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Sooo here is your review Psicat

❤Like❤
❤ The path design! It looks like something from kingdom hearts!? Or am I wrong? xD
❤ The wisteria in front of the town hall looks so beautiful
❤ you did a good job with the reset center!
❤ the path to the golden house <3 I LOVE IT
❤ The town flag - so IT IS kingdom hearts haha ^-^
❤ the playground - heaven and hell (don't know how this game is called in english >.<)

❤Dislike❤
❤ the rotten tree near the picnic blanket o.o
❤ Your town is sooo nice - so the graveyard looks somehow wrong xD
❤ somehow I don't like the bamboo between the path - it looks so crowded
❤ Sometimes the colours of the flowers don't match well - like pink and blue, or the yellow, red and white roses.


❤Improvment❤
Your town is great! I really like it and it's well developed. So there isn't much to do anymore. Maybe work on the flowers. For me it's a pain that the flowers are not matching each other xD but it's my opionen. Also not a fan of the graveyard and maybe some pwps where the fruit tree crowed is? I don't know if you hit already the 30 pwp mark D:

I really really like your town! It's awesome <3 Thanks for the dream :)


Will do the other ones as well - and PLEASE read the whole post otherwise I will not do the review >_< I don't know why nobody is able to read D: And then everyone is confused of my bad english xD

Yeah, flower arranging and landscaping are the one thing I'm not very good at. I'm been trying to fix that. I also did hit my PWP limit. But, I figured maybe a graveyard, even if it's not a keyblade graveyard might fit the tone. I tried to represent parts of some of my favorite worlds in the town, even if it was mostly in the houses.

Thank you for the review.
 
Here is your review TikiBones!
❤Like❤
❤ The area with the firepit. I really like the overall look <3
❤ The natural looking of your town. I LOVE natural towns
❤ Pine trees! I really really like them.
❤ the flow of your town! Everything works so good together!
❤ bush placement
❤ tons of hybrids
❤ cherry blossom <3


❤Dislike❤
❤ In front of the house - all flowers are purple and one is golden owo
❤ The well area is really nice but it would look better with some clovers maybe? Still it looks good so it's not really a dislike.
❤ I'm not a fan of this green bed pwp - not sure how it's called in english. I would do a hamock instead >.<
❤ the random shell xD
❤ I don't like the blue and black flower mix (roses). I would do purple/blue maybe?



❤Improvment❤
There wasn't much to dislike! So I really really love your town. It has a natural look and is so pretty :) It was hard to find things I dislike xD Only a few little things - but it's all my personal opinion! Thanks for the dream. And please next time don't forget to include the "I have read all" thing :)

Yeah, flower arranging and landscaping are the one thing I'm not very good at. I'm been trying to fix that. I also did hit my PWP limit. But, I figured maybe a graveyard, even if it's not a keyblade graveyard might fit the tone. I tried to represent parts of some of my favorite worlds in the town, even if it was mostly in the houses.

Thank you for the review.

Oh wow that sounds awesome with the worlds owo Maybe I will visit your town again to look inside the houses ^__^
 
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Here is your review TikiBones!
❤Like❤
❤ The area with the firepit. I really like the overall look <3
❤ The natural looking of your town. I LOVE natural towns
❤ Pine trees! I really really like them.
❤ the flow of your town! Everything works so good together!
❤ bush placement
❤ tons of hybrids
❤ cherry blossom <3


❤Dislike❤
❤ In front of the house - all flowers are purple and one is golden owo
❤ The well area is really nice but it would look better with some clovers maybe? Still it looks good so it's not really a dislike.
❤ I'm not a fan of this green bed pwp - not sure how it's called in english. I would do a hamock instead >.<
❤ the random shell xD
❤ I don't like the blue and black flower mix (roses). I would do purple/blue maybe?



❤Improvment❤
There wasn't much to dislike! So I really really love your town. It has a natural look and is so pretty :) It was hard to find things I dislike xD Only a few little things - but it's all my personal opinion! Thanks for the dream. And please next time don't forget to include the "I have read all" thing :)

Aw, thank you so much for the review! I apologize for not saying that I read the rules <3 and I just want to say that you're doing fantastic for English not being your first language! ^_^

I know a lot of people don't like the green bed("camping cot", in English :3), but with that area being so narrow, a hammock wouldn't fit there :c I tried :c
I've also added clovers by the well area, just yesterday actually~! :3 I've gotten rid of the shell, as well xD
And I used black & blue roses because purple & blue was already so prevalent in my town, and those houses had black roofs, so I thought I'd give it some variety :3 But I totally agree that purple & blue look better, hehe. ^_^

Again, thank you for the review! :3
 
Hello. :) I read the rules. If you have time, would you mind reviewing my town? It's still work in progress; the landscaping is the hardest thing for me, thus, I'd appreciate any constructive criticism. :] Also, I was planning on arranging my flowers more once I had the colors that I wanted.

My dream code is: 5200-5295-4257. Thank you :)
 
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Feel free to visit mine if you have time~ ♪
I have read the rules.
Dream Address for Bellocan is in my signature ♥
Here it is anyway, just in case: 5000-5241-0999
 
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Hello ^-^ I've read the rules, could you please review mine?

DA is 5100-5481-8490

{The only thing that is no where near done is the player house exteriors, currently awaiting on Tom Nook to carry the ones I want}

thank you :)
 
You can visit Ophylix! I updated during the cherry blossoms, but I've been making changes since. I'm not quite ready to update again, but feel free to visit anyway. I haven't done any major landscaping changes just planted trees in a few more random places, I've been doing a lot of work in houses (which you said you weren't going in), so it should be fine! DA: 5400-3515-8043
My town is like 80% finished. I don't have all my dreamies yet, but a vast majority of the landscaping is done.
 
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I know how the rules work and I would love for you to visit mine!! It's kind of a wedding theme! :)
By the way, my dream code is in my signature!~
 
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Good morning~ I will do all of the dream reviews on friday :) I have now two days without internet - so sadly I can't visit them today or tomorrow >_< But I will do it - promise!

*still need my dreamer badge*
 
I will now continue to give everyone the review requested ^^

❤Like❤
❤ The presents when waking up are really cute - I love the outfit.
❤ The pink brick path
❤ The flower design is so adorable
❤ tulpin field with the metal banch <3
❤ the flowerarch with the water around. It looks really pretty


❤Dislike❤
❤ The path with the berrys. It just don't look like a path for me - more like a design? maybe you understand what I mean xD But it don't give the feeling if I'm walking on a path.
❤ The town is too cute for me - it's like sugar for my eyes
❤ the flowerpots in the flowers - the design of the flower design has another background than the flowerpots - so it don't match.
❤ There is a bench in front of a fountain. But the bench is to short to match the fountain - you know what I mean? It looks "wrong" for me - you need to build a pwp that needs 3 spaces and not only two. But that's only my opinion.

❤Improvment❤
Sometimes I think the path is a little bit mixed up - and you should build more pwps. I really like some areas of your town - my favorit is the one with the flower arch ^^ For my eyes it was to much cuteness so please don't be offended by my opinon!
 
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Thank you very much for the review ^_^

I set out to make a cute town, and make a cute town I did (although maybe it should come with a warning, lol)
I agree, its not to everyone's taste, but I love my town dearly. I'm glad you found some areas of improvement, I will look into some of them. Its nice to hear what other people think, thank you Mokuren (:
 
Hello ^-^ I've read the rules, could you please review mine?

DA is 5100-5481-8490

{The only thing that is no where near done is the player house exteriors, currently awaiting on Tom Nook to carry the ones I want}

thank you :)

Oh no, would you by any chance be able to skip mine for now? I've made some huge changes so now it's a complete mess >< but it should be back to its normal state tomorrow night!
 
Hi!,please,can you vist my town,i want to do something that makes the town better,but i dont have any inspirations or ideas
Can you review it please?,Thanks c:
I also read the rules

DA:4400-5442-6703
 
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