What do you think about my town?

[tybalt_cake]

So,i want to do something diferent to the town,that makes the town looks better,but i dont have any inspiration or ideas,so,please,i want your opinions about my town and what ideas do you have?

Dream code:4400-5442-6703

Thanks!

 

[failedexperiment]

i like it

 

[tybalt_cake]

bump

 

[tumut]

It could use less Mtn Dewritos, and "Δ Loominati confirmed Δ".

Anyway 6.8/10 , 3dank5me.

 

[tybalt_cake]

bump...

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Town:
Likes:
-nice path
-flower combos
Dislikes:
-path changes for no reason; blue bricks to stone
-no path flower clock, bench, and wind turbine; off by themselves; no synergy with each other or in that area
-large areas of nothing except flowers or path

Player Homes:
Jetix's House: no real coherence
Mew's House: getting better, but still hodgepodgy
Ai's House: hardly anything

Suggestions:
-more trees
-move the three in the top right to a more visible location
-more PWPs
bell, wisteria trellis, police station, street lamp, cube sculpture, bus stop, illuminated tree, illuminated arch, flower arc, jungle gym, instrument shelter, picnic blanket, hammock, fire pit, torch, hot spring, geyser, statue fountain

Final Thoughts: very raw. it's still only a very basic town. nothing terrible, but nothing really special or unique about it either. time will tell if you can make it amazing.

Rating: 2/5

 

[tybalt_cake]

Thank you Yakari Yakumo for the review!

 

[tybalt_cake]

bump :3

 

[CreakySilver]

It was alright, it seems like it's just starting out, so no worries.

Just a suggestion, but I think the paths would look good changed up a bit. Like Yukari, you should get rid of the randomly alternating paths, and as for the design itself I think it would look great made to look a bit more techy-looking, as that seems to be the theme of most of the buildings in the town. Maybe a light gray, metal-looking background with little light panels that shine blue? Just a suggestion.

And definitely, put more public works projects in. And big ones too. I'm not sure if you've gotten suggestions for any of the cool ones yet, but once you do, definitely start working on them.

 

[tybalt_cake]

Thanks for the review CreakySilver c:

 

[tybalt_cake]

bump :3

 

[tybalt_cake]

bump...

 

[tybalt_cake]

bump

 

[dudeabides]

I'll come check it out if you add me.

 

[tybalt_cake]

sorry if meh question is dumb but with add do you mean 3ds code or bell tree (again sorry for teh dumb question)

 

[dudeabides]

Yes the 3ds code under the avy then I could visit and see how cool it is since I put yours in.

 

[tybalt_cake]

ok! i will add you
however can we do it tomorrow at 5pm? (bell tree time)
or if u want we can do it now

 

[dudeabides]

Ok if that's better will try to remember! Just saw Link pop up on my friend's list thanks btw.

 

[tybalt_cake]

ur welcome