I feel like this doesn't work very well as a synopsis. This would probably work better as the prologue or something. I don't know anything about the story from reading this. All I know is that the narrator sounds incredibly depressed and I would feel like this is just gonna be a book about someone and how much they hate their life.
I feel like this doesn't work very well as a synopsis. This would probably work better as the prologue or something. I don't know anything about the story from reading this. All I know is that the narrator sounds incredibly depressed and I would feel like this is just gonna be a book about someone and how much they hate their life.