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[Mokuren]

❤(・ω・) Mokus town review thread ❤(・ω・)



Hell everyone!

Currently many people are making town review threads and I will now join them ^-^


Some things first:
❤ I don't visit houses!
❤ I don't have internet on wednesday and thursday
❤ I will do a maximum of 10 dream towns a day
❤ you can ask me to review your town even it's closed! I will do it as soon as I have time
❤ No hard feels because I'm honest with you D:
❤ Please include somewhere you are aware of the rules or else I will not do a dream review
❤ My first language isn't english - so please be kind even if I make some mistakes
❤ I will follow the following pattern:

❤Like❤
❤Dislike❤
❤Improvment❤


❤Favorit dream towns❤

effluo -5900-2353-7063
gingypie -4000-3287-9435
lexy_ - 4800-2253-7299
Minties - 7900-3085-9417
Noah - 4400 -2728 -5950
Lunatic - 4400 - 2178 - 0979
Oblivion - 4400-2565-9616
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[dreamysnowx]

My town is incomplete but hope you can visit it!~
It's a huge mess right now and it will be fixed up after I get Marshal to move in :3
dream address in my siggy!~ hehe thank you <3 ~

 

[Mokuren]

Thanks for asking <3

Here is the review of your town ^.^

❤Like❤

❤The fountain in front of the town hall is really cute <3 I love that
❤The screen is really nice placed with the patterns arround ^.^
❤A lot of roses <3 I love! roses
❤Amazing villagers for example Zucker, Fang, Francine and Chrissy! Coco is creepy as hell ;___;


❤Dislike❤

❤ The first thing I saw - no patterns. You wake up at the towntree and there was nothing ;__; This area is really important - it's the first impression (is this the right word?) - but like you said it's in progress.
❤ The patterns, somehow I don't like the pokemon path and the with-red is also nothing for me. Maybe it will look better when everything is finished <3
❤There is sooo much stuff on the floor. But I can't say anything against it - My beach is also a mess
❤ No trees and bushes, You really have not many "green" in your town ;__;

❤Improvment❤

❤ You should work on the path at first I think - and if I was you I would make flowers of the same type. For example only roses <3 It's a personal opinion of course! I'm not sure what "theme" you want to creat in your town - for example cute or zen? You should also place the pwps better - in groups or so? I like that pretty much. I did that in my town too. At first the main path, then the little paths and afterwards the pwps, bushes, trees and flowers ^---^

The town is still in progress - so I would love to see your town all finished <3

 

[Lassy]

Oh please visit mine <3

- - - Post Merge - - -

My code is 6700-2364-3876 :3

 

[Mokuren]

Here is your review Lessy <3

❤Like❤

❤The amazing ice path I really LOVE it! It looks so pretty with the snow <3
❤The fountain in front of the town hall <3
❤The fairy tale clock looks sooo cute
❤Triforce tree stumps - cute ^-^
❤The bench with the pink and white roses
❤The blue bench is amazing in winter - and your paths are perfect for it!


❤Dislike❤

❤ The place of the illuminated arches because of the pattern - it looks not so good with a double path ^^
❤At some points the paths are looking so confusing oo I think you should fix that
❤You need some more pwps and maybe you match them together in groups? Or for example a zen area or something like that. I think that would look really good.
❤So much empty areas ;___; You should use more bushes and flowers.
❤Flower patterns - I don't think that fits the winter theme ^.^

❤Improvment❤

❤You should work on the path at first - it looks really confusing at some points. Also you should use flowers of the same color or art. I think blue! flowers are amazing for your winter town. It would look so awesome <3 There are not many pwps you should really make some more and in better places. So you see it and think WOW amazing! You should also add some bushes in your town to make for example areas with pwps.

Overall I like your town - but there is much space for improvment <3

 

[justina]

I'd love to have my town reviewed. I'd love to know what you think of my house too.
Dream code in sig

 

[Mokuren]

Sure. I will take now a look at your town Justina ^.^

❤Like❤

❤The flower arch is really sweet <3
❤The flowers arround Galas house!
❤You have Marshal! I have him too - a cutie
❤The disney window thing in your rococo room is awesome. I love that!
❤The brown themed room looks really nice.
❤The first floor is like a coffe. That's a nice idea and the furniture matches pretty well.


❤Dislike❤

❤No paths. There are really no paths at all ;___; You should add some
❤Your town looks simply empty - there are no bushes, paths or something that I can count as a way.
❤The pwps are "somewhere"
❤Some more unique rooms - there are sooo many coffe's out there - I mean in houses. I love to see really outstandig ideas. For example a labor or a gaming show? I don't know ^.^ Have a hard time with my own house right now ;__;

❤Improvment❤

❤I can't dislike much about your town because it's still in progress as I see. My advance for you is to put some paths down at first - that havn't to be patterns but maybe a way with bushes, flowers or something like that? Then you can place the pwps better so anybody who visits your town will see it <3 Arrange your flowers maybe? owo If you need any help let me know it <3

Thanks for sharing your dreamcode with me ^.^ You are on a good way <3

 

[Gummysaur]

Review mine please? ^.^

edit: the houses are ugly. The really big one is mine and I'm doing a theme challenge, the smaller one is my sister's and she hasn't played in months, sooo. xD

 

[Mokuren]

Sure ^.^ At first I read Gummisauer and was like yay I can make a review in german... It sounds like something sweet in my language ^^
No worrys I don't review houses. It takes to much time ^.^ And I'm more interesed in the landscaping <3

So but here is your review:

❤Like❤

❤I simply LOVE the water arround your path. It looks just so amazing - a really good idea!
❤The flower patterns are also nice
❤The paths are leading to every important spot. Houses, retail, town hall, brewster and gate <3
❤The character of your sister looks cute (I think Julia is your sister? x3)
❤The white bank looks really cute with the flowers <3

❤Dislike❤

❤You need more pwps - there arn't so much sadly ;__;
❤ Add more flowers, bushes and maybe trees? I like "green" ^.^
❤I like colorful paths but I think you will make a modern theme? If yes it fits pretty well.
❤The area with only paths - you know what I mean? If you will add in good spots pwps it will look like a plaza or something like that - this would be amazing!
❤The flower arch looks sweet but somehow it don't fit with the darker colours arround ,__,

❤Improvment❤

❤ You should add more flowers bushes and trees. You should work at the plaza thing - it would be really nice if you work something good out there. If you are finish with it I really would love to visit your town again! The idea of a mondern town is pretty good - there are to many cute towns out there. It's difficult for me to give advices since my head is full with sweet stuff and ideas ^.^ Not much of a help. sorry ;__;

 

[effluo]

You can check mine if you like. ^^
Code is in my signature.

 

[Mokuren]

Effluo your signature is sooooo sweet I'm in love with it ;___;

❤Like❤

❤ First impression sfsdfa as awesome as your sig!
❤The patterns are really nice and the water <3 Your gate looks awesome with that ❤
❤The stars arround the pwps are really sweet I like that
❤Gosh! The bushes and then the flowers inside. It looks awesome
❤The area with the wisteria looks so cute and perfect!


❤Dislike❤

❤ I don't see much to dislike D: Really LOVE your town!

❤Improvment❤

❤Make whatever you want and it will turn out perfectly <3 Thanks for the great dream ^.^ You are now on the list in the first post <3

 

[PurplPanda]

Please rate mine! My dream code is 4400-3468-2912

 

[Mokuren]

Sure Panda ^-^

❤Like❤

❤ The path really fits your town somehow owo
❤ The cube sculpture <3 I like this pwp so much but hardly see it in any dream town
❤ Many trees and some bushes that's nice ^.^
❤ Bamboo! I love bamboo. Do you want to make a japanese town?


❤Dislike❤

❤ You hardly have any pwps - there are so many empty areas
❤ Maybe you should arrange your flowers? I would love that ^.^
❤ The path looks somehow weird when there are three in a row. Do you know what I mean?
❤ The pokeballs. I don't like that maybe because I have in my head the japanese theme xD
❤ I can't say that much because there isn't much to review ;__;

❤Improvment❤

❤You should really use more pwps and arrange the flowers. I think it would really help - your town is clearly in progress but if you work on your town I'm sure it will turn out well and really pretty ^-^ If you need any help let me know it :3

 

[lexy_]

my code is in sig
tanks for visiting my town and for the review

 

[PurplPanda]

Sure Panda ^-^

❤Like❤

❤ The path really fits your town somehow owo
❤ The cube sculpture <3 I like this pwp so much but hardly see it in any dream town
❤ Many trees and some bushes that's nice ^.^
❤ Bamboo! I love bamboo. Do you want to make a japanese town?


❤Dislike❤

❤ You hardly have any pwps - there are so many empty areas
❤ Maybe you should arrange your flowers? I would love that ^.^
❤ The path looks somehow weird when there are three in a row. Do you know what I mean?
❤ The pokeballs. I don't like that maybe because I have in my head the japanese theme xD
❤ I can't say that much because there isn't much to review ;__;

❤Improvment❤

❤You should really use more pwps and arrange the flowers. I think it would really help - your town is clearly in progress but if you work on your town I'm sure it will turn out well and really pretty ^-^ If you need any help let me know it :3

But pokemon is Japanese...
Edit: Btw I went to your town and it is AWESOME!!!

 

[gingypie]

Hi please check my town out.. DA is in my signature spoiler~ Thanks!

 

[DarkRose407]

My code is in my siggy! Thanks for the review

 

[Mokuren]

Haha you are right panda! Of course a Anime ^---^ and thanks for visiting <3


Will review all the towns now ^-^

 

[Carina]

Please visit mine I would love to hear what you think about it. My dream address is in my signature

 

[Mokuren]

At first lexy <3

❤Like❤

❤ Gosh the paths with the sakura leaves is soooo pretty. It fits perfectly in your town! I love april ^?^
❤ The tulpis are so pretty owo I'm in love with them! Overthink my rose obsession xD
❤ The iluminated heart is really sweet
❤ The little park!
❤ The placement of the bushes is just perfect
❤ The little desert corner with the sphinx <3


❤Dislike❤

❤ The corner with the wood patterns. I don't like the patterns somehow ;__; - Did I see your town before? oo Pretty sure I do after I saw this wood patterns oo


❤Improvment❤

❤ There is not much to improve your town is just amazing. I really love it! I will put it on the list in the first post <3