Trading Dream Towns

[Nightmares]

Hey, I was wondering if anyone would be interested in visiting my dream town, and in exchange I visit yours?

Mine is not complete yet, but I was looking for critique (yours doesn't have to be complete either!)

If you're interested, lmk ^^;


casual.kyle:
- First off, your town name is super cute
- your path pattern is nice, and I like how you put bushes in the centre, which I've never seen before
- shells on the slope to the beach was cool
- you have a good number of flowers, but their layout isn't too neat...if they were arranged into sections or rows of the same colour (or something), that'd be satisfying af
- more PWPs! I know it's hard to get requests, though, but public works projects would help make your town more interesting


shrekluvsme:
- Your paths are awesome
- Your flower placement / arrangement is good, and you've grouped them by colour, yaay
- The little park area in the top right corner is super cute
- your row of flower arches is really nice; may I add that you've used the same coloured roses to decorate around it too, omg, that makes me happy
- the way you've positioned trees around the paths is also good, as well as the PWPs - a lot of them have their own little sections, which is also cute
- Your bear (is he a character whose name idk or something? Or is he just a random bear? Hahaha, idfk) patterns are cute (can you tell i'm running out of adjectives to say), but I don't really understand their placement? I feel like they have a purpose but I'm missing it lmao


PacV:
- woww, your town has such a nice feel? I'm getting tropical vibes, idk... It feels so relaxed and quiet
- arrangement of tress, bushes, and bamboo is super cool
- I like your park area, it's noise
- you had a lot of open space, and you filled it well
- the skY THOUGH, SO PRETTY, I think that's why it feels kinda tropical, lmao

 

[casual.kyle]

Hey, I was wondering if anyone would be interested in visiting my dream town, and in exchange I visit yours?

Mine is not complete yet, but I was looking for critique (yours doesn't have to be complete either!)

If you're interested, lmk ^^;

I'd love to visit yours after school! My DA is in my signature.

 

[Nightmares]

I'd love to visit yours after school! My DA is in my signature.

Cool, sounds good! ^^ I'll visit in a minute
(Nice sig too, haha)

 

[ashubii]

I would love to visit your town once I build the dream suite~! I have the option and will do it when I get home today. I don't currently have a dream town, but you're welcome to visit the one in my signature. The town itself doesn't exist any longer, and hopefully the dream still works.

 

[Nightmares]

I would love to visit your town once I build the dream suite~! I have the option and will do it when I get home today. I don't currently have a dream town, but you're welcome to visit the one in my signature. The town itself doesn't exist any longer, and hopefully the dream still works.

Thanks!
And yeah, it looks interesting! I will do

 

[shrekluvsme]

I'll visit and offer some critique ^^! I would also like some as well mine is far from being done lol

 

[Nightmares]

I'll visit and offer some critique ^^! I would also like some as well mine is far from being done lol

Sounds good, I'll visit now Thanks!

 

[PacV]

I visit your town.
-I think the layout is good to such a good place to live.
-I like the way you put Gems with the flowers.
-Are you trying to make a theme?
-Don't hesitate to send to me your town when you complete it, i really want to see it.

My DA is in my signature and my Town is done. Thanks for visit.

 

[Drokmar]

I would love to visit the towns of some of the users on here! My DA is in my signature. You can take a look and tell me what you think! My house is a mess, I need to clean up the tree placement just a little bit and there're some stray patterns on the ground for moving villagers, but I'd still like some opinion on the overall direction you think I need to go to. I can't visit yours until a little later today, but I'll be sure to let you know my opinion after I do!

 

[Nightmares]

I visit your town.
-I think the layout is good to such a good place to live.
-I like the way you put Gems with the flowers.
-Are you trying to make a theme?
-Don't hesitate to send to me your town when you complete it, i really want to see it.

My DA is in my signature and my Town is done. Thanks for visit.

Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback ^^ I'm not sure about the theme tbh, rip

I would love to visit the towns of some of the users on here! My DA is in my signature. You can take a look and tell me what you think! My house is a mess, I need to clean up the tree placement just a little bit and there're some stray patterns on the ground for moving villagers, but I'd still like some opinion on the overall direction you think I need to go to. I can't visit yours until a little later today, but I'll be sure to let you know my opinion after I do!

Cool, I'll visit you after the guys above, thanks!

 

[shrekluvsme]

Here are my thoughts~

-Do you plan on putting path around the whole town o:? I think it would look nice around the villagers houses ^^
-I like the row of perfect pears near the top :3
-The area in front of town hall is really nice
-I think more pwp would be nice! You have a lot of open space under the river that would be really great for having a good handful of pwp! How much space you have is really making me envious tbh lol!

Also I like bts, too lol!

 

[Moonfish]

I just updated my DA, I would love to have visitors. I'm gonna have a dream of your town right now!

 

[Nightmares]

Here are my thoughts~

-Do you plan on putting path around the whole town o:? I think it would look nice around the villagers houses ^^
-I like the row of perfect pears near the top :3
-The area in front of town hall is really nice
-I think more pwp would be nice! You have a lot of open space under the river that would be really great for having a good handful of pwp! How much space you have is really making me envious tbh lol!

Also I like bts, too lol!

Pretty much, yeah, haha...although I'll have small areas without the water and stuff, I think
Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely be adding more PWPs! (Trying to get someone to request some like... :/)

I just updated my DA, I would love to have visitors. I'm gonna have a dream of your town right now!

Thanks, I'll do yours in a bit!

 

[shrekluvsme]

Have you tried the diving trick o:?

 

[Nightmares]

Have you tried the diving trick o:?

I haave, thanks...it's really boring though, haha
They always ask me how long I want my hair instead?? So annoying LMAO

- - - Post Merge - - -

Also, I missed what you said, oops
Yay for BTS, hahaha

 

[hamster]

-i really like your path
-the blossoms are a really nice touch
-although it's underdeveloped, i'm sensing a tropical theme
-your pwp placements are good. they are fitting and they're put in good spots, i love where you've put the fountain and how you've decorated around it
-the way you've placed the fruits and ores are interesting. i like it, especially the amethyst and the purple rose combo.
-i feel like some things are just dumped. especially near the train station and retail, i like the fruit baskets though and maybe you could do something more with them.
-i really like how you've put two of your villagers near the plaza, i woke up and they i saw them both running around and i found it really cute
-the clovers look really nice with your stone tablet and fountain, maybe you could get more and decorate them around other pwp's.
-more bamboo shoots would really help

anyway, my da is in my sig. i hope you enjoy it!

 

[casual.kyle]

Thanks for the review! I haven't landscaped my town at all yet except for the bushes and trees, so that's why my flowers are so... not very good. I'm trying to make some more hybrids so I can have some choices to go with, but my game is being stubborn and keeps giving me dumb non-hybrid flowers. I'm also really trying to get more PWP requests but nobody is asking for anything even after so much time spent doing the diving trick. I'll review your town once I get home in about 30 minutes - an hour!

 

[Drokmar]

@Nightmares

I just came back from your town, I loved the overall appearance! The flowers mixed with the gems was really clever! Maybe it's just my manga love, but I actually got a bit of a Tezuka vibe at your town (Tenma name, Phoebe and Roscoe villagers). My only complaints were all the loose things sitting around (can't help it) and the fact that the path doesn't go through the whole town.

Overall: 9/10!

 

[Nightmares]

-i really like your path
-the blossoms are a really nice touch
-although it's underdeveloped, i'm sensing a tropical theme
-your pwp placements are good. they are fitting and they're put in good spots, i love where you've put the fountain and how you've decorated around it
-the way you've placed the fruits and ores are interesting. i like it, especially the amethyst and the purple rose combo.
-i feel like some things are just dumped. especially near the train station and retail, i like the fruit baskets though and maybe you could do something more with them.
-i really like how you've put two of your villagers near the plaza, i woke up and they i saw them both running around and i found it really cute
-the clovers look really nice with your stone tablet and fountain, maybe you could get more and decorate them around other pwp's.
-more bamboo shoots would really help

anyway, my da is in my sig. i hope you enjoy it!

Thanks so much! And I'll visit you later

Thanks for the review! I haven't landscaped my town at all yet except for the bushes and trees, so that's why my flowers are so... not very good. I'm trying to make some more hybrids so I can have some choices to go with, but my game is being stubborn and keeps giving me dumb non-hybrid flowers. I'm also really trying to get more PWP requests but nobody is asking for anything even after so much time spent doing the diving trick. I'll review your town once I get home in about 30 minutes - an hour!

I have the hybrid and PWP problem too, lmaoo
rip us
Ty!

@Nightmares

I just came back from your town, I loved the overall appearance! The flowers mixed with the gems was really clever! Maybe it's just my manga love, but I actually got a bit of a Tezuka vibe at your town (Tenma name, Phoebe and Roscoe villagers). My only complaints were all the loose things sitting around (can't help it) and the fact that the path doesn't go through the whole town.

Overall: 9/10!

Thanks so much! I'm glad my town isn't too bad, hahaha
Will definitely clean up, though, oops...

 

[casual.kyle]

Ok I visited your town

- Right away, holy crap look at those patterns
- I love the bushes and trees above the plaza. I think they'll look really good once they grow!
- Putting the gems next to the flowers is genius. It looks so good!
- At Tenma's house: Love the blue roses, but I don't like how they cut off the water design
- Tenma's Gracie room looks a lil bit cluttered with pictures but I understand your struggle. The series only comes with 1 2x1 table. Maybe move the pictures to a different room?
- The Sloppy room looks fine
- Your golden room made my heart skip a beat when the only thing I saw was a giant resetti xD
- I can tell that the upstairs is a WIP but it has some sick music choice.
- I just saw your lighthouse and I really like its placement. Also SO MANY JACOBS LADDERS!
- I love the huge cluster of villagers to the right of your plaza. It feels like a little neighborhood!
- Your fountain, streetlight, and perfect pears all look really nice
- The area in front of your town hall looks amazing
- The whole upper half of your town looks fine actually

Overall, my biggest problem with your town is the inconsistency with paths on the lower half of your town and all of the things on the ground everywhere, but your town has tons of potential, and what looks good looks REALLY GOOD.