Giveaway Writing Competition for Unoriginal Stitches!

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Okay, folks, take out your thinking caps and quills because it's time to write creatively! :D You can write just about anything. Whoever's writing is the most interesting based on my judgement they will win the grand prize of the Unoriginal Stitches!

Rules!
-You must be literate! If you're writing like a three year old then you will not have a chance in this competition.
-You must write at least five paragraphs.
-Don't steal quotes from someone else's writing. You have to be creative and make up something on your own.
-Have fun!


[Competition ends on January 1 at 10:00 PM mountain time!]
 
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Would I be able to enter the first chapter of my nanowrimo from last year? (Nanowrimo is a contest to write a 50,000 word novel you write in a month)
 
I tried my best, when it comes to stories I'm kind of a try hard ;~; Really embarrassed of my story I recommend only op reads ;;
The room gave off a murky feel and looked shadowy as she struggled to open her eyes fully. Only she could hear the cries for help in her head. She desperately tried opening her mouth but when she did nothing came out. The shadows in front of her only came closer to her as she felt her heart racing which each step they took. Finally she took a breath and her eyes felt as if they had swung open. She looked around her room, no one was there. Her door was closed, just like she left it. It was just a dream.

It was cold outside and the sky turned to a bittersweet orange colour. She looked out the window dreading nightfall. Heavy steps could be heard at the end of the hallway. Each step had a 10 second delay due to her walking so unhurriedly. She finally reached her bedroom door and slowly opened it. It was if as if the only visible thing in the room was her bed. The bed of horrors. She slipped into bed, laying on her side, sheets over her head and her eyes shut firmly. She fell asleep.

From the station she walked outside and a bunch of animals shouted and cheered, greeting her. "Welcome to Acute!" one with bells in her golden yellow hair shouted. She didn't know what was going on, but it felt right, so she went with it. She was taken to the office where the small dog named Isabelle showed her how to get a 100 percent approval rating. She talked to all the villagers and had so much fun.

The town was sunny, and everything was just perfect. She shook a tree and apples fell down, one was golden and tasted so perfect. She even questioned if she should be eating it, what if this was the garden of eve? But that was such a silly thought. Laughing to herself she shook another tree and something else fell out. Bees came rushing out, chasing her and she ran as fast as she could. She fell onto the cold snowy floor with a loud thud and quickly got up but only to be stung and left with a swollen eye.

She walked around slightly gloomy. She didn't want the whole day to be ruined, everything would be just fine she thought to herself. She walked up to one of her neighbours, Hazel , a short squirrel with a uni-brow who was shocked to see her with such facial features. "Hey why don't we head over to my place right now?" Hazel offered, and the girl nodded. They walked over to Hazel's house and once inside tea was set on the table. Hazel then placed some medicine on the table and smiled warmly waiting for her to take it.

The girl took it and slowly her swelling went away, this couldn't be real, things shouldn't heal this fast she thought. She smiled and took a sip of her tea. "Thanks." She said and Hazel looked back at her, "Anything for a friend!". Hazel smiled and looked right at the new mayor. "It's perfect here right?" She laughed and right after she said that the tea spoon was dropped onto the floor in such a dramatic way. The girl tried to nod her head in agreement but she, couldn't move.

Hazel watched as the mayor struggle to move. She didn't say anything, just watched and smiled like the perfect, neighbour she was. All while the girl was twitching and it was visible she needed help. In the girl's mind it was something familiar, the room was more gloomy, and behind Hazel were shadows. They looked threatening. She desperately tried to scream but she couldn't. She closed her eyes and opened them quickly. She was in her room, nothing touched or harmed, just as she had left it.
It was just a dream.
 
Lol here goes the beans:

It was a normal, frosted day of December. All was pretty much dead silent because of it being an early bird hour of 3 am. The only person awake in the town of Awkward. Mayor Who dis walked around all tired after digging up tons a gyro ids from the rain that gloss full day before. Then... out of the wasteland came a shadow of... Stitches.

He said he was moving. How depressed was mayor Who dis, as sadness washed over. "I want to try new foods... and see new places. I will miss everyone... at least. I hope everyone will miss too. I'm leaving the 5th of next month. It was nice knowing you."

The mayor said yes... But regretted it dearly. He was too busy to talk again and soon Stitches faded off into 2015 like sand in the air of a windy summer day at the beach.

Stitches had arrived in his new town after mailing his photo to the fretted mayor. He weeded uncontrollably... As did mayor Who dis.
But Stitches soon found many new friends and a new mayor friend. He promised himself to never leave this fair town ever again.

As for Who dis, he promised himself to never let a beloved friend move ever again and to never break his not their hearts ever. 5 hen he received the letter, and smiled.

(How was it? I came up with a guy mayor and random mayor and town names because dont know ur mayor.)
 
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Lol here goes the beans:

It was a normal, frosted day of December. All was pretty much dead silent because of it being an early bird hour of 3 am. The only person awake in the town of Awkward. Mayor Who dis walked around all tired after digging up tons a gyro ids from the rain that gloss full day before. Then... out of the wasteland came a shadow of... Stitches. He said he was moving. How depressed was mayor Who dis, as sadness washed over. "I want to try new foods... and see new places. I will miss everyone... at least. I hope everyone will miss too. I'm leaving the 5th of next month. It was nice knowing you." The my or said yes... But regretted it dearly. He was too busy to talk again and soon Stitches faded off into 2015 like sand in the air of a windy summer day at the beach.

Stitches had arrived in his new town after mailing his photo to the fretted mayor. He weeded uncontrollably... As did mayor Who dis.
But Stitches soon found many new friends and a new mayor friend. He promised himself to never leave this fair town ever again. As for Who dis, he promised himself to never let a beloved friend move ever again and to never break his not their hearts ever. 5 hen he received the letter, and smiled.

(How was it? I came up with a guy mayor and random mayor and town names because dont know ur mayor.)

Sorry, it needs to be at least five paragraphs long for it to count.
 
Just a bit of silliness.


Rain. Rain, rain, rain. For the last week there had been nothing but rain. Detective Bogey sat at his desk starting at the cold, grey, and so very wet day. He'd had enough of rain. Oh, it made the frogs happy. No doubt they'd be out playing in it but he'd grown tired of smelling wet dog whenever Ms. Skye brought him his coffee.

No, if he were honest with himself it wasn't the rain that bothered him, nor the wet dog smell though surely no one could enjoy that. It was that nothing interesting ever happened in Catmandu. He hadn't had a case in, well, forever. He'd never actually had a case. He wasn't even sure what made him decide to be a detective in this tiny burg to begin with.

He put his feet on his desk and leaned back in his chair, intent on taking a nap until quitting time when he heard the door open.

"Mr. Bogey, there is someone here to see you."

Bogey swung his legs down from his desk and sat up, looking questioningly at Skye.

"A case?" he mouthed, embarrassed to ask out loud. She smiled and nodded, then stepped back to allow someone into the room.

At first Bogey couldn't see anyone. Then, sitting a little straighter he realized that whoever it was was very short. He could just make out the orange curved ears that told him Chadder was making his way to the chair in front of his desk. He sipped his coffee as the tiny cheese colored mouse hopped onto the chair and introduced himself.

"I know who you are," said Bogey impatiently, "We've lived next to each other for a year now. What can I do for you, Chadder?"

"Bogey, i have a problem. You see there is this fruit that I've recently become infatuated with. I believe it's called a pear. It doesn't seem to grow here in Catmandu but I'd really like to try it. Do you think you could find one for me?"

Bogey stared at the little mouse, uncertain how to respond. He wanted him to find him a pear? A pear? Was he a detective or a grocer? What was this crazy mouse thinking?

Chadder seemed uncomfortable in the silence and and fumbled for his pocket. "I can make it worth your while," from his pocket he withdrew a large elegant bed that could never have actually fit in the small bit of cloth. "I can give you this Rococo bed."

Bogey stared at the impossibly large item the mouse removed from his pocket, then back out the window to the rain. He thought for a moment and then turned back to the mouse. A case is a case, he told himself.

"Alright, Chadder, I'll find you that pear."

To be continued?
 
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Here's a scene from one of my current novel projects. ^-^ Hope it's alright. I ♥ Stitches.

Tremor wanted to run; to hide. The night felt like it was trying to swallow her as the silhouettes of trees became claws that stretched out to capture, their nails sharp enough to mutilate - or worse. Everything in her peripheral vision became monstrous, and only when she turned to look directly at the offending shadow or wind-rustled leaf did it stop trying to sneak up on them, but Tremor could not look everywhere at once.

?Are you alright??

The whispered question jolted her, surprise dumping ice into her veins and raising bumps on the otherwise smooth surface of her skin. Inhaling, she let her guard down long enough to look at Imagine, and bobbed her head in response. He was depending on her to guide him through this. After all, he had never known life outside of The Asylum?s bleached walls, while she had been raised in The City before her unwilling tenancy had begun. She wanted to reach out and take his hand, to feel for certain she wasn?t alone in the dark forest, but feared her sweaty, shaking palms would give her away. In spite of years of experimentation and medication, her night terrors had never faded, but suffering in silence while locked away inside of a colorless cube at night was not the same as experiencing it out in the open. The nighttime world filled the air with unknown sounds that pumped even the steadiest heart more quickly through the veins, and brought air more readily into and out from the lungs. Tremor had to be strong; she could not let Imagine see that she was afraid.

He walked just ahead of her, looking at everything with his blue eyes wide and his mouth slightly open. The groan of labored tree limbs - something could be waiting up there for them - did not faze him, the hoot of a nighttime bird - it could be trying to warn them - did not make him hold his breath, and the crunch then snap of fallen foliage - Tremor gasped, spinning and crouching as she stared into the darkness.

A moment passed while she peered into the trees, trying to see beyond them - silence. Nothing leapt from the shadows to claim them, and, unable to hear much over the throbbing bu-bump-bu-bump of her own heart, Tremor slowly straightened up, hoping that Imagine would assume her continued shivering was a result of the night air. She could feel his eyes on her, but was unable to meet them, afraid of what she might find. Would she find the same disappointment her mother had always worn upon entering Tremor?s room after yet another nightmare had sprung to life therein? Would he mock her for her fears the way other patients had, or simply tell her that she was imagining things in the condescending way of the doctors? Unlike them, Tremor had long since known the difference between when other people used their imaginations, and what happened when she used her own. If she could turn it off? but she knew she could not.

She curled in on herself, picturing Imagine responding to her like all the others. If he did, she would leave. No, she would - she would - if - maybe she should just? Her protesting jaw and the sharp pain in the palms of her hands gave Tremor something else to focus on until she could breath again, and, unclenching her jaw and both fists, she filled her lungs with air, slowly letting it out again before turning, resigned to what she might find in the depths of those water-blue eyes.
 
Change of plans. Contest ends at 10:00 PM mountain time since other things have been coming up. Happy writing!
 
Contest ends in 7 minutes!

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Contest has ended. I will no longer take in more stories.

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Thank you guys for participating! There are two stories that I especially liked and it's hard to choose the winner.

I really liked Wander's and CrazyCat42's stories. They were very well written and I just want to say great job guys.

But the winner will have to go to Wander. Congratulations! I'll send you a private message when my gates are open so you can pick up Stitches. He's in boxes now. :3
 
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