When Two Worlds Collide.

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I just thought of something. In pokemon, one of the buildings you can go to has the creators in the game in it. Like the story artist(s) designer, creator, co-owner, etc in little characters just in an office building. Have them say certain things. Like I would say "Bob is a Fish" (Mi catchphrase) and you would have to bring me a fish to get something really nice.
 
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I just thought of something. In pokemon, one of the buildings you can go to has the creators in the game in it. Like the story artist(s) designer, creator, co-owner, etc in little characters just in an office building. Have them say certain things. Like I would say "Bob is a Fish" (Mi catchphrase) and you would have to bring me a fish to get something really nice.
I like it :)
 
Hey JJ, I haven't talked to you in a while. Are there any updates on the story since we talked last?
 
Well we 3 new staff who are:
sermantopp - Monster Designer
rroqer - Music Mixer
AndyB - StoryLiner and Music Mixer.

I have a bit of infomation on my 2nd demo.

I hope it doesn't sound cliche.

So After the boss, Bronen and Cidra are trying to get past a Ifrit, They will have to destroy it to get through. They will have to swim to the other side (Swimming Tutorial) and make their way through the Ice Volcano. They see a town with a Castle near by, So they want to check the castle. Inside the castle you will learn how to do diffrent skills. So Anyways They meet the King and the King asks them to do a small quest for themHis son (the prince) has ran away so They must go and find him. ect..

So is that good so far? If not please comment.

But where should the King hide? I am stuck with two:

1) Forest/Woods
OR
2) Underwater, You have to fish him up or.. Go underwater and search for him.
 
Hmm, maybe if he thinks he is unloved by his father.

The good old story: Father wants his son to grow up strong, so he's harsh on him. Prince is a dopy, weak boy, and feels pressurised by his father. He therefore runs away.

Works every time XD, what d'ya think?
 
Hmm, we could change it.

His father is horrible, he beat's his son. He therefore runs away. The father makes out to you that he wants his son back, and that the son is very bad and never does as he's told. You go after him, find out that the father is actually horrible, and you then have to fight the father?

Complete turn around-and not expected :P
 
And the prince can find a girl when he's out on his own. As you advance through the game, the prince (now the king) could send updates about him and the girl. He could possibly send items, too.

Maybe?
 
What's the result of the fight with the king? Does he die, or does he change his ways.

Later, you could attend the prince's wedding, but it's actually a trap placed by the (presumed dead) evil king to get revenge.
 
So when you find the prince he found a girl? Nice.
Also when he fights The King he promises he will change his ways.
Also good idea about the wedding. I like it :]
 
Josh I suggest you keep one main plot, and make small changes from there. Because the whole time I've been here I've seen like 4 different titles and different stories per each.
 
Yeah, Sorry Guys. I'm just thinking of ways to get the story into depth. Maybe you can help me think of plotholes?
 
Alright Sure, I have to go in 5 minutes.
Either PM me for post on here if you have ideas.

Thanks and Bye.
 
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