Advice for finishing touches on my town

XenonKnight56

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My towns almost complete. I put a lot of work into it and I'd really enjoy feedback, criticism, advice. I want to make my town as nice as possible so anyy critisism will do.
My DA is 5D00 003C B4A0
 
Here are my thoughts!

- I really love the colour and flower choices you used to match with certain villager exteriors and buildings! I like to landscape this way as well. Bunnie and Willow are my favourites.
- If I’m being nitpicky with the flowers I’d say the flower clock would be better suited some yellow, white, or red tulips (basically what’s inside the clock lol). I also think the 5 by 5 square of flowers in front of prince’s house seems a little out of place and the combination of flowers don’t work as well as the other areas you’ve landscaped (like the lilies really bother me).
- The section behind prince’s house also obviously needs some work. Were you thinking of putting a PWP there? maybe just get rid of the path and fill it with trees.
- The mayor’s house exterior is great, although I’m not too fond of the interior (I’m assuming you’re just hoarding gyroids temporarily?). I’m curious to see what you’ll do for the other two residents exteriors (I didn’t bother going inside)
- The symmetry and pwp placement is nice, like tire toy benches in front of the jungle gym. The only place I don’t like where it works is where you placed two metal benches in front of Fauna’s house. It doesn’t seem very fitting (or just unnecessary to have two)
- I really like the totem pole PWP but it’s a shame it’s built so close to the cliff, almost hidden by the trees (I almost missed it). Such a nice PWP should perhaps be used somewhere that’s easily seen.
- I admire all the effort you made to make sure the houses align, and if they don’t, at least have an interesting front lawn!
- I like how you alternate between grass paths and stone paths… I just reallyyyy dislike the grass path you chose. The edges are so harsh because it’s dark and doesn’t blend with the grass properly. It looks especially odd right up against the river and corners. I generally think you shouldn’t put any paths where the river curves though. It looks too unnatural.
- I stayed in your town until the town tune, it was nice!
- Lastly, remember to fill that open spot in the plaza next to the bed with some paths before you upload your dream, unless there was an event at the time. Maybe upload your dream to a day when there’s no special visitor so you can fill it :p

I enjoyed your town! good luck fixing it up, but I think it’s already pretty neat!
 
Wow this is amazing
Thank you

It's a shame about the metal benches since they are my favorite bench PWP
Lol, I guess I should move the totem pole. It just sucks it's ridiculously expensive lol

It will be fun finding new grass paths

Also, I haven't worked on the interiors and around princes. Sorry
 
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Plaza: Lovely patterns! I suggest filling in any spaces left from any stands the day before so that way it has a clean look to your town when you update it. I like the surrounding tree and flower pattern.
Gate: Nice grass pattern with the lucky clovers, looks like you need some more of those in order to complete that pattern.
Bunnie's House: Nice variety of flowers, maybe add some Easter Eggs lining the outsides of the bushes to give it a character feel?
Meringue's House: I feel like you should make this a camping shop since the camp is right next to it, other than that I love the symmetry.
Camp: Switch it up on the flower pattern, oranges, reds, and pinks would work really well here.
Totem Pole : Go for a blue/red flowers pattern here with a hint of golden rose, also clovers would look good here.
Cafe: I think you should stick with the same bush type here, I would go for Pink Hydrangeas.
Rudy's House: Only issue I have here is stick with Holly Starts, the multiple bush types is throwing the whole thing off for me.
Flower patch diagonal left from Plaza: Seems all over the place with breed and color, I say either pick a couple colors or breeds to stick with.
Prince's House: Same issue with sticking to one or two bush types, the Holly Start looks out of place here.
Behind Prince's House: Turn that area into a secluded area of some sorts with some bamboo and maybe a water pattern? Considering he's a frog and it doesn't look like you really need that space for anything.
In front of Marina's House: Seems bland.
OVERALL: Fix some bush patterns, get a ton of clovers, and organize more flower paterns and you will be pretty much all set
 
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Thank you so much XD
The area around princes isn't finished, sorry about that

I hate how much space the plaza needs, that's why I can't figure out what to do in front of princes. I can't place any PWP and it makes me so mad lol
 
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