill it with trees.
- The mayor’s house exterior is great, although I’m not too fond of the interior (I’m assuming you’re just hoarding gyroids temporarily?). I’m curious to see what you’ll do for the other two residents exteriors (I didn’t bother going inside)
- The symmetry and pwp placement is nice, like tire toy benches in front of the jungle gym. The only place I don’t like where it works is where you placed two metal benches in front of Fauna’s house. It doesn’t seem very fitting (or just unnecessary to have two)
- I really like the totem pole PWP but it’s a shame it’s built so close to the cliff, almost hidden by the trees (I almost missed it). Such a nice PWP should perhaps be used somewhere that’s easily seen.
- I admire all the effort you made to make sure the houses align, and if they don’t, at least have an interesting front lawn!
- I like how you alternate between grass paths and stone paths… I just reallyyyy dislike the grass path you chose. The edges are so harsh because it’s dark and doesn’t blend with the grass properly. It looks especially odd right up against the river and corners. I generally think you shouldn’t put any paths where the river curves though. It looks too unnatural.
- I stayed in your town until the town tune, it was nice!
- Lastly, remember to fill that open spot in the plaza next to the bed with some paths before you upload your dream, unless there was an event at the time. Maybe upload your dream to a day when there’s no special visitor so you can fill it
I enjoyed your town! good luck fixing it up, but I think it’s already pretty neat!