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Mokuren
Love through a prism
So many people to review owo It will take some time to do all the reviews but I will visit all 
The review for Lunatic:
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Review for Oblivion ^-^
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Lucindaa here you go :3
The review for Lunatic:
❤Like❤
❤ First impression was "Ah a SAO fan" - nice town name :3
❤The sakura paths are really sweet. Saw them in different towns now. Also the water pattern - I like it
❤The natural overall look. Many pine trees - I love them so much but most people are only using the normal ones <.<
❤Lots of flowers - I like the arrangement
❤Flowerarch fits perferctly with the two logs ^^
❤Brewesters with the bushes <3
❤The hotspring with the bamboo!
❤The waterfountain with the water arround
❤Dislike❤
❤ The spot with the tree stumps and all the mushroms. Somehow it looks croweded
❤The patterns you used at the bamboo
❤empty sections - like the one at retails
❤Improvment❤
❤ Your town is really beautiful. I love the bushes and pine trees arround the town tree <3 Maybe you should fill the empty sections with flowers or some other ideas? And I'm not a fan of the patterns at the bamboo area. Will add you to the list
❤ First impression was "Ah a SAO fan" - nice town name :3
❤The sakura paths are really sweet. Saw them in different towns now. Also the water pattern - I like it
❤The natural overall look. Many pine trees - I love them so much but most people are only using the normal ones <.<
❤Lots of flowers - I like the arrangement
❤Flowerarch fits perferctly with the two logs ^^
❤Brewesters with the bushes <3
❤The hotspring with the bamboo!
❤The waterfountain with the water arround
❤Dislike❤
❤ The spot with the tree stumps and all the mushroms. Somehow it looks croweded
❤The patterns you used at the bamboo
❤empty sections - like the one at retails
❤Improvment❤
❤ Your town is really beautiful. I love the bushes and pine trees arround the town tree <3 Maybe you should fill the empty sections with flowers or some other ideas? And I'm not a fan of the patterns at the bamboo area. Will add you to the list
Review for Oblivion ^-^
❤Like❤
❤ I like your town name. Where is it from? owo
❤So much green <3
❤The use of bamboo
❤natural look of your town
❤perfect apples I love them!
❤The entrance to the japanese looking home with the bushes and bamboo arround
❤The zen clock with the zen bank <3
❤The picknic area
❤the natural flow of your town - everything seems to fit perfectly together
❤Dislike❤
❤ Uhm really? There isn't anyting to dislike from what I see!
❤Improvment❤
❤ The only thing I can say is that it feels sometimes a little bit crowded - if you know what I mean?
I will put your dream on the list ^.^
❤ I like your town name. Where is it from? owo
❤So much green <3
❤The use of bamboo
❤natural look of your town
❤perfect apples I love them!
❤The entrance to the japanese looking home with the bushes and bamboo arround
❤The zen clock with the zen bank <3
❤The picknic area
❤the natural flow of your town - everything seems to fit perfectly together
❤Dislike❤
❤ Uhm really? There isn't anyting to dislike from what I see!
❤Improvment❤
❤ The only thing I can say is that it feels sometimes a little bit crowded - if you know what I mean?
I will put your dream on the list ^.^
Lucindaa here you go :3
❤Like❤
❤ The flowerfields (with the patterns arround)!
❤ The placement of the flowerclock is nice
❤ The log placement ^.^
❤ The area with the wistiria, waterfountain and bank
❤Dislike❤
❤ I don't like the different patterns around some pwps - it looks weird to me
❤ I would love a "main path" which leads to every important spot
❤ Your town feels really crowded with all the different typs of flowers with no arrangment oo
❤ not so much pwps?
❤Improvment❤
❤ I would arrange the flowers better, maybe groups of different flower typs? Like I said I would use other patterns. The main path is nice also the little narutal path - and add some mor pwps. If you already hit the 30 mark you should rearange it ^^
❤ The flowerfields (with the patterns arround)!
❤ The placement of the flowerclock is nice
❤ The log placement ^.^
❤ The area with the wistiria, waterfountain and bank
❤Dislike❤
❤ I don't like the different patterns around some pwps - it looks weird to me
❤ I would love a "main path" which leads to every important spot
❤ Your town feels really crowded with all the different typs of flowers with no arrangment oo
❤ not so much pwps?
❤Improvment❤
❤ I would arrange the flowers better, maybe groups of different flower typs? Like I said I would use other patterns. The main path is nice also the little narutal path - and add some mor pwps. If you already hit the 30 mark you should rearange it ^^
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mayorvanessa
Senior Member
Dream town address is in my signature! c:
Mokuren
Love through a prism
The review for Klauser ^.^
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Now in your town Nyensiu
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Review for Mickeydamouse ^.^
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Review for DJ :3
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Currently in Astoria :3
❤Like❤
❤ The path is really nice
❤ You have Wolfgang <3
❤ I like your town layout
❤ The bamboo in the top right
❤ The pink flowers in front of the retail!
❤Dislike❤
❤ Many flowers of different typs without a pattern - somehow it feels crowded.
❤ Not many pwps
❤ Not many bushes
❤ Different main paths?
❤Improvment❤
❤ You should group the pwps more and work with bushes. I would prefer one! mainpath and maybe another "side" path. Rearange the flowers - it looks so croweded. Maybe like in front of retail with the same color. Or for example a red flower and a violett one.
x y x y x y
y x y x y x
Like that ^.^ Your town fells unfinished. You need to put much work in it But you are on a good way <3
❤ The path is really nice
❤ You have Wolfgang <3
❤ I like your town layout
❤ The bamboo in the top right
❤ The pink flowers in front of the retail!
❤Dislike❤
❤ Many flowers of different typs without a pattern - somehow it feels crowded.
❤ Not many pwps
❤ Not many bushes
❤ Different main paths?
❤Improvment❤
❤ You should group the pwps more and work with bushes. I would prefer one! mainpath and maybe another "side" path. Rearange the flowers - it looks so croweded. Maybe like in front of retail with the same color. Or for example a red flower and a violett one.
x y x y x y
y x y x y x
Like that ^.^ Your town fells unfinished. You need to put much work in it
But you are on a good way <3Now in your town Nyensiu
❤Like❤
❤ In front of the town tree the bushes and the water around!
❤ The water pattern around Bewsters
❤ The way around Dianas and Tias house *.*
❤ The no running in front of the gate
❤ The trade area is a nice idea!
❤Dislike❤
❤ Not many pwps
❤ In some areas is a leak of flowers
❤ more trees maybe
❤ you need to add more bushes in my opinion ^^
❤Improvment❤
❤ You should work on the flower thing and the pwps at first. There isn't so much outstandig to see in your town. There should be a WOW effect. Maybe you visit some dream towns to get ideas? I think that would help pretty well
❤ In front of the town tree the bushes and the water around!
❤ The water pattern around Bewsters
❤ The way around Dianas and Tias house *.*
❤ The no running in front of the gate
❤ The trade area is a nice idea!
❤Dislike❤
❤ Not many pwps
❤ In some areas is a leak of flowers
❤ more trees maybe
❤ you need to add more bushes in my opinion ^^
❤Improvment❤
❤ You should work on the flower thing and the pwps at first. There isn't so much outstandig to see in your town. There should be a WOW effect. Maybe you visit some dream towns to get ideas? I think that would help pretty well
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Review for Mickeydamouse ^.^
❤Like❤
❤The area with the matel bank and the trees
❤There isn't much in your town ;__,
❤Dislike❤
❤ There are hardly any pwps?
❤No bushes
❤Flowers are all ofter the town with a lot of empty spaces
❤Only empty spaces
❤Improvment❤
❤ I can't really say much about your town because it looks like you just started your town oo I hardly see any pwps - I would use a path. Arrange your flowers maybe and build many pwps! You can sourround the pwps with bushes for example or the town hall? You really should work on it. There is not much to see if I'm honest but everyone started like that so you could build up something amazing. I hope you will work on it... if you need any help let me know it.
❤The area with the matel bank and the trees
❤There isn't much in your town ;__,
❤Dislike❤
❤ There are hardly any pwps?
❤No bushes
❤Flowers are all ofter the town with a lot of empty spaces
❤Only empty spaces
❤Improvment❤
❤ I can't really say much about your town because it looks like you just started your town oo I hardly see any pwps - I would use a path. Arrange your flowers maybe and build many pwps! You can sourround the pwps with bushes for example or the town hall? You really should work on it. There is not much to see if I'm honest but everyone started like that so you could build up something amazing. I hope you will work on it... if you need any help let me know it.
Review for DJ :3
❤Like❤
❤The rainbowpath <3 I really love it!
❤Many flowers
❤Nice pwps
❤The flowerclock placement
❤Dislike❤
❤ At some points your path is really confusing. It's to much sometimes owo
❤ Your pwps aren't grouped. It's important for a town to have a flow. It should look like a whole. Not there a pwp. On the other side one. You know what I mean?
❤The golden flowers are to much. You should arrange them better.
❤Improvment❤
❤ There is much work for you. You should overthink the path. Maybe a double path to all important buldings and a one row path to pwp areas for example? Also the flowers. There are to much oo You should work with bushes around the pwps or near the path? Think of something outstanding. Go and visit some dream towns that would help for sure ^-^ You will do it! A heart out of flowers is always sweet - or a zen area? You also can make a modern town... some sort of a concept maybe? Or do you want a cute town? then work with pink and sweet pink, white and purple flowers for example.
❤The rainbowpath <3 I really love it!
❤Many flowers
❤Nice pwps
❤The flowerclock placement
❤Dislike❤
❤ At some points your path is really confusing. It's to much sometimes owo
❤ Your pwps aren't grouped. It's important for a town to have a flow. It should look like a whole. Not there a pwp. On the other side one. You know what I mean?
❤The golden flowers are to much. You should arrange them better.
❤Improvment❤
❤ There is much work for you. You should overthink the path. Maybe a double path to all important buldings and a one row path to pwp areas for example? Also the flowers. There are to much oo You should work with bushes around the pwps or near the path? Think of something outstanding. Go and visit some dream towns that would help for sure ^-^ You will do it! A heart out of flowers is always sweet - or a zen area? You also can make a modern town... some sort of a concept maybe? Or do you want a cute town? then work with pink and sweet pink, white and purple flowers for example.
Currently in Astoria :3
❤Like❤
❤ The fountain in front of the townhall with the bushes ^.^
❤ The streetlamp and the metalbench
❤ Beau <3
❤ The streetlamps all over your town
❤Dislike❤
❤ I don't like your path owo I would prefer something more natural or colorful maybe?
❤ The update time. About 6 pm would be good
❤ Not many pwps
❤ Flower arrangment
❤ Tree placement
❤Improvment❤
❤ You should try to work on more pwps - not only build something also make it nice with bushes for example or a zen corner or something like that for example. Use your creative side ^.^ Maybe you should also arrange your flowers and trees better? I don't like it that much owo I'm sure you will make something good out of your town ^-^ - The way is the right one :3
❤ The fountain in front of the townhall with the bushes ^.^
❤ The streetlamp and the metalbench
❤ Beau <3
❤ The streetlamps all over your town
❤Dislike❤
❤ I don't like your path owo I would prefer something more natural or colorful maybe?
❤ The update time. About 6 pm would be good
❤ Not many pwps
❤ Flower arrangment
❤ Tree placement
❤Improvment❤
❤ You should try to work on more pwps - not only build something also make it nice with bushes for example or a zen corner or something like that for example. Use your creative side ^.^ Maybe you should also arrange your flowers and trees better? I don't like it that much owo I'm sure you will make something good out of your town ^-^ - The way is the right one :3
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mickeydamouse
Princess Twilight Sparkle
Thank you for your review
MetaTriforce
Pokémon Master
You can review my town! DC is in my signature 
Oblivion9312
Senior Member
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. I stole the name from one of my all-time favorite games, Tales of Symphonia. I was kind of thinking the crowded thing myself the other day. I'll go through it and see what I can do to try and fix that.
Thanks so much for the review!
ayeAmariah
Senior Member
My dream code is in my signature. It'd be great it you could review it, thanks!
Note: It's still a work in progress! Oh, and also I have lots of flower meadows because I've been trying to breed flowers... Hehe. Don't mind them.
Note: It's still a work in progress! Oh, and also I have lots of flower meadows because I've been trying to breed flowers... Hehe. Don't mind them.
lemonbiscuit
Hopelessly devoted to you
I'd be glad if you could visit my town, thank you
Mokuren
Love through a prism
Will review now all of your towns ^.^
Here you go Triforce <3
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Review for Sumrem :3
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Here you go Triforce <3
❤Like❤
❤ The cute presents around the tree. Love the princess outfit <3
❤The bamboo area with the hotspring
❤The photoboard with the bushes around
❤The two flowerfields <3
❤The playground is a good idea
❤Dislike❤
❤ The path. I don’t like it somehow owo But it’s a personal opinion of course
❤The playground is a little bit empty. It would look better if you group the pwps a little bit more together. (The sandbox and bench is to far away from the other ones )
❤too many trees
❤I can’t see a overall concept
❤The flowers – to many types of flowers and colors
❤The two fountains in front of the towntree – It don’t look good to me.
❤Improvment❤
❤ I would make a path at the town tree and would demolish both fountains. I think one in the middle would look much better with flowers around and a path around maybe? I would change the path design – not a fan of it ^^ Maybe you will work on a concept? A natural looking town? A fairy tale town or a japanese looking town? I would also change some flowers. They should fit the theme of your town. For example in a cute town white, pink and purple flowers. Maybe you will overthink a few things. You have some really good ideas – but the flow in your town is missing somehow.
❤ The cute presents around the tree. Love the princess outfit <3
❤The bamboo area with the hotspring
❤The photoboard with the bushes around
❤The two flowerfields <3
❤The playground is a good idea
❤Dislike❤
❤ The path. I don’t like it somehow owo But it’s a personal opinion of course
❤The playground is a little bit empty. It would look better if you group the pwps a little bit more together. (The sandbox and bench is to far away from the other ones )
❤too many trees
❤I can’t see a overall concept
❤The flowers – to many types of flowers and colors
❤The two fountains in front of the towntree – It don’t look good to me.
❤Improvment❤
❤ I would make a path at the town tree and would demolish both fountains. I think one in the middle would look much better with flowers around and a path around maybe? I would change the path design – not a fan of it ^^ Maybe you will work on a concept? A natural looking town? A fairy tale town or a japanese looking town? I would also change some flowers. They should fit the theme of your town. For example in a cute town white, pink and purple flowers. Maybe you will overthink a few things. You have some really good ideas – but the flow in your town is missing somehow.
Review for Sumrem :3
❤Like❤
❤ The fountain with the flowers around
❤ Chrissy! <3 You have some nice villagers
❤ The flowerclock placement
❤Dislike❤
❤ I don’t want to dislike something because your town is still in progress
❤Improvment❤
❤Your town looks new to me. You should work at first on a path. Chop down all trees and make a pretty path to every important spot in your town. After that you can look where are free areas to make some pwps – they should fit good together <3 You can work with bushes and trees. Add some sidepaths for example so people can discover your whole town :3
❤ The fountain with the flowers around
❤ Chrissy! <3 You have some nice villagers
❤ The flowerclock placement
❤Dislike❤
❤ I don’t want to dislike something because your town is still in progress
❤Improvment❤
❤Your town looks new to me. You should work at first on a path. Chop down all trees and make a pretty path to every important spot in your town. After that you can look where are free areas to make some pwps – they should fit good together <3 You can work with bushes and trees. Add some sidepaths for example so people can discover your whole town :3
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I'd love a review! DA is in my sig ^_^
I really wanted to upload my dream while the spring blossoms were still there, so it's still a WIP~ The area around Ankha's house is really new, she moved in recently and I had to change the entire area up, and the windmill area was only a day old, it's been improved since then :3
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Oh yeah, disregard the beach, as well xD I was giving away a ton of flowers and hadn't gotten rid of them all yet.
I really wanted to upload my dream while the spring blossoms were still there, so it's still a WIP~ The area around Ankha's house is really new, she moved in recently and I had to change the entire area up, and the windmill area was only a day old, it's been improved since then :3
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Oh yeah, disregard the beach, as well xD I was giving away a ton of flowers and hadn't gotten rid of them all yet.
Shiny Spritzee
☆Magical Girl☆
You're more than welcome to visit my town
The Dream Address in in my signature.
I did read and understand the rules. My apologies for not putting it in the post
The Dream Address in in my signature.
I did read and understand the rules. My apologies for not putting it in the post
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Mokuren
Love through a prism
Sooo here is your review Psicat
Will do the other ones as well - and PLEASE read the whole post otherwise I will not do the review >_< I don't know why nobody is able to read D: And then everyone is confused of my bad english xD
❤Like❤
❤ The path design! It looks like something from kingdom hearts!? Or am I wrong? xD
❤ The wisteria in front of the town hall looks so beautiful
❤ you did a good job with the reset center!
❤ the path to the golden house <3 I LOVE IT
❤ The town flag - so IT IS kingdom hearts haha ^-^
❤ the playground - heaven and hell (don't know how this game is called in english >.<)
❤Dislike❤
❤ the rotten tree near the picnic blanket o.o
❤ Your town is sooo nice - so the graveyard looks somehow wrong xD
❤ somehow I don't like the bamboo between the path - it looks so crowded
❤ Sometimes the colours of the flowers don't match well - like pink and blue, or the yellow, red and white roses.
❤Improvment❤
Your town is great! I really like it and it's well developed. So there isn't much to do anymore. Maybe work on the flowers. For me it's a pain that the flowers are not matching each other xD but it's my opionen. Also not a fan of the graveyard and maybe some pwps where the fruit tree crowed is? I don't know if you hit already the 30 pwp mark D:
I really really like your town! It's awesome <3 Thanks for the dream
❤ The path design! It looks like something from kingdom hearts!? Or am I wrong? xD
❤ The wisteria in front of the town hall looks so beautiful
❤ you did a good job with the reset center!
❤ the path to the golden house <3 I LOVE IT
❤ The town flag - so IT IS kingdom hearts haha ^-^
❤ the playground - heaven and hell (don't know how this game is called in english >.<)
❤Dislike❤
❤ the rotten tree near the picnic blanket o.o
❤ Your town is sooo nice - so the graveyard looks somehow wrong xD
❤ somehow I don't like the bamboo between the path - it looks so crowded
❤ Sometimes the colours of the flowers don't match well - like pink and blue, or the yellow, red and white roses.
❤Improvment❤
Your town is great! I really like it and it's well developed. So there isn't much to do anymore. Maybe work on the flowers. For me it's a pain that the flowers are not matching each other xD but it's my opionen. Also not a fan of the graveyard and maybe some pwps where the fruit tree crowed is? I don't know if you hit already the 30 pwp mark D:
I really really like your town! It's awesome <3 Thanks for the dream
Will do the other ones as well - and PLEASE read the whole post otherwise I will not do the review >_< I don't know why nobody is able to read D: And then everyone is confused of my bad english xD
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