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Yoo, how's it going man? I was just stalking your profile(sorry about that lmao) and came across this: http://i.imgur.com/7xVnE49.png

I found this really unique ;u;it's so nice! Maybe you need to put more light on the focus here and make them much easier to notice. Right now my eyes dart towards the whole thing, but they should dart towards the girls' faces first. And yes, um mess around with effects and C4Ds.

Ah but it still is a lovely piece <3 I love it! how's it going?

Fun but very exhausting, honestly. xD I'm ready to go home and it's only been five days! Vacations are hard work xux

Ahhh > _ < Yeah it's always best to do everything on different layers that way you can go back and make changes xD

Sorry for chatting in the thread.
I'm OK, just tired from a whole bunch of driving around; I'm on a cross-country vacation at the moment. ;u;

pretty good! just a bit bogged with studying x_x
though I'm really glad haikyuu season 2 started!! watching that rn, along with hunter x hunter
wbu?

I don't think anything else should be added at this point, you did a great job with it :-]

Wait o: Can't you just erase the blur effect you did on it instead of sharpen? o:

You are very welcome!! I'm looking forward to seeing the results!

effects are quite nice! really like the yellow color scheme :-]
at this point seemingly all that's left to do is finalize the colors and add some text, possibly (right in the center, in front of chie)

Ohhh I really like it! Great job! c: I love the vectors you used and how it pops out! Only thing that bothers me is that there are too many blurred out places that really doesn't need to be blurred xD Like on the render's hair {Girl on the right, I forgot her name ahahah and the arrows next to her doesn't need to be rendered as well)

I'll probably be eating dinner in a few mins, but shoot

good luck; the more you get used to it, the less strenuous it is and the less you end up putting it off

what I usually do to get rid of stray pixels is zoom in use the eraser tool to erase everything by hand. it takes a bit of work, but it's worth it

first, I'd tell you to get rid of the white lines surrounding Rise and Yukiko. those can be pretty distracting for the viewer and maker, to say the least
the background is great, though if possible I'd lessen the blur on the left beam. looks WAY too blurry compared to the right beam, especially since the left beam should be sharper.

as for effects, I'd suggest a vector-style, "fun" type of sig, and considering how whimsical and weird P4 is. stuff like splatter, C4Ds with a solid color overlay, illustrator shapes, and bold lines in general would work out.

explosions to create light, huh? I'd recommend brushing with color and then setting that layer to screen/soft light to help achieve that effect. also, a fractal or light texture that works better would be nice :-]

as for using duo renders, I think it's best to edit them so that they're closer together, so that you don't have any awkward space between them. OR, alternatively, edit them so that they're farther apart, to allow room for text or something
good luck with it!!

oh boy, that is definitely too dark and highly contrasted - this is especially evident in the spaces between Togami and Naegi where the red is so intense and rough. I would honestly scrap that coloring style, because even if you are trying to go with a "dark and/or mysterious" feel, working with something that insane isn't worth it, I'd say.

also, togami looks weird af smudged in the corner like that. maybe see how the piece looks without him? I'm not feeling that placement at all
(and I swear I'm not saying this because I hate Togami and his pompous ass)

haha, this is why I would suggest saving a copy of the original, unedited image just in case stuff like this happens

Oh whoops ignore the last VM I sent you then

never mind haha

Actually I found a better one if this is fine:
http://orig12.deviantart.net/b929/f/2014/365/8/b/render_78___1_1_2015___sakura_miku_14_by_mizumikid-d8c3j0z.png