Visit my dream address!!☆☼ ☀ ☁

[feminist]

Please visit my dream address and tell me what you think!
OK so a few things first:

1. My town is NEW (as of earlier this month) so it's a huge WIP. There is nothing done yet. (except for maybe the area around the plaza)
2. be BRUTAL with your commentary. I want real feedback, not sugarcoated compliments.
3. the beetle patterns all over the ground mark where I'm planning on putting plants in the future, so excuse those for now
4. ok, the dream address is: 4700-5714-8258

 

[TheGreatBrain]

I will check it out tomorrow after work. Feel free to send me a reminder, in case I forget.

 

[feminist]

:^)

 

[lambenthyme]

after landscaping my own town for a long time and visiting a bunch of wonderful dream addresses, i really think you have a fantastic map and GREAT placements for your town plaza and retail! *q* i guess it's a little difficult to comment on a huge wip but i can see so much potential with paths and since there's so much space in the upper part of your town, having specifically themed areas supported by pwp's seems like it's gonna look hella nice and easily done (unlike mine cries) also, the two ponds on the top right corner could make an interesting little spot if you lead the path in and around its direction with some sort of decoration. but as of now, i can only recommend less aligned, more spontaneous trees near the plaza (imo!!) and deciding on a theme/colors to strengthen the general image of your town. (if you haven't already) this is all just based on my own preferences, but overall, i'm obsessed with your town and excited to see it how it'll turn out!!

 

[feminist]

after landscaping my own town for a long time and visiting a bunch of wonderful dream addresses, i really think you have a fantastic map and GREAT placements for your town plaza and retail! *q* i guess it's a little difficult to comment on a huge wip but i can see so much potential with paths and since there's so much space in the upper part of your town, having specifically themed areas supported by pwp's seems like it's gonna look hella nice and easily done (unlike mine cries) also, the two ponds on the top right corner could make an interesting little spot if you lead the path in and around its direction with some sort of decoration. but as of now, i can only recommend less aligned, more spontaneous trees near the plaza (imo!!) and deciding on a theme/colors to strengthen the general image of your town. (if you haven't already) this is all just based on my own preferences, but overall, i'm obsessed with your town and excited to see it how it'll turn out!!

oh wow thanks for the critiques! I really appreciate it!

 

[Chipped-Teacup]

Okay, so I like the whole nature theme you have going on . The area around the plaza is gorgeous! The inside of your house is really cute too, I like how you have mixed and matched sets to create certain atmospheres! I agree with Iambenthyme that a direction would be useful, which you don't necessarily have to do with paths . You could use cobblestones or clovers or dirt paths . Plus you have random red cosmos in a few places, which don't really fit with the rest of the coloured flowers in my opinion. I see the potential though definitely, do tell me when you're done with it or if you want another look

 

[feminist]

Okay, so I like the whole nature theme you have going on . The area around the plaza is gorgeous! The inside of your house is really cute too, I like how you have mixed and matched sets to create certain atmospheres! I agree with Iambenthyme that a direction would be useful, which you don't necessarily have to do with paths . You could use cobblestones or clovers or dirt paths . Plus you have random red cosmos in a few places, which don't really fit with the rest of the coloured flowers in my opinion. I see the potential though definitely, do tell me when you're done with it or if you want another look

I'm glad that you gave a second opinion on the flowers, because I was originally mixing in red ones, but I wasn't sure if I should stick to all white flowers or not
thanks for the feedback! thanks for visiting

 

[TheGreatBrain]

First off, cute town name.

Claire is such a cute character. I love how you dressed her.I also really like the main room in her house.It's not too cluttered. The kids room on the right is cute.

As for the town, I like how natural it looks.So far so good.

 

[Kaede]

I just took a quick look around, but I'd recommend starting off with laying down some paths to main areas, and don't be afraid about chopping trees down too.
I say this because it just looks like with the amount of trees spaced out where they are, that a majority of them were there from when you first started up.
So go look for a gold axe if you don't have one yet, and shape the town to your liking!
There's so many ways your town can transform over the years you will be playing, so never stop looking for ways to improve each area.
take a look at my DA if you want some ideas.
you should also start gathering flowers from the island tours and bring them home with you.
there's a lot of room for them in your town still, and plenty of hybrids to unlock yet.
Here's a link to one of my older posts that kind of describes my town building process:
http://www.belltreeforums.com/showt...-Landscaping&p=5233812&highlight=#post5233812

good luck to you, and feel free to PM me if you need anything!

 

[Jeff THE Best]

I think I'll go and visit it, later...

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

I will most likely visit later today. cx

 

[Jeff THE Best]

I just visited your dream address and found the plaza awesome. I liked how it was kind of like forest themed It makes it feel like the town is full.

 

[feminist]

:^O thanks to everyone for the feedback! I really appreciate it
also, as a note, I'm planning on having dirt paths, not pattern paths, for simplicity's sake (and bc I want it to be natural looking).

I will also probably be updating the dream address later on this afternoon bc there are minor plant changes + a lot more laid out landscaping (with the beetle pattern)

 

[feminist]

:^)

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

Visiting your dream now, sorry I didn't get a chance to earlier! ^_^

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So I visited and I think your town is super cute so far! ^_^ I love all of the trees and nature by the plaza! Also the main room in your house is just amazing, good job! And I love how u made a design pattern of your town map too, super cute!

Now for suggestions: I would say I think it would be a good idea to add some paths to your town. Also, in certain areas I'm not sure where to walk and I get a bit stuck because there are so many trees. Maybe having a clearing through the middle of those (or somewhere through them) with a path would help that. Especially if it was like a natureish type path with clovers or something like stepping stones, I think that would look really nice in your town. And lastly I think your town would be even more amazing with more bamboo, bushes, and PWP's. I know that you're nowhere near done decorating the town as u said in your original post, but I think it will turn out to be absolutely breathtaking if u do certain things. Keep up the good work girlie! x3

Also, if u would like to u can visit my dream town as well. My town is Clarity and my dream address is: 4100-5708-4913. Only if u want to though, if u don't want to then no worries at all!

Have a nice day, and good luck with your town! c:

 

[feminist]

Visiting your dream now, sorry I didn't get a chance to earlier! ^_^

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So I visited and I think your town is super cute so far! ^_^ I love all of the trees and nature by the plaza! Also the main room in your house is just amazing, good job! And I love how u made a design pattern of your town map too, super cute!

Now for suggestions: I would say I think it would be a good idea to add some paths to your town. Also, in certain areas I'm not sure where to walk and I get a bit stuck because there are so many trees. Maybe having a clearing through the middle of those (or somewhere through them) with a path would help that. Especially if it was like a natureish type path with clovers or something like stepping stones, I think that would look really nice in your town. And lastly I think your town would be even more amazing with more bamboo, bushes, and PWP's. I know that you're nowhere near done decorating the town as u said in your original post, but I think it will turn out to be absolutely breathtaking if u do certain things. Keep up the good work girlie! x3

Also, if u would like to u can visit my dream town as well. My town is Clarity and my dream address is: 4100-5708-4913. Only if u want to though, if u don't want to then no worries at all!

Have a nice day, and good luck with your town! c:

thank you for your feedback!
i am planning to one day have clover paths, but these obviously take lots of time, so it'll be a while until I get that together

also, I visited your dream address a couple of days ago I think when you made a thread about it! (it's very nice btw)

 

[Mayor Jasmine]

thank you for your feedback!
i am planning to one day have clover paths, but these obviously take lots of time, so it'll be a while until I get that together

also, I visited your dream address a couple of days ago I think when you made a thread about it! (it's very nice btw)

No problem, I hope it helps! ^_^
And thanks so much, my town is not complete yet, and although I have done a lot of work on it, there is still yet a lot more to be done! cx

Also, BUMP for u! <3